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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 36)

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged

I loved the equation between Payal and Garima. It reeked of a certain nostalgia, it seemed as if the author was missing their mother whilst writing this update.

Arnav and Payal were another story altogether. I have never enjoyed an uncomfortable apology until now. It seems unkind of me to laugh, for I too turn into a mess of fumbling words whilst apologizing, but it cannot be helped. I must giggle!
 
Oh, please do update soon! Thank you for the message!
 
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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Awsome ff.
Lol...payal was too funny!
I luv this arnav n khushi.
Garima n sashi's behaviour is justified as parents :)

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
I love how you bring out the characters by highlighting different sets of relationships in each chapter. Garima is such a mommy- decided what's better for Khushi and yet feels conflicted. And of course the worrying that never ends. Teasing her own daughter about midnight escapades with boyfriend was refreshingly amusing. Cool Mom!
The Arnav-Payal equation is interesting to say the least. They've known each other forever to the point that she feels that she doesn't need to hold her tongue in front of him and yet does not realise how badly she hurt him. But her apology was balanced she didn't go overboard in reassuring him. She said he's honest and competent at what he does and she didn't have the right to judge him but she didn't say her opinion was wrong. Blunt as she is you'd expect her to be honest and not saccharine sweet. Fair enough. 
It's so cool that Garima knows him so well. And he's so damn warm, how can everyone not love him. 
Waiting to see what Khushi's arrival brings. And what's in the bag Arnav brought? I'm really curious for some reason!Tongue

The chapter was heartwarming as usual. 
thanks so much and get well soon.

P.S. I kinda missed the Khushboo-Anjana stuff.LOL

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
This Arnav is a keeper. He may not be ambitious but he is supportive, kind, sweet, caring and loving towards the people around him. To me those qualities are far more important. He is like the perfect boyfriend and probably even perfect husband material.


I dont appreciate Payal's lack of tact, its one thing to have an opinion on everything but another thing to express it all. But chalo she at least apologised.

I like what you are doing with this story, it feels like a slice of everyday life and there are very few who can capture that and make it an engaging story.

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
In my opinion, Arnav is one of the increasingly rare sane voices in this increasingly crazy world of ours...where people seem to be more in love with ideas or things than people themselves.

Love him...and Khushi is indeed lucky to have him.

Falling in love with this story...and it's been only four chapters..Smile



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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged
read all 4 chapters in one go...loved it

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Waiting for chapter 5.

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this family is so much fun!!! they are so understanding to each other!! and siblings bonding is described beautifully!!

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