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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meriyaar

OMG DAYA!!  
OMG Meri Yaar! You're excitement is contagiousLOL
 How have you been?
I've been good lol but we covered that in pms already...
I like seriously love you!!!!
And I'm like seriously flatteredEmbarrassedTongue
Sooo happy you posted another story!
I am happy you are happy...! 
This is beyond AMAZING! love it, it's so interesting and has me fully hooked!
Thank you, and yep so i've heard you're hooked and totally love that its a different story. I am glad you do...and of course will UD soon :)  Thank you for reading and commenting and all the support !
Update soon
take care
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twinkle-star

Hi DayaHug
WOOOWWW...You come back again with a n interesting story...How can I forget that little girl Sara!!!!!...She acted really superb in Deiva Thirumagal MovieDay DreamingDay Dreaming...I love her sooo much.She is sooo cuteDay Dreaming...Perfect selection DayaThumbs Up...WowDay Dreaming..What an introductionDay Dreaming.Your Opening was really fantasticDay DreamingDay Dreaming..I loved Jagdap,Pakhi ki charactersDay DreamingDay Dreaming...Its really Different And interesting story DayaDay DreamingDay Dreaming...I love Naku's cute daughter ShrishtiDay Dreaming...Your Dialogues were really niceDay Dreaming..I..Enjoyed readingDay Dreaming...So shrushti is Dutta's daughterWinkWink...Can't wait now...Its a suspense updateDay Dreaming...Please update soon dearEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...You're sooo sweetHug...Thank you sooo much for your Awesome update dear...HugHugHug...I'm sooo happy...Thank you... Thank you ..Thank youHugHug
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Hiya Lalli! Yep I'm back. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Glad to hear you love the story despite that it has no resemblance to LTL. I personally love Jagtap's character and Pakhi i thought I'd throw in for bonus since she didn't exist really in LTL. Srishti's character is fun to write. She's a kid so for her things aren't complicated she just lives..and i try to make her personality resemble Dutta a bit so I have fun...
Lalli, its not much of a suspense ending but I've been known to leave cliffhanger endings LOLLOL for UDs so i guess its all in your perspectiveTongue I will UD soon... Thank you for your support..! Always much appreciated :) 

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by uwith

hi daya
its great to have you back...our requests brought you backSmile
 
read the prologue & chapter ...awesome start ...naku has a child from dutta...he is aware now...its very interesting how naku will react to it...pls continue & enjoyed reading .regards uvi

Hey Uvi, thank you for the welcome back. Yep I've had pms and reminders that ppl would like me to write again...and since i needed a little break and something to get ideas a flowing I thought why not. Glad to see that so many still around and so many of you here to support my writing. 

Good to hear you liked the start...i will continue soon. 
Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FASSBEN


HI Daya

Have I read this right daya you are back with a new SS I 'm so glad thank you. The Prologue and the first part was very good so Naku Is a mother and she Is living with jagtap and pakki are caring loving them both. Dutta and Baji are Investigators Dutta see the file of the case and see It's Naku and she has a child Dutta tells baji she might be his. Pls continue can't wait for the next part

Take care now


Hey Fassbender! 

Yep, I am back indeedy that too with a SS. Thank you for the welcome back wishes :) 
Glad to hear your like the intro and first part. Yep, as i read all your comments i realize how much i managed to shove into the beginningLOL but yep you've written the gist of it...so the face-to-face reunion is left and what happens from there...hope you'll continue to like it :) 

Thank you for all the support ! 

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishwish

Brilliant start!!!!!
will b back soon Embarrassed
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Daya!!!

Aish!!! 

HugzzzHug
*Hugs back* 

Good to see you! 

Okay somebody told me, you left the forum or something'..is it? Here I can see a brand new SS, and still  wondering about your stay on the forum'.height of stupidity.LOL 

