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Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 7)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Sad...

But written so beautifully!!
Reading your work for the first time.. and need I say that YOU ARE AMAING...!!!!

Loved it.. the bengali words and the significance of Marigold and Peony..
never thought of the same in that way..!! Beautiful!!

He confessed his heart out.. but was terribly late I guess!

And she's married to someone else..! Unhappy

Well the ending was just beautiful..
It was a good read ji!

Thank You!

Love
J

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Aaand also have to add this - his promise to gift her a flower whenever she wears a saree. It's such a romantic notion, yet in light of everything else might seem insignificant or flippant. But right to the end he fulfils his promise, no matter how small, and found her the perfect flower...it makes me soften towards him, even though I could never wholeheartedly forgive him for ruining them both in the beginning. It's bittersweet and absolutely poetic, I think.

Edited by -doe-eyes- - 26 June 2013 at 10:24pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Sob sob...sad but awsome os!

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
hey! beautiful os...though it was heartbreaking :(
i wish arnav had said those three magical words before then khushi could have been his...whats the point in confessing his love now when she's married...it will just  open the wounds rather than healing them. yes, arnav is self centered and khushi, you well said. i hope she stays happy always...
well, khushi being married came as a bomb at the end when i thought of a happy ending Embarrassed
anyways, loved it! Smile

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:16am | IP Logged
A heartbreaking story filled with beautiful and poignant memories and moments.
It was bittersweet and I loved how the two flowers symbolised two new beginnings.

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Beautiful Os! :)

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged
I'm not sure i can articulate what I thought about this so ill keep it basic. It was really really good and I was lost in the story and the scenes you had created. It was beautiful and heartbreaking.

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 10:05am | IP Logged
This was a beautiful piece of writing :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It had that cute love story and yet the ending brought tears to my eyes. If only Arnav had spoken that day, If only... But the sad part is that in real life, there are many Arnavs who hold back. It was a realistic story. Very relatable.
 
Great job :) I love your writing :)

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