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Fragrant Whispers - ArHi OS (Page 12)

avika_ShArMa Senior Member

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Posted: 28 December 2013 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
I don't know if i have ever commented on this thread, but here I am. Smile

To begin with, I have always hated stories with sad endings, whether it be death of the leads or just their separation. And this was no different. I had been a little apprehensive regarding this story and contemplated whether i should read it or not. I did. And i don't regret a bit! Star

It was outstanding and downright one of the most beautiful 'sad'(in my eyes.) OS i have ever read. I awed when you wrote about their past, smiled when you described all those beautiful ladies and their easy camaraderie, and cried when arnav confessed, but was too late. I liked and not liked the ending. But it was the most apt one where khushi got a closure, a world of her own, her dignity held upright, not relenting to arnav's rejection and giving him a 'on his face'. :P :D

Im sure arnav's gonna regret this all his life, where he let go of his true love. I found him selfish, which he was. If you truly love a person you move heaven and earth to be with him/her, which in this case he didn't. So in my perspective his wasn't true love. True love was what khushi had for him where she didn't think twice before abandoning everything even her pride and dignity and begging him to accept her. I wish her a love filled married life and ofcourse, time heals everything!Smile

Apart from that, as i hate non-arshi endings, hehee, im going to build up a new story in my head where they end up together. Don't ask me how, coz even i don't know.TongueLOL

PS ~ I had read this os when you had posted it. And still its effect hasn't gone, where i feel sad just thinking about this OS. I gathered courage, :P and read this once again. since i don't remember commenting here, i chose to write this extra long and extra boring piece. Embarrassed

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nadiafarjana IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2014 at 2:44am | IP Logged
painful yet beautiful.

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sirivalli.t IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 February 2014 at 2:12am | IP Logged

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Kamala05 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 February 2014 at 2:46am | IP Logged
This OS is exceptionally beautiful.

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rulama IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Very touching!
Result of ego and thoughts of what the society thinks!

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varsha2KD IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 April 2014 at 5:44pm | IP Logged

Heart-touching OS... so beautifully written... Clap

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ongongong IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 May 2014 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Very sad yet A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! Arnav has been such a coward.

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