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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:21pm | IP Logged

This is first attempt on ASYA I always  wrote on ARVI (arjun and purvi)..

Pls do read and comment… I was extremely upset with the way asad reacted to tannu's bakwaas description of that raath so  I made this OS…hope u like it.. here it goes…

ASYA OS: SAZAA…

A big hall it was decorated greatly and was looking awesome.. Asad was standing along with his mom and inviting the guests into the hall.. It was his sister's marriage reception.. Asad was greeting all the guests belonging to both the sides of the bride and bride groom…

As  he was busy with the talks with everyone he saw a beautiful lady in red and black saree.. she was wearing a red saree with black border and then a black long sleeved blouse.. she just wore long diamond ear rings and was looking absolutely stunning.. Asad suddenly saw her and his sight got stuck upon her… His mother called him to introduce to someone but he did not react to her words.. Dilshad shook him to get him out of the trance state.. he then pointed towards her.. Dilshad was shocked to see her infront of them after nearly 3 years.. "Zoya" she said softly and looked back at her son..

She could see tears  filling up in her son's eyes.. along with the tears there was a sort of happiness  in his eyes.. she missed this spark of happiness in his eyes since past 3 years.. that was lost the day when he lost her out of his life.. he was just waiting to see her atleast once and there she is infront them after 3 years… the day she left him because of the biggest mistake he committed in his life by not trusting her and trusting his friend made him lose her for ever…

He looked at her who was standing far away and almost near the entrance waiting for someone and calling someone on her mobile.. he was able to see her but she cannot and more over she was so busy with her phone that she did not look anywhere except outside since she came…

Asad  remembered all those moments which he spent with her and observed that she changed a little with the time.. she was looking more matured and decent.. those the way she is looking outside made him realize she was just like before but there was some change in her… he was just staring at her till a hand touched his shoulder… he turned to see it was his mom…

Dilshad: it zoya asad.. our zoya.. she is just the same na..

Asad: ha ammi…

Dilshad: but she is little different she looks more matured and a little calmer too..

Asad looked at his mom and both smiled…

Dilshad: asad atlast allah heard our prayers.. he  made us meet zoya today after 3 years.. u tried to meet her so many times but couldnot and see today its najma's reception and we got to see her…

Asad nods in response…

Dilshad:  asad atleast today say her what happened and get her back into your life.. she is very big hearted she will realize the truth and will accept u again.. pls tell her the truth and get her back into your and our life asad only she is perfect for u…

Asad: but ammi.. will she forgive me??

Dilshad: asad I know her.. she will definitely forgive u and will accept u because even she loved u…

With his mothers words asad gathered all the confidence and went towards zoya to talk to her…  but suddenly someone pulled as the bride and groom were entering the hall and the reception is gonna start… Asad had to go and by the time party started and he was free asad couldnot find zoya… so went and stood beside his ammi near to the entrance who was standing along with najma's in laws… he too stood there standing and sharing a few words with them but his eyes were searching for zoya… they stood in a circle and then najma's father in law suddenly moved out of circle on hearing "uncle" from the back..  all of them turned to see the person.. it was his son's friends…

Najma's FIL: hello guys.. how r u?? and Is this the time to come?? (saying it he greeted everyone)

Najma's MIL: ha what is this beta.. ur friend was waiting for u since a long time..

Friend: what to do aunty we were really tired with the journey and so we are late…

Everyone greeted asad and dilshad too as they already met in Bhopal for the nikaah and the reception was in delhi which was the groom's home town..

FIL: where is the other 2 monkeys of ur gang?? They were not present for the nikaah na…

Here we are a sound came at a  time from beyond.. when everyone moved there stood the girl in red and a handsome man beside her in black suit.. asad and dilshad were shocked  to see zoya  and were even happy…

They both moved close to the crowd  and the rest of the friends were covering asad and dilshaad so zoya was not able to see them..

FIL: u did not come to nikaah and u are late even now…

Zoya:  uncle u know the reason why I didnot come to Bhopal and for now im sorry…

Other man: and we never expected that u people who went  to see the girl  will  fix the marriage so soon.. and just with in 10 days everything was done.. that was so surprising and that was why we did not even see the girl also…

Zoya: ha uncle now no more late we need o see the bride fast..

FIL: OK OK.. before u meet the bride u meet her family they are here only u both did not meet them…

With these words everyone who were infront of asad and dilshad moved and with that zoya saw both asad and dilshad…

Before najma's FIL could introduce zoya  she said phupi in a shocked state…she had tears in her eyes and they were even flowing out and same was with dilshad.. zoya fastly went to her and hugged her.. both shared an emotional moment and everyone was confused..they both exchanged some convo in which dilshad tells that the bride is najma and a they missed her so much.. zoya feels happy for najma and says the groom is good and perfect for najma as she knew him since 3years…during all this convo zoya doesn't look at asad other than greeting him with a hello Mr. Khan.. on the other side asad will be waiting to talk to her but she ignores him completely as if he is not at all present… 

seeing them…

MIL- dilshad: do u know her already??

