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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati2008

Hi Daya,
 
Its awesome. The confession part was the best, with Baaji commenting in between, just loved it. I really like the way you potrayed the rescue. No over dramatisation just pure brain work. Ending was good too happy family.You are very good writer. Keep writing and I am excited for the sequel. Start soon.

Hey Dibya,

Thank you so much for liking. Lol I had a little fun writing Baaji's interruptions...am glad you enjoyed the confession. Oh yes writing that rescue scene was tough...it shaped up as i went had no idea what i was going to do until i wrote it ...glad you liked that as well...yes i like to play down on the dramaLOL Thank you for the nice compliments...i am glad you like my writing. Season 2 coming soon...stay tuned...take care now...phir milenge chalte chalte 

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by twinkle-star

Hi DayaHug

Wow...Wonderful update & awesome ending dear...enjoyed reading a lot...Thank you so much Daya...It's a thriller +Romantic update...You mixed them together...Loved Dutta's confession dear...Its totally brilliant...Finally he said those words to Naku...Totally awesome...baaji also too cute...You clearly organized all the characters together...Well-done  Daya...Finally the villain is that psycho Tiwari...He totally behaved like a crazy...I  HATE him...You kept the suspense till the last update dear... Wonderful Daya Dutta saving Naku part was totally awesome...Loved it...Your writing is wonderful dear...Till start to end, Your update had  the essence dear...Awe finally Dutta ,Naku,Shrishti  live happily together with their new puppy..Totally mind blowing update dear...Enjoyed a lot...Start to end its fantastic ...Hope you'll come back with a new story...Please give another wonderful story to us dear...Eagerly waiting for your new thread dear...Thanks a lot...Hug...

Hi Lalli, thanks for all the support, for reading and commenting too.  Glad to hear you enjoyed the mix! Trust me have those characters sprouted on the spot..but making them all fit and come when they were needed only was the hard part...its good to hear that they came together well...yup our culprit now behind bars! yay! he was the least likely suspect so yes i kept him off the lines and only mentioned him here and there...but this next season you'll find that you're back to the same suspect list should be fun to see who you all point at this time...or if there is anyone to even point atLOL Thank you so much for the lovely remarks on my writing...i'm glad you like it! now season 2 coming soon so stay tuned..lol...phir milenge chalte chalte...

              

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sona89

Hi daya
awesome SS..dutta & team cracked the case...monster got caught...dutta & naku awesome couple again with their sweet daughter...brilliant work...missing it already...thanxs for assurance for starting a new SS...big thanxsSmile
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Hi Sona, 

thank you so much for reading and commenting. Your support means a lot. Glad you liked the SS. Hope to see you around for season 2 as well Wink Take care, phir milenge chalte chalte

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by uwith

hi daya thanxs for SSSmile...awesome story...d-n ...curly locks living happily ever after...great ! you will start a new SS ...waiting ...addicted to ur writing...regards uvi
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Hi Uvi,

I'm flattered to hear you're addicted to my writing. Thank you for the compliment! And thank you for reading, commenting and supporting always. Will be back soon  with season 2...so will see you then? Take care. Phir milenge chalte chalte

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mirage123

hi daya
thanxs for fab ss...liked dutta team solving skill...luv shristi, naku ,puppy..dutta.happy forever..pls start fresh SS soonSmile
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Glad to hear you liked the SS.  All is well that ends well. We have our happily ever after for Dutta so thought I'd give our Baaji dearest one as well...thanks for reading and commenting. It's greatly appreciated. Take Care. Ciao

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zeest_14

Hi daya 
Brilliant work and amazing style of writing .Wat a tutti frutti u present ,emotions, rumance ,some action,suspence all we enjoy.You sort out tasha's personal life case as well as professional one.Good job.Thumbs Up

Hello There! I do believe this is the first time I'm seeing you here, so my warm welcome! Thank you for reading my work and liking it. I am flattered to hear you're appreciation of my work. Thank you for the lovely feedback! Take care. Phir milenge chalte chalte. 

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
SAFE BY HIS SIDE


|| P R O M O ||

She'd been working too much. She knew it and it's not like she didn't have a choice. She did. But she'd been trying to keep her mind distracted. Keep it on work and not on that nightmare that she'd had frequently over the past seven years. 

