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Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 3)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelTeen

Originally posted by msin

It's  written very well I liked it..

But devdas in its place was a classic.. It depicted childhood love.. Inability to make decision at a young age.. It happened in 1930 when devdas was dependent on his father he could not against him and so he  spurned paro... To regret later..
Do not judge the srk movie devdas... With the alterations it gave a very unfair picture to devdas..neither here nor there..

Thank You for your comment! :)

Glad you liked it! :)

But I would like to make clear that this is not based on Bhansali's Devdas, but on the concept itself. I am not a fan of a character as weak and as selfish as Devdas, hence.
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Even I did not like devdas... But in retrospect I feel every male cannot be an alpha male..there are weak  guys in our world..and selfish , weak or not they can fall in love...if he had not fallen in love with paro.. Still paro would have got married to that aging widower.. Because that is what her parents could afford to marry her off too..they could not afford the dowry of a rich young man...every story cannot have a happy ever after... Sometimes it's nice to read about unrequited love too.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by msin

Originally posted by AngelTeen

Originally posted by msin

It's  written very well I liked it..

But devdas in its place was a classic.. It depicted childhood love.. Inability to make decision at a young age.. It happened in 1930 when devdas was dependent on his father he could not against him and so he  spurned paro... To regret later..
Do not judge the srk movie devdas... With the alterations it gave a very unfair picture to devdas..neither here nor there..

Thank You for your comment! :)

Glad you liked it! :)

But I would like to make clear that this is not based on Bhansali's Devdas, but on the concept itself. I am not a fan of a character as weak and as selfish as Devdas, hence.
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Even I did not like devdas... But in retrospect I feel every male cannot be an alpha male..there are weak  guys in our world..and selfish , weak or not they can fall in love...if he had not fallen in love with paro.. Still paro would have got married to that aging widower.. Because that is what her parents could afford to marry her off too..they could not afford the dowry of a rich young man...every story cannot have a happy ever after... Sometimes it's nice to read about unrequited love too.

I agree or else I wouldnt have written this story, no? Not every love story can have a happy ending and nor can every woman or every man be strong enough to proclaim their love in front of the entire world or even just in front of the one they do love. :)

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
How utterly depressing...a love that cannot be fulfilled.  Khushi's right though...he thinks only of himself.  The ending was poignancy epitomised...a bit of a bittersweet ending. 

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:37am | IP Logged
subah subah uth kay dekha ... your pm... and was so happy

this was beautifully written, i so wanted to slap arnav at a point, but then saab haapy endings ek si tu nahin ho sakti na.

Rae, i am sending you this hug Hug with tears in my eyes.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Heart touching!
By the time i fnshd readin , a sad smile crept up on my face..

Sigh!! wotever the circumstances r , I cmpltly agree wid u , Rae, fr a couple in a relationship, its unfair fr nly 1 person to make a decision fr bth of dem..

Brilliant narration.
luvd it immensly :)

The significance of the flowers ws vry informative since i dnt hv any idea abt dem!

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Sad, heartbreaking yet beautiful!
Too be v frank, I never like Devdas, whatever may be his reasons! For me, he was coward!! Apna pyar ijhaar bhi na kar saka na Sab KUCH bhuk kar aage Ja saka! Made 3 souls unhappy I know I will get lots of jutis!!
But here at least he's asking khushi yo heal up!

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
I am lost for words. Seriously. 

It broke my heart, yes, but  it also made me smile. Your love has to have the power of forgiveness. So what you didn't end up together? That in no way means your love has to end. 

I am in love with the feeling of 'love' once again.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:06am | IP Logged
This piece of your writing is so heartbreaking and yet so beautiful in its simplicity.
The way you have weaved the words, I cannot find a suitable adjective to describe the feeling.

I am a marwari, and I don't know anything about Bengali culture, but after reading this, I know that its beautiful.

Your characters seemed so real.
Arnav loves Khushi, but he is weak.
Weak to accept his love for her, weak to give their love a name.
And when he realizes his folly, it's too late.

And Khushi is the complete opposite of Arnav.
She has been strong throughout.
She was the one who asked him to tell her that he loved her, who came to his room late at night, not caring about the society, but only for the love that she knew blossomed in both their hearts.

But we humans, fail in front of Fate.
No matter how much we want a different outcome, some things are just written in the stars.

I loved the bit with the flowers.
Its surprising, how little things, like flowers, can become so significant that they can define our whole life.

Arnav will have to spend the rest of his life with what ifs.
And Khushi will always rue the fact that her first love was unrequited. I say first, because i really want her to find happiness with her husband,

But the process of healing has started.
And no matter how long it takes, wounds do heal.
That is the way of life.

Amazing update.

Richa.

P.S. I am adding you as a buddy, if you take requests. I'd love to get a future notifications of your updates.

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