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lazyleaves

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
:O You wrote AND updated and I know about it only now? Cutty...


Well well Twigs, you surely have captured my interest. I see an ArHi here who are married, are happy and a sweet couple.


I liked how Khushi said it (again) why his opinion matters the most.


But it has also been established that she wants to make her father proud.


So what will she do?

a. Listen to her father and dump her dreams for the time being

b. Listen to herself and follow her drea

c. Listen to Arnav and have sex ;-)


The start was good, lets see where you take this story :-)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Where have you been?!

I have often read your comments on the mentioned writers threads, who have encouraged you to write and I am glad that you have!

You have definitely got my interest from the very First Chapter...

Be it in the dynamics of the relationship shared between Arnav and Khushi is depicted, or in the Dilemma to choose your interest or the academic part that may look to promise and secure more...

and then, we have the parental pressure and expectations...I can see it.

Bookmarking it right away. 

Would love to read further, and very interesting title...something unusual, different, and yet convincing to make a surfer click on this thread...

:) 

- Dee


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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
First things first...


Twiggy is writing!Big smile

Now for the story; I loved it and for many reasons.

It has a different title, distinctive relation between Arnav and Khushi, a diverse setting and a new writerWink

It was good to see a Khushi who's a crossword puzzle zealot, an aspiring writer who is Arnav's universeEmbarrassed A refreshing change in the form of Arnav being confident yet preferring Khushi to be his anchor. And you say you aren't good at writing fiction...kuch bhi!

Eager to see how you take this forward!

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Updated comment on page 2LOL

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:11pm | IP Logged

Nice start. The title is very interesting.I could understand Khushi's dilemma.She writes ,Arnav doesnt likes it but yet he is eager to give her his honest view.I like it.The worded feelings Khushi expressed was so lovely.Over all these two were cute,funny.

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Edited my comments on page 2 Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
My limited knowledge of English vocabulary did not help me understand what the title meant. So, I went seeking help from our uncle Google and guess what I understood

a mischievous or impertinent person (love such people) who wins an argument not by proving their point but by proving the counter argument wrong ...

An attitude...

I love attitude...bring it on Twiggy. S

You've already generated enough interest with such an interesting title

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:31am | IP Logged
hi, that was beautiful. and created characters so quickly. really enjoyed. hope to be back soon. i know it's a struggle to switch from writing about something to fiction. i am trying and it kills me a bit every day, then brings me back with an obsessive need to say what i have to... from all places, my imagination. then there are the fears.

so... congratulations for doing it. great start. see you.

jackanapes. good one... 


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