FF: Point Blank Protector (TaSha) | FF: Safe By His Side (Baaji) - Page 33

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi curly locks

Hey Nakusha!

After the exciting prologue...most awaited first chapter out...verdict is smashing hit...😊

Thanks for such a verdict! 😳😃

It starts with nisha a girl who has been consider nerd all her life ...it's a compliment now proven fact...but sadly she was bullied...her past  has been terrible

Yep, she's had a hard time of it. Her intelligence was something people didn't like. Especially guys. It threatened others so she was simply made an outcast instead. Just stinks eh! 

Her father committed suicide...she is confused abt her own sanity...situation isn't helping it...was it a nightmare or actually she saw a body...Ayesha was standing very much alive

Yep her father's death impacts her as does his mental illness issue..her questioning her own sanity is mainly because she is starting to overwhelm herself..her brain is overworking...overthinking..and she really doesn't know what to make of anything going on...esp when Ayesha shows up alive...it makes her wonder what was going on...and her only explanation was that she's going crazy...

Baji is her knight in shining armor...he wants to help her...there is a mystery element...my grey cells are working 😆

Oh most definitely he is the knight in shining armor ready to come and rescue the damsel in distress...their personalities will make their romance interesting to write...since she's shy and stands back and he's out there and very easy going and acceptive of things

Loved the description the way nisha is visualizing thing...it was graphic...I felt I was watching it...awesome writing skill...I m glad u show cased  it ...clap from my end...ud soon 👏

The description of her nightmare and feelings seem to be a hit. I am so glad. Thank you! For all the support! Will try to UD soon...am working on the UD...since I have three pairs to work in the UD's may be long but it'll cover everyone properly ...take care

Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome start...feeling bad for nisha...poor girl...hurt and lonely her whole life...dont worry girl you are not crazy...those who dnt believe u are...but our Baaji and team are going to believe you...i like team understood something fishy in the situation...now Baaji will find out the truth...I am liking this Maya...she is herself hurt but still concerned about Nisha...nice girl...poor Naku want to help Nisha but Nisha is running away...hope Nisha understand soon...she can share her feelings with friends...Daya i want Baaji to beat Nisha's ex black and blue...how dare he treated her like that...he was supposed to marry her and he called her crazy and asked her to leave so rudely...Nisha is better off without him...brilliant story...update soon...

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi daya

awesome SS start and UD

nisha had a very sad past

she doubts herself

something wrong somewhere

baji & dutta help her

pls ud ...i liked it lot😊

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Awesome first chapter, Daya.👏

The Romantic Thriller continues👍🏼

Many questions and possibilities running in my thoughts...

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

I,Me&Myself... is here. on second thoughts.roarrr!
hi mate , me back, read it a while a  ago.. hummhh..

BHAOOO! Cheers *gulp gulp* ...don't glare...it's just water...that's why i didn't offer you any😛

SBHS ~ Chapter 1
Tell you what ,it's been quite sometime  since I delved into the world of investigative fiction..

Lol this miniseries is my first attempt at it...so I'm glad its working out so far. 
This story , from what I read in the first chapter, followed by the prologue has all the elements of , murder, mystery, suspense and love of course..

mmm-hmmm 😆 it is indeed romantic suspense 

Immediately engaging bits,for me are the familiar  names I know , Dutta/Baji/ Naku/jagtapdada..

Yes, keeping some of my fav cast for this worked well...I enjoy writing them my own way...
Then ,for me come the names of other characters who I have  met for the first time.. so to get to know them and their significance in the story , holds interest for me..

I gave you a crash course on them😆 

maybe I should add a cast list on the first page...
Baji as the PI..  is befitting as it, brings to  fore front, his keen eye, quick, matter of fact mannerism ,ready to go persona.. but he with all this, also is a sensitive, listener which will help him to build on what he feels for Nisha.

Oh they've started the base for the building in the first ss...but now its working the details...they are opposites in personality but their views and acceptance of each other will work wonders for them...of course Nisha will have the harder time getting there...but I'm sure baaji can charm her
Daya ,it was indeed a treat to read  your narration of nisha's panic attack it felt totally credible ,excellently written.

Thank you thank you *bows* it has turned out to be a big hit...so must be good. I am glad really! 
Some name is revealed, Ayesha, whose body Nisha does or does not see ?Who the hell knows? No one yet 😆 suspense.. and it does not seem easily solved.. so the wait and watch approach..

Yes m'aam the story is just beginning :P 
But people around her are supportive.. they have bought her account of her rather  incredible story.. but more questions for both Nisha and us..  the dead body  has come alive? 

They are PI's they know when something seems fishy and they know Nisha from working with her...though she's reserved and smart she hadn't indicated once she was crazy..and though its true sometimes you can't tell they give her the benefit of doubt...
This is turning out to be quite a read pappy.. please continue, writing this fantastically penned SS.. waiting now for chap~2  .. cheers mate.. much love hammie. 

I'm glad you are liking it Hammie...thank you for your great feedback...see ya!