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Dheeme Dheeme |KR Shortstory| (Page 10)

pehlanasha. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Arya, please update second chapter on SS version as well. I wanna read! Embarrassed

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Keisha.

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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Awesome update
update soon

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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
1st of al sorry for being late in commenting.. was very busy rarely came online.. sorry once again..

coming to d ff.. d concept was beautiful.. keia gave up her love for d sake of her friend n met him after 3 yrs.. n s married to rey.. d way u showed their 1st encounter was funny n cute n sweet...
2nd chap was cute.. sharon teasing kria for her encoubnter with rey n sung romantic songs cute.. kriya n rey now became friends n ll wait everyday for each other followed by sharon's teasing... d last part was sensuous.. both drenched in rain n d way rey kissed her n d romance was superb..
waiting for next chapter...
ps: dont forget to pm me wen u update.

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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 2:30pm | IP Logged

Omg... its soo cute...Big smile

Loved it... I realllyyy like the way u present a story!!!!! Smile

Kriya is having strange feelings... justified ...

that was unexpected & intense... vo bhi stranger ke sath... Embarrassed

Hehehe ... sharon is so cute... it looks so realistic... Tongue

Loved the way-- kriyaansh gelled up with each other so easily...Day Dreaming

1 month me itne close... nice...Wink

Bus me kissing... hehe... sab kuch yahi hoga kya???  LOL

U updated it a month back??? .. & did'nt sent pm's?? Ouch 

*on hold* ... Shocked ... nahhiii  Angry

update it soon... u made me wait alot...TongueLOL

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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 9:08am | IP Logged
loved the romance part
nice 
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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 9:18am | IP Logged
awesome one
loved it
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
its awsum..yaar..
loved it..
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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
amazing...

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