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Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 4)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
A very beautiful and heart touching story.
A love lost due to one's own selfish thoughts.
The flashbacks were so beautiful with Arnav giving her a flower, the thrill, nervousness everything so palpable but as it progressed the harsh realities which broke them apart came in picture making me cry for the love lost.
Loved the symbolism used.
It's such a beautiful piece Rae.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
awesome dear:)

great os  :)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged

That was a hell of an OS! One of the most beautiful things I've read in this website! Loved every single word written <3

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Very heartbreaking but the same time quite real too. As it's not every story has a happy ending n not every couple ended up with each other.
You redefined Arnav's character here. So opposite to the usual we are used to. Loved the flower connection here  specially the end...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Beautiful update ...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Beautifully done, Rae! :) Loved reading your work after quite a long time. Not a frequent visitor here anymore. Brilliant! :) Keep writing! 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
beautiful..well written...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Hi Rae
 
It is difficult to describe exactly what I feel of this piece because it pains me that at the end of it all Arnav and Khushi are not together, I am truely hopeless as throughout the confession I was praying that she didn't go through with the wedding but alas my romanticism does not reflect the reality of life.
 
The young Khushi had a fairytale romance, but the married woman is living in reality, and so the whole tale is a bittersweet symphony. Bitersweet because Arnav realises his love too late and Khushi misses out on her true love because of that. Also like any classical symphony worth its weight  will depict a rise and fall in emotions, and within a minutes guide you through an emotional journey, sometimes romantic and sometimes turbulant. And this love story has that in abundance.
 
I'm a sucker for the perfect ending but reality doesn't always hold that and my heart cries at the thought of such pure and innocent love being lost due to the thoughts of what society may say, I look forward to the day when our society stops dictating every facet of our lives, and we live for what makes us happy, not for our neighbous or relatives, but us.
 
Beautiful story, even if the ending has left a sad mark!
 
Manreet :)


Edited by manreet_gill - 26 June 2013 at 3:40am

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