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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 37)

aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Heard a lot about it... Would start reading it this weekend. Smile

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shree10 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Sorry I know I am horribly late.

Loved Garima's anxiety about Khushi's first day!
Coming to Payal well I have not excused her yet! I understand she is not vicious but still..

She is studying medicine. Nw practical advice to Payal- In medicine it doesn't matter if you are a gold medallist or have passion for profession, if you can't build rapport with your patients then you will be big failure somewhere down the line. Unless your passion lies in solitary research or branches where you dont need to be communicating with too many people!

So I would say forget Arnav for a while , as Payal needs a lesson or two in interpersonal relationships!

Your Arnav is very adorable and real too due to his weakness and insecurities.

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vgedin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Chapter 5 will be up tomorrow afternoon Smile 

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Sisbamboo1 Senior Member

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
The relationships you've created are so strong and dynamic. I don't think I've ever met an Arnav who wasn't completely sure about his goals so this will be a nice change.

Looking forward to reading more!
Please PM!
preethi.saseeda IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

Chapter 5 will be up tomorrow afternoon Smile

Came here to check when we will get the next chapter... Good you decided to let us know... Waiting...
indi52 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
lovely update. great payal arnav apology... i like to hear him laugh too. and why did i get a... restless feeling in the middle of it all. thanks, enjoyed my sat morning read.
1chilly IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 12:20am | IP Logged
So orry for the late comment but I haven't had time to catch up on my reading.
We are leaving for our annual visit to India this evening and life it seems is only shopping packing and work and more work. Really sorry for the delay, but you know I love this story and was dying to read this update, but I am trying my best to catch up on my reading in chronological order.LOL

Payal seems to have many shades to her character. Love her for her complexities.
She is not bad but a little rude, maybe.
Loved her equation ith Arnav.

You have made me love Arnav again.
Wish he was real and not fictional 
Garima is a typical Mom.
Worried for her grown up daughter's first day at work.

Waiting for the next update. Catch up with you when I'm in India.

aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
As I promised here I am after reading all the chapters.Smile
I loved the beginning with Arnav Khushi conversing so easily. He needs reassurances from her again and again that she would be with him always. And after reading all the successive chapters I understand the reason much better now. Because somewhere he thinks that she is too good for him and with his lack of drive/passion she may one day feel otherwise for their relationship.
I loved the way you are bringing the nuances of so many relationships to the fore front.
Be it a father-daughter, husband-wife, sisters, brothers, mother-daughter and then lovers - It all is awesome.
Garima getting all nervous for Khushi was natural. It's typical of mothers to feel so for their kids. They get excited, nervous and everything. Payal, the cool one, with telling her that she would be just fine and trying to ease out.
Payal is a good girl even if she has a sharp tongue. But she apologized and that made it clear she doesn't take her family and friends for granted.
I'm loving the way story is taking shape and it surely doesn't look like that it's your first piece of writing.

PS: Sending you buddy request, please accept and would wait for PM.Smile

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