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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 72)

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Coffee over... dosa ke liye waiting LOL

Sending heartfelt prayers for your friend's recovery...

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

Twiggy, your friend will be in my prayers. 

This update brought in the role reversal where Khushi is supportive while Arnav is troubled. No doubt Arnav will find a solution fro Aman. 

There were few doubts that cropped up with this update. If they are going to be answered with the future updates, don't answer them. Otherwise it would be nice to know. 

1. How old are Khushi and Arnav?

2. What is the status of their physical relationship?

3. How come Gupta's are so cool? They should start coaching classes for teaching parents cool quotientWink (kidding with second part)

4. Is this gonna be a thriller?

Arnav and Khushi are a couple in love. There is no doubt about that. However, for a young couple in love, there is something missing there Twiggy. Is that what happens when you fall in love with a long term friend. Since I dont have first hand experience about such a relationship I ask this question. 

Because for young people love and passion are synonymous. While love is visible in every move this couple makes passion is missing. I am not saying that they should be kissing every chance they get like hormonal teenagers but ...

Loved the description of that south Indian home and friends hanging out. Life without friends is so incomplete.

Glad you updated TwiggySmile


Khushi is 22, Arnav is 27. 

Their physical relationship... lets such say I will try and make up for the "ramanchi" I did by skipping the events of their weekend get away soon Big smile 

The passion.. it could be my inexperience in writing fiction that is reflecting in this manner. Also the fact all the love making scenes I write make me laugh for some reason, and then I erase that bit LOL I will work on this now.. thanks for pointing it out Sandhya Big smile 

Garima and Shashi... I will talk more about where they come from in future sometime. I hope that will answer this question regarding the "cool quotient". If it doesn't, let me know then :) 

This story anything but a thriller. Smile 

Thank you so much for being honest and sharing your views! Hug

Twigs, Thanks for the clarification. and you'll always have my honest feed back Smile

Now, I cannot wait for that make up session for the ramanchiWink

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
I pray for the speedy recovery of your friend...May  she get well soon!!!!
 Amen
I have officially become a fan of your writing...loved this chap..it was amazing...
loved that scene of vignesh's mother, just like our mothers...
glad that payal and akash r moving ahead,seriously arnav still doubts if they r in love,how can he...wo bhi then when workaholic payal took an off bcoz akash is sick,that is so sweet of her...
arnav is a wonderful person, really hope sinha takes up aman's case or arnav could in someway help them doubt...
I was really grinning on reading about arnav  cribbing for not getting a proper parking place for his SUV...lol
plz continue soon

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Our prayers are with your friend ... May she get well soon ... 

Ahh finally an update ... Dancing


Edited by Kishmish - 04 August 2013 at 11:03pm

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
i am sure your friend will be better soon..

You have done a great job with both the updates.. the flow of the story is so smooth..

loved reading it..

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...loved it. Thanks for the update.

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
I will pray for ur friend.. It was a good chapter..Smile

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
My prayers are with your friend Twiggy - I hope she crosses this bridge and gets to the other side happy and well...Smile

Love Arnav and Khushi in this!

Arnav is such a sweetheart:I really hope he finds a way to help Aman...poor guy just wants to help his sister!! I really, really hope she gets a good divorce lawyer!

Aww...the things these two do for each other. At least Khushi didn't foist a boring coporate event on Arnav this time...

Avinash's mother sounds just wonderful...and I love Dosas...!

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