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Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 9)

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 9:39am | IP Logged
that was just beautiful...superbly written..
heart wrenching OS...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Sad and bittersweet. I'm still reeling from it!

I understand why Arnav didn't say anything...but I don't understand as well. Will Khushi be able to lead a happy life with another man? Maybe, in time.

I agree with your sentiments too, I hate Devdas!

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged
its a beauuutiful os...
it made me tear out...
its amazingly written yar...awesome work...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
IT MADE ME VERY SAD..Cry
AGAIN THE PAIN OF WATCHING DEVDAS IS BACK..

WELL IT WAS A NICE OS..
VERY DEEP TOO

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
That was great it was different

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
That was a heart-breakingly beautiful story, AT. Or was it a beautifully heartbreaking story? Whatever it is, there is so much beauty and heart break in the story.

I loved the way you used flowers to link the present with the past and the future. The peony is a particularly favourite flower of mine.

It is a bit strange ot think of Arnav as a Devdas type figure!

Like yourself I have always despised Devdas for being a weak, ineffectual, self absorbed man- more in love with himself being in love rather than loving someone in the true sense of the the word.

I am glad that your Arnav has redeemed himself to some extent with the offering of the peony. He will be alright, but will Khushi? I wonder.

Superb story, AT!

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 6:08am | IP Logged
wow...
i so loved it...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this was so beautiful...


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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
*Sigh*

What do I say for this OS Rae ?
Cause I really cannot find words to describe how I feel.. Their love in this story, is just so unique, maybe in an AU they might be together, maybe not.. But their love is timeless and shall always be there wouldn't it ?

The way you've brought the symbolisms with the flowers.. I loved it.. The young carefree days, to now.. *sigh* What a transition it has brought about in both.. And just when Arnav says " Aami tomaake bhaalo-baashi" I dont think Id  ever find the right word to describe what I felt then !

Another amazing OS Rae ! Thank you so much for sharing them always !

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