Lol i did leave. Well actually I was always here in my ghostly presence. No one knew when I was here and when I wasn't but now I'm back back...with an SS...short one though then I'll be M.I.A againLOL 
Anyways, lets come to the SS. Interesting, in fact intriguing is the word. I'm absolutely in love with the fact that the concept of "reviving old flames" this time has a flake of suspense. So, full marks on conceptualizationClap
Thank you! Lol personally I love a suspense stories...and thought why not go for one with them...
I don't know, how you'd planned your story and whether this whole anonymous messenger element will be a parallel plot, a sub plot, or just a cupid'.whatever, it certainly garners attention for your write up, and I'm quite sure however it shapes up, it's not getting an abrupt ending (always have been more confident about the ff writers than the cvsLOL).
Its a secondary plot. One that will be the reason for the reunion and events surrounding it but its a secondary focus..their relationships is the main focus still...I just wove in a little suspense to make it interesting...I'm going to try not to make an abrupt stopLOL Since its a short one I think it'll shape up fine.
The whole naku jagtap bond is just so heart warming. As a character I've always been very fond of Jagtap. Talking about this, I would like to mention one more thing that I quite liked, that though this SS has nothing to do with the screened show, still the characters shares the bond quite similar to the show, like naku and jagtap, or dutta and baaji. I know once declared that the SS and the show holds no similarity the expectation to get the equations between characters same as show is unfair to you, and I should be prepared to witness something totally oppposite, for instance dutta may not be at loggers head with jagtap, and in fact I'm looking forward to such novel developments. And I quiet liked the fact that nakusha has got adoptive parents (I guess that's the correct termLOL)''.it's easy to explain their absolutely okay approach on nakusha being an unmarried mother'.and I loved the firm tone of jagtap while mentioning it to baaji'the man clearly doesn't wants any sympathy for nakusha, or ashamed of her single mother status.
Yes, the story bears no resemblance but I wanted some of the key relationships. My reason for using Jagtap and Pakhi instead of Babi and Ganapat is because I found it was easier to work with. Jagtap had been a understanding soul in whereas there was too much baggage with the other twoLOL since I am trying to keep some of the main aspects of the characters and their relationships i just figured Jagtap suited the role. Pakhi i threw in there as bonus...i wanted to write about the woman who ruled Jagtap's heart ...Big smile You know, I'm glad to hear you caught onto Jagtap's tone when telling baaji about Naku's marital status. He doesn't want people to judge her and is protective of her. 
Humm'.. So,Mr. patil is a man of flings impressive,  and a detective, which means intelligentShocked now I can say this SS has nothing to do with the showLOL.ROFL  I concur !  haha. Just kidding, you know I liked the concept, well daya I must compliment you for all those work moments of baaji, (the way he was observing the surroundings, for example) and dutta ,though he hasn't started working yet and whatever work he has done yet, no doubt consists brilliant calculation, but still it's more of *ahem ahem* personalBlushingLOL'
Thank you. Of course since ther ex military and covert ops specialist...they need to show their worth with their actions. Dutta, you will see more of his work strategies but like you said this time it comes with a distraction he may even falter on his workLOL
Seriously, you have hooked me up like anything'..and what I find amazing is the pace of the story, it's gonna be short, so everything has to be point blank,Wink there's only this one chapter dedicated to the establishment of the story, charcterters and their past (I suppose)..still it never came to be as a rushed chapter'..it is so steady and has a constant flow..I loved this quality the most.
I'm glad you thought so. I hoped it wasn't too fast or it didn't get confusing. Since its a short story...it had to be point blank. The past won't be in details per say but it'll come up again here and there...to explain things as we go. I guess lets see how this goes. I not only have to think about rekindling an  old flame but i also have to think about the relationship btwn a little girl and Dutta...and i think i'm going to make that one more relaxed and enjoyable. 

Oh! Daya do update soon, ''''..I'm eagerly waiting.

Okie dokie smokie. Will doBig smile

P.S. I promise I won't force you to make this SS longer.LOL

Good to knowLOL

P.P.S ''..Is the guy sending her the letters is going have a name of Sudershan, suresh, worst deegu'more than worst any of shristi's playschool mateLOL

LOL nope...if i use common names you'll know who it is before i even build it up to the final exploit...but hey i am sick and tired of those names ! haha 


Anyway Aish, thank you for reading and commenting. Means a lot. Loved reading your thoughts. 

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mirage123

hi daya
you are back with a bangSmile..i 'm also thrilled like everyone...missed you
awesome writer is back & fab prologue & story
 
naku is single mom with daughter...good support in jagtap & pakhi...dutta will be back in her life for better ...continue it soon
 
thanxs for come backSmilewith beautiful story


Hi Mirage,

Lol yupperz me back...with a SS! Thank you for the warm and enthusiastic welcome back. I'm glad to be back to give my readers a little treat. 

Yep single mom with a good support system but what will that matter when one man could make her turn to mush? LOL We'll see what happens between the sizzling chemistry the two have always shared and the little girl in the middle who'll be important to decisions on their relationship...

thank you for reading and commenting. 


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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nakusha

Hi daya

Hey Nakusha! Yep me back, it's trueLOL

..Enjoyed reading the new story the premise is too good..Naku is receiving letters but it sounds more like somebody is stalking at her. My fav character of jagtap is there..You did include jagtap in your previous ff but for pakhi it's a new character & u weaved it well

Glad you enjoyed it ! Thank you. I thought Pakhi's character would be a nice little bonus in the SS. Since  Iwasn't following much about LTL except the characters I thought why not. Glad you liked the addition. 

Naku has cute daughterSmilebaji gave her a cute name curly locks & he takes up the case..I was waiting for dutta's entry & he is bajis partner in crime I mean detectionLOL..Dutta had flings before but it seems he fell of naku & it's been work & work after she left..Now he has chance to amend the wrong he did & make up with naku & curly lock

Yeah, I enjoy writing Srishti's bits. Curly Locks is a name someone used on my once and i found it rather amusing. Of course, it wasn't a nickname for me just a comment in passing but i remembered it when I thought about this little girl's character and thought hey why not! 

Yep Duji together forever LOLLOL haha i couldn't separate them. I love them both. You know I've been thinking about something. I know this story is short and if I  know you all well, once i end this SS i am going to get a 'plz write more' comment. And though I usually write on Dutta and Naku I've been considering doing a spin off from this specific SS and giving Baaji his own love story. Suspense and all as well :P  After this one. I dunno for sure yet. I guess I will wait and see :P 

Who is this stalker? Ud soon can't wait

Lol you'll have to wait and seeWink

Thanks for reading and commenting Nakusha! 

 

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dilse14

hi daya
awesome udSmile
i 'm happpy to see you back...its a awesome suprise...
the prologue & the chapter is too good
all the character jagtap & pakhi baaji are awesome
dutta & naku have a cute girl curly lock..
i 'm waiting for next chapter ..pls pls ud soon
 

Hey Dilse, 
Thank you for reading and commenting. It's good to see you too and I'm happy to be back. 
Glad you're liking the story. I'll UD soon :) 

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