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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 69)

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Wow an updateBig smile
Res for last chappy.

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So payal here is kind of a hitler one whom akash is afraid of? I am loving their peek-a-boo relationship.
I am glad arnav is always able to make her feel better by his mere gestures.
Sorry for short commentsOuch


Edited by dj_arshifan - 08 August 2013 at 10:14am

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
This Res for the this update.

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Wow! This was just perfect. I am loving the relationship they share. One is always present there for another to soothe him/her whenever needed.
Its good to see that he mingled up with all so soon! Looking forward for more of get together :)


Edited by dj_arshifan - 08 August 2013 at 10:37am

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
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Payal applying kajal, singing intezaar songs is a huge for her.The image of Payal and Aakash that forms in my head is that of a couple who in their teens dated books and exams. Considering that they have  probably never broken a rule in their lives, their love for midnight trysts is totally believable.
 Now Aakash has gotten himself in a fix and no matter how much he might attempt at changing the topic Payal is not one to miss. Really eager to see him spontaneous. 
Khushi is maintaining a smile on her face despite the fact that she doesn't enjoy her job. The fact that she doesn't keep complaining regarding it is inspiring, but curious to know how long this can go on.
I have coffee once in a while at night and it doesn't affect my sleep either. Twiggy I was smiling ear to ear during the Arnav Khushi part of the update. First Agnes and her unicorn, then dosas and later the most important of them all Filter coffee; Superr twiggs. I completely agree with Vignesh, coffee made by vending machines and in cafs are not good. Now big hugs for this updateHug ... 
Saiyu I love you and Twiggs equally and this will not change even if filter coffee enters the equation. In your words 'Bas!'


Edited by sj_arhi - 07 August 2013 at 11:04am

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:26am | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
D!

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Prayers for your freind!

Now that was a very enjoyable read !

I love the contrasts you show between Arnav and Khushi as a couple ..when one is down and out the other takes charge of the situation.
The faith they have in each other is extremely satisfying to read in this story cause we mostly get to read the typical Arnav and Khushi who will first fight , rile up each other till a happily ever after in the end and here we get to see a couple in love and how this equation blends into their daily lives. 

The bits about Vignesh and his amma were very well written ..it reminded me of the fun times i had when my friends came over at my moms place!
I hope Arnav finds a way to reach out to Aman.






Edited by _disha_ - 04 August 2013 at 7:43pm

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Ah! Finally! Res. (May be slightly delayed in getting this edited. Hope it isn't a problem :D)

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Kostin: Can Arnav not take up the case? Or is that where this is going (yay!) I'm so saddened by a fictional Aman and his sister's situation, Twigs…because I know there are these real people out there. I have seen them – people / women with degrees and jobs face situations that they would ever dream of being in.

I love this couple. They are so perfectly for each other…a couple in every sense…standing up for the other when s/he is down and then making an effort to ensure that s/he is OK. I am now ready to take on Anjali – these two are good for each other. Wish she would see this side of Khushi.

Saw your reply to Sandhya on the physicality of their relationship – all I will say is..don't worry about how the words sound. Let the audience decide and I personally promise to give you honest feedback (like I am some big master of intimacy writing :P)  whenever you do write.





Edited by meera30 - 04 August 2013 at 11:39pm

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Awesome update ..

Good luck to ur friend

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
This was awesome! And after such a long time! Phew! Big smile
and i think i already told u hat i love the arnav in your story! He is charming, caring, generous, and a gentleman!
And khushi makes me proud!

Thanx for the happy reading moment!

Ps- your friend will get well soon! Smile

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