Dilshad: ha I know her very well.. infact she was going to be my bah…(before she could say bahu zoya cuts in middle..)

She pulls the man in black suit beside her and says.. phupi  he is my husband..Dr. Armaan  Khan..

Dilshad and asad will be stunned to hear it.. asad's heart was broken into 1000 pieces.. he felt a severe jolt in his heart as if it was ripped into pieces… he stood motion less and controlling his tears which were ready to burst out..

Dilshad: in a shock.. ur husband???

Zoya: ha phupi my husband…

Armaan bent down to take blessings and even gave a shake hand to asad.. asad just greeted him…

Armaan: (keeping a hand around zoya's shoulder) so she is the phupi about whom u will always say about.. and so farhan's wife is none other that ur friend tamatar right..

Zoya nods with a smile.. then he continues..

She always keep telling about u people how u took care of her and supported her and loved her… Im really happy to meet u all today… he was talking with dilshad while other friends moved in.. armaan and zoya were talking to dilshad and asad was just staring at them.. they looked happy with each other. Her happiness was just killing him. The place where he dreamt to be there someone else was standing and holding her close to him.. she was so close to someone else than him..that really killed him…

He was shocked to see zoya so changed.. she was not at all uncomfortable seeing asad there.. actually she was not at all bothered about him.. this hurted him more.. even once atleast once she looked at him.. he then somehow thought that was she really happy or enacting infront of him.. the question made him fear.. as whether she was happy or was just livng a life like him?? but the words which he heard next made him hit the reality that she is happy and very happy with armaan… he heard:

Dilshad: so why didn't u both come to nikaah…

Zoya and armaan looked at each other and smiled and the armaan continued..

Armaan: when u are so close to zoya so I think u  have right to know it.. actually she is pregnant.. she is in her 3rd month. She cannot travel  now so that is why we couldnot come to nikaah and thank god we came here and could meet u…

dilshad continued her talk with armaan and zoya and spoke about her life and where was she all these years. she said that after she left to newyok they shifted to canada for their jeeju's business sake and then she got married with this doc a year later who fell in love with her in canada.. after marriage she moved to delhi and was here since 2 years.. farhan najma's groom is armaan's friend and she knew him even before armaan and zoya got married... 

With these words asad moved out into garden taking an excuse.. he went out and cried loudly till his heart felt light.. he was waiting for her since 3 years to get her back into his life but the reality is that she can never be his and belonged to someone else for ever and ever..

He  today understood zoya's pain of seeing ur beloved ones close to someone else.. he was truly in the situation where zoya was in 3 years ago on their nikaah day when she saw him with tanveer..

Though even at that moment she believed in asad and stood by the side of him saying everyone and explaining everyone that it was all tanveer's plot to get asad but he did not believe her.. he was supporting his friend that she can't stoop so low to get him and may be they committed the sin.. his support to tannu and ignoring zoya was like a fail nail to zoya's love.. she  left him forever and ever.. he doesn't know whether he supported tannu out of guilt or whether he really felt that he committed the sin but he could not stand beside the girl who even trusted him at that worst part of his life…

He came to know the truth of tanveer with her pregnancy reports and he threw her out of his life…  this all took a  time of 2 months and then when he searched for zoya in newyork she was not there and couldnot find her anywhere and was no clue of her aapi and jeeju too… so he couldnot get her and today he saw her as someone's wife..

Today she was someone else only because of his fault and so this is his sazaa for not trusting his love.. though he missed her and wanted her in his life he was happy that she got a person who looked after so well and trusted her more than anything..

He decided that he will not tell anything about tanveer to zoya as he doesn't want to disturb or enter into her life anymore.. he said the same to najma and dilshad too and they agreed… when he entered in he saw her dancing with her husband and he was taking a very great care of her and this made dilsahd and asad happy that zoya was happy and armaan loved her to bits just like asad and may be more as armaan trusted zoya more than asad…

Asad was happy seeing her happy and he accepted that this was his sazaa for not trusting zoya even when she trusted him…

Pls don't throw chappals at me as I was upset with the way asad reacted to tannu's bakwaas description of that raath so I made this OS… pls do hit like and comment..

 

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
guys i know its little long but hope u like it.. pls do read and comment...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manpreet23

Awesome! Clap
thank u ur comments means alot as its my first attempt on asya...
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Yaariyan-

it was amazing
thank u...
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really nice 
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