But her body was finally giving out. Her eyes closed of their own accord. She could feel the fatigue seeping to her bones and taking its toll on her. Regardless she tried to fight it off. She didn't want to close her eyes. Especially, not in her office where anyone could walk in. What if she dozed off and had that nightmare? Then she'd wake up scared, confused, sweating, and talking to herself. Questioning that day again and again, she'd overwork her brain trying to find a logical answer. And as always would come up empty handed. 

She didn't need Mr. or Mrs. Mehta seeing her in such a state nor did she want anyone else seeing her. They all already thought she needed to take time off work. She'd do well to avoid it. She needed her job, needed to work. It's what grounded her. She forced her tired eyes open and tried to do some paperwork. 

It was wasted effort. Her mind brought back memories of that nightmare she'd been having. The one of that day, seven years ago, that has left a big question mark on her sanity. Had she imagined that body? Was she crazy? No, she thought but her certainty wavered. Crazy people didn't admit to the insanity, did they? 

She didn't realize it but her eyes shut tight and she'd fallen asleep. The nightmare attacked immediately. She was dressed in her usual work attire, black dress pants and a simple blouse. Her heels click-clacked on the ground. The lights were dim and the corridor seemed to freakishly narrow as she moved forward. She opened a door and there was blood everywhere. Her eyes followed the pool of blood to a body. A woman's battered body. She didn't look again. She opened her mouth to scream but it got stuck. She felt a cold chill surround her and saw danger signs flashing red. On instinct she tried to run but she couldn't. Something held her back and she was  being dragged into utter darkness. She felt helpless and scared and small. She was alone, like always battling her way through the cruelties of life. 

Voices filled her head, telling her she's crazy, that she's lost her mind and this is all in her imagination. Then she saw blood splashing everywhere. Someone was there, a dark silhouette filled the space. She opened her mouth to scream but still she couldn't. Her father stood before her holding a gun to himself. "It's the only way to end the madness" his voice boomed loudly. The gun fired. More blood splatter. His body fell limp to the ground. 

Images meshed and the lifeless body of that woman was suddenly there too. She wanted to leave. She needed to leave and tell somebody. She needed to call the cops but something was pulling her back. She cried out. She wanted it to stop. She was scared. 

Then condescending voices and  hurtful words tortured her. 

'You're crazy'

'Must be just like her father'

'Face it, Nerd, there is nothing you bring to the table other than good grades'

'Stick to your fellow geeks, they're more you're type'

'Darling, I picked you so you do the work and I get the benefits of good grades. I know your smart enough to know that you just don't have the looks to roll with us cool kids. There is nothing special about you. Trust me that 'gift' of intelligence isn't an asset.'

'You're seeing things. You need to get  help before you become your father'

'It's over between us. Dating a crazy woman would damage the Hotel's reputation. Leave.'
  
'You're crazy'

'Nobody will ever like you'

'You're insane'

'No one cares for you'

'Not worth it'

'Alone for life'

"No" Nisha shouted.  "No. Stop!" she told the voices, trying to banish them. "I don't care what you think. I don't need anyone. I am not crazy. Stop!" 

Blood splattered everywhere again. Her father pulled the trigger. His lifeless body fell and faded away. More blood pooled in a room, a woman lay there. Another lifeless body. Nisha felt her fear, the danger, and the cold skyrocket. There was another voice. She screamed, wanting out. 

"Smarty!" she knew that voice but she wanted it to stop. She didn't want to hear anymore.

"Nisha, wake up. You're having a nightmare" the voice continued. 

Her urge to scream halted. God, this voice was blessedly soothing, she thought.

"C'mon, Nisha, wake up. It's just a bad dream. Come back to me, Smarty" she felt warm, strong, gentle hands shaking her and touching her shoulders then her cheeks.  

"Dammit, Smarty, wake up. C'mon, open your eyes"  the voice urged, there was deep concern lining that familiar voice. 

"Nisha?...Smarty" she heard. Smarty? she wondered and stirred. The calming hands held her safely and firmly. "NISHA!" the voice said sternly. Baaji? Her eyes flew open. Her breathing came in pants and she startled to a sitting position. She blinked and looked at Baaji whose concerned gaze fixed on her. 




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