Hi daya
Loved the ud ...will be back with comment
Hi daya
Loved the ud ...will be back with comment
hi daya
awesome ud...nisha is in a hotel & mystery is unfolding...dutta & naku are sweet...continue soon😊
Originally posted by: meriyaarHaha, I'm glad... your story makes me leave these comments 😊All is good thank you, some stress with exams soonOh, wish you all the best with your exams!How about you?I am good. Keeping busy. Been doing a lot of reorganizing in my room...and through some of my still packed away clothes ...i figured since I haven't used those clothes since I moved in then maybe i don't need them. figured may as well donate them...so have them set in a bag..😆 I'd like to clean my basement and main floor top to bottom but with the family I live with I know it'd be a wasted effort lol so I ended up just going through my own things...It's always good to really get in depth with the character, makes the readers engage.I like your style, it's easy to read :)Thank you. I'm glad you find it easy to read. Sometimes I feel like I jumble things up with too much going on...its hard to keep track...but I do prefer to have backgrounds for all my characters...😊Anyway take care ! Lots of love and hugs. Again, all the best with exams...see you!
Originally posted by: -daya-
Hi curly locks
The wait was too long ...finally the ud...so Bajai& nisha put up a great act searching for a venue...the feeling of nisha on prospect of meeting her ex...she was really treated bad...the scar of which haven't healed...baji is extraordinary in putting her at ease...he is caring &doesn't want to rush into things
Maya has feeling ...tarak is the only person she can count on...girl should no she stand chance coz its only professional problem😆 ...thankfully doesn't have a girlfriend
Dutta & naku are doing fine...naku is learning trick or two abt profession...
Liked the part & this murder mystery with missing characters ...suspicion & guess ...is what I can think of...pls ud soon😊
Hi Daya🤗
Aweee Such a mind blowing update dear...Enjoyed it to the core...Totally mind blowing...Fabulous job dear...Soo sweet of you...Loved Nisha& baji's part to the core...Awee baaji's gently manners took Nisha's heart away...They are a sparkling couple...Truly made for each other..They have a wonderful chemistry between them...Baaji wants a firm relationship with nisha...But Nisha's wounded heart needs more time for cure...Hope she overcome from her bitter past soon...OMG Poor Nisha...That evil Samir saw her...But Thank god baji has come...Loved the way Baaji talked with samir...Awee Cutie pie...Samir has stunned by baaji's wedding announcement..Nisha blushing a lot...Loved baaji & Nisha's close moment at the elevator..Nisha almost let baaji to kiss her...She tried to stay away from Baaji...But inside her heart she wants Baaji's love badly...She hide her feelings inside a strong wall.Hope baaji will break her stone wall soon...Loved baaji's sweet talk with her..No one didn't talk sweetly with her except her mom & baaji..Poor Nisha...This girl deserves more love...Tarak Mehta worried about Maya...Yes Poor girl she couldn't identify the attacker..Hope her memory back soon...Waiting for their love story...Hope Tarak realize his love for Maya...I think their relationship is more than profession...Loved Dutta & naku's sweet moments..Its really treat to read their sweet parts...Naku is improving her detective skills...Clever woman..Loved their convo... waiting to know the culprit...Can't able to make any guess...Your story base is so strong...Love this suspense thriller soo much dear...Hats off to you...Eagerly waiting for the next update...Please update soon...can't wait now...please...do you buy a new lappy dear?...please buy it sooon..Eagerly waiting for the next part...soo sweet of you..Lots of hugs from Lalli Baby🤗
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