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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Amazingly written dear...

I literally had tears in my eyes :'(... Damn you Arnav Singh Raizada!

You know the devdas scene you mentioned where khushi goes to Arnav at the middle of the night is one of my fav scenes ever... I always thought abt writing a OS on it (happy ending definitely) but never did :/

Thanks for writing such an awesome OS :)

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Oh and I'm glad you are back :)

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Tragic and heartbreaking yet sacred =/

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Posted: 02 August 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
OS timee!!! *jumps around*

this was so bitter sweet, and i was assuming the husband to be shyam, because of aap since he adresses people like that.


 the whole part where khushi went beat red after arnav spoke to her, was so cute! in the initial part of the OS, i loved how you portrayed arnav's emotions, with very fews words. (okay this is a bit tough to write out) like not much is mentioned about the way he feels, but with very less details, by just his smile, or the smirk (which never seems to leave his face) readers get to know he likes khushi, and i think that's cute! not alot of words are needed to express what you feel, the person's eyes are more than enough.

I loved this, especially how beautifully you showed love between two people who had such a huge age gap, enough to rise speculations amongst people and what one's insecurities of sorts did. and i love khushi. she is such a strong character of will so ahead of her years when it comes to maturity, proving that age has nothing to do with how you percieve the world and treat people who matter to you be.

I loved the play of emotions here, khushi's more than arnav's because she didn't have a say, the cards were layed for her, and she had to play. amazing OS :) i loved it! 


Edited by insanelycrazy - 02 August 2013 at 1:46pm

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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
This was beautiful...and yes, u did justice to what u were trying to portray...
Thanx for the happy reading moment!

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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Oh this is so touching! It doesn't really have a conventional happy ending, but so does a lot of love stories in real life. Yet it was very beautiful, specially the way you have described the workings of first love at a very young age.

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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
beautiful...

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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
Beautifull os wit a sad end
sniff
loved it

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