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Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 4)

richa1792 Senior Member
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:06am | IP Logged
This piece of your writing is so heartbreaking and yet so beautiful in its simplicity.
The way you have weaved the words, I cannot find a suitable adjective to describe the feeling.

I am a marwari, and I don't know anything about Bengali culture, but after reading this, I know that its beautiful.

Your characters seemed so real.
Arnav loves Khushi, but he is weak.
Weak to accept his love for her, weak to give their love a name.
And when he realizes his folly, it's too late.

And Khushi is the complete opposite of Arnav.
She has been strong throughout.
She was the one who asked him to tell her that he loved her, who came to his room late at night, not caring about the society, but only for the love that she knew blossomed in both their hearts.

But we humans, fail in front of Fate.
No matter how much we want a different outcome, some things are just written in the stars.

I loved the bit with the flowers.
Its surprising, how little things, like flowers, can become so significant that they can define our whole life.

Arnav will have to spend the rest of his life with what ifs.
And Khushi will always rue the fact that her first love was unrequited. I say first, because i really want her to find happiness with her husband,

But the process of healing has started.
And no matter how long it takes, wounds do heal.
That is the way of life.

Amazing update.

Richa.

P.S. I am adding you as a buddy, if you take requests. I'd love to get a future notifications of your updates.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
A very beautiful and heart touching story.
A love lost due to one's own selfish thoughts.
The flashbacks were so beautiful with Arnav giving her a flower, the thrill, nervousness everything so palpable but as it progressed the harsh realities which broke them apart came in picture making me cry for the love lost.
Loved the symbolism used.
It's such a beautiful piece Rae.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
awesome dear:)

great os  :)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged

That was a hell of an OS! One of the most beautiful things I've read in this website! Loved every single word written <3

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Very heartbreaking but the same time quite real too. As it's not every story has a happy ending n not every couple ended up with each other.
You redefined Arnav's character here. So opposite to the usual we are used to. Loved the flower connection here  specially the end...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Beautiful update ...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Beautifully done, Rae! :) Loved reading your work after quite a long time. Not a frequent visitor here anymore. Brilliant! :) Keep writing! 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
beautiful..well written...

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