Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 2)

sheenakie Newbie
sheenakie
sheenakie

Joined: 30 October 2012
Posts: 34

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
like always, I fall inlove over and over when you write. been a silent reader merely but i can´t help it. I must tell you, you are amazing!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

Krishnaluv94 IF-Rockerz
Krishnaluv94
Krishnaluv94

Joined: 03 October 2010
Posts: 7548

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
That was beautiful! This OS left me with a sweet hurt. Amazing!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

chenis Senior Member
chenis
chenis

Joined: 10 September 2012
Posts: 339

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
Loved the way You have show different emotions in the story.
Ending was really heart wrenching.Cry
You really are a amazing writer Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

_disha_ IF-Sizzlerz
_disha_
_disha_

Joined: 13 May 2006
Posts: 11173

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Lovely Os !

Devdas is definitely not one of my favorite movies ...so i was a bit skeptical to read this but i am glad i did.
I liked the fact that it was more from Khushi's POV rather than Arnav's and  may be i am the only one but i really like the way you ended this story...Where Khushi inadvertently got closure!
The whole bengali setting and dialoges made the whole set up really vibrant!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

glimmernglitter Senior Member
glimmernglitter
glimmernglitter

Joined: 09 July 2009
Posts: 482

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:03pm | IP Logged

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST


The Author have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to Members Only.

New Visitors Register Now to view the content of this post. As a member you will also be able to participate in our discussions and its FAST & FREE!

Members, please Sign-In.

If you are a member and already logged in. Please hit "Refresh" on your web browser as it might be showing you the cached copy (from previously saved file from Temporary Internet Files).

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

aveeshakiran Senior Member
aveeshakiran
aveeshakiran

Joined: 06 January 2013
Posts: 263

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Wow...beautiful story...but felt sad...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

msin IF-Rockerz
msin
msin

Joined: 30 December 2011
Posts: 5051

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
It's  written very well I liked it..

But devdas in its place was a classic.. It depicted childhood love.. Inability to make decision at a young age.. It happened in 1930 when devdas was dependent on his father he could not against him and so he  spurned paro... To regret later..
Do not judge the srk movie devdas... With the alterations it gave a very unfair picture to devdas..neither here nor there..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

AngelTeen

AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz
AngelTeen
AngelTeen

Joined: 13 June 2005
Posts: 24891

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by msin

It's  written very well I liked it..

But devdas in its place was a classic.. It depicted childhood love.. Inability to make decision at a young age.. It happened in 1930 when devdas was dependent on his father he could not against him and so he  spurned paro... To regret later..
Do not judge the srk movie devdas... With the alterations it gave a very unfair picture to devdas..neither here nor there..

Thank You for your comment! :)

Glad you liked it! :)

But I would like to make clear that this is not based on Bhansali's Devdas, but on the concept itself. I am not a fan of a character as weak and as selfish as Devdas, hence.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

msin

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Arhi os:HILARIOUS CONVO BETWEEN ARHI.

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 60283

Hina69 94 60283 24 September 2016 at 5:29am by NPKN
(Removed)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 118 119

Author: meera30   Replies: 947   Views: 168278

meera30 947 168278 19 September 2016 at 5:19pm by ..Swapnali..
ArHi Whispers in the dark Ch 1

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: carelesswhisper   Replies: 54   Views: 3824

carelesswhisper 54 3824 27 July 2013 at 9:39am by A.Hajnal
OS : Night whispers

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 17 18

Author: asrcraze   Replies: 141   Views: 18191

asrcraze 141 18191 14 July 2013 at 12:58pm by SangArshian4eva
Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 212   Views: 148518

jasminerahul 212 148518 26 January 2012 at 3:08am by meluhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index