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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by insanelycrazy

OS timee!!! *jumps around*

this was so bitter sweet, and i was assuming the husband to be shyam, because of aap since he adresses people like that.


 the whole part where khushi went beat red after arnav spoke to her, was so cute! in the initial part of the OS, i loved how you portrayed arnav's emotions, with very fews words. (okay this is a bit tough to write out) like not much is mentioned about the way he feels, but with very less details, by just his smile, or the smirk (which never seems to leave his face) readers get to know he likes khushi, and i think that's cute! not alot of words are needed to express what you feel, the person's eyes are more than enough.

I loved this, especially how beautifully you showed love between two people who had such a huge age gap, enough to rise speculations amongst people and what one's insecurities of sorts did. and i love khushi. she is such a strong character of will so ahead of her years when it comes to maturity, proving that age has nothing to do with how you percieve the world and treat people who matter to you be.

I loved the play of emotions here, khushi's more than arnav's because she didn't have a say, the cards were layed for her, and she had to play. amazing OS :) i loved it! 

Ah you! You have been missing from here for a while! 

I just saw this comment recently and it was quite a pleasant surprise. :)

Thank You for commenting! I am glad you liked the story, the writing and the portrayal of the characters. :)

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Posted: 13 October 2013 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
What a beautiful piece... One that leaves you sad on the inside, but one that you can't help but smile for.

Arnav's promise to always gift her a making flower everytime he wore a sari was just... Awe-inducing!

And again, a story where Arnav and Khushi are not together makes me sad, but I feel everything will be alright at the end of this one.

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
different yet beautiful and real..
we dont always get our love in real life..

I love it!

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Beautifully written. 

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Beautiful...Yet painful too...

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Painful and beautiful at the same time

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 4:33am | IP Logged
i dont have words to describe what im feeling reading this...!
you literally wove magic back there!

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Posted: 05 December 2013 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
Hrt touching.

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