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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 45)

A_BA IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Glad to have Khushi and crossword puzzle backSmile I really did enjoy the latest chapter.

Garima is such a typical mother, just wants to provide her daughter with everything...the way you described her is just like my own the pet pooja lineLOL

When Khushi was talking about her day, and her dad and Arnav realized that she wasn't very happy with her situation, it was interesting that Arnav gave her dad an accusatory glance...that's very bold of him.

Also love the way you portray Arnav...he understands Khushi so well. I like how you mention that her thinking about things he said used to make him upset but now he finds it amusing. I have always heard that couples find little quirks amusing in the beginning but after a while, it gets on their nerves. I guess Arnav is just still too much in love with KhushiSmile

Feel bad for Khushi that she is just not happy with her situation. Hopefully she can find an alternate solution soon!

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khushiiXOXO Senior Member

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
for a sec there i had a horrible thot...Arnav & Payal together in d end! ...ya ya i know but usually it's Arnav and Khushi always having verbal sparrings dat this incident btwn Payal & Arnav shook me..Big smile

hhmm..everything seems so smooth in Arnav/Khushi world,now I m left wondering where wud d fire start from...

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1chilly IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Sorry Twiggy, for the late comment. But I just reached India the day before and am just getting back into IF mouldLOL
Love Garima. You've got the character of a normal Indian worry wart mother exactly right.
Love it when she just wants to feed her daughter to feel that everything was alright.
Arnav is the one person in the world who understands Khushi like no other.
I love the way you give a hint of the future update by way of a crossword. 
So this guy is the novelty in Khushi's life?

I hope she doesn't two time Arnav with this new guy. I hope she knows that Arnav ke liye ladkiyon ki kataar lambi hai.Wink

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badfaith4u IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp


Khushi likes to solve crosswords but Arnav is the Google that helps her by giving her the words the minute she asks.

Anyways, Garima is your quintessential mother. She fusses so much to make her daughter comfortable that she might overlook what is there but unobvious.

Payal is too busy being happy for her sister.

However, her father and Arnav know what the truth is and they know that the other knows. A silent exchange of looks which says it all.

Arnav however is the only one who brings a smile to her face and questions her about her feelings.

Waise where does Arnav live? When he isn't working he is either in Khushi's living room or her bedroom...

really awesome story you have here

I found it by accident
really nice and new
thank god the guptas are not like the tv show
god they were so conservative
I like them
poor khushi has to do engineering and likes writing 

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dreamymaya Goldie

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged


Hi dear, 

I am reading your solo work for the first time. I have read your collaboration work and have come across your name many times.. Finally when a friend suggested me this story, the name of story caught my attention. Initial 2 parts I read and was understanding the people and the theme...then as I read these lines --- something tugged my heart..felt like why it sound so familiar?

""Yes." she said in a low voice.  He thought her face suddenly lost its radiance and he felt his heart twist painfully in his chest. "Its okay Arnav, I made my decision and it's done now. No point whining about it. I did it for papa and I made that choice. Chapter closed.""

:-) it happens! Garima-Shashi's talk, Payal's thoughts on her sister's dreams...somewhere it felt familiar and real to me..may be because I have experienced it.

"He was a simple man with simple desires, who just wanted to love and be loved. "---you have put it beautifully! Fortunately Arnav is lucky to have Khushi who understands him..while unfortunately ones crave for that love! 

Edited by dreamymaya - 13 July 2013 at 6:23am
-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
r we getting update :d

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Hot_Chocolate IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
my comment on chapter 4 is updated on page 30 ages ago...abhi tak nahi pada?CryCry

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Hot_Chocolate IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
garima...kitna fuss create karti hai...she is all over khushi...alas! she is a mother and an emotional mother at that...isliye banta hai...!

khushi is a darling...she is not happy but she is happy by seeing her DAD happy...she is a daughter and a kind daughter at that...which cant see her paa and maa unhappy,,so she pretends to be happy...isliye iska bhi banta hai...!

payal is a sister and a caring sister,,she just want her sis to be happy,,,,, sisters are  like that?? well, i donn know,,,i dont have one!! but i like ur khushi's sister !!

arnav is cute...he helps her in solving crosswords,,,he know by reading her face that she is not happy at heart...can anyone be so adorable,,and that too a LAWYER,,well, arnav is!!!

i lau him dammit,,,,!!!

and awsome updex!!!Clap  

Edited by avantisharma - 10 July 2013 at 8:58am

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