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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 34)

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
The realization that she had been hurtful was there somewhere but Garima stated it in clear terms. Payal is a clear hearted girl and the apology was heartfelt. This Arnav continues to amaze...what equilibrium.

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
I really loved the whole chapter. Arnav - Payal scene was a treat to read.

I am really liking the easy flow in the story. 

The scenes are very realistic and enjoyable.

Thanks for the pm. I appreciate it.

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Caught up with chapters 3 and 4. Now that you've written 4 chapters I can say this with some measure of confidence. This is one of the most real stories I have read on IF. Not larger than life at all. Real people with real insecurities. Very, very nice Twiggy.

Is there a reason Arnav calls Garima and Shashi by their names and not Aunty and uncle? Just curious.

Edited by madmaxine - 03 July 2013 at 6:31am

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Nice story ...
Read all the parts in one go...
So arnav s a lawyer here and sensitive too...would love to read more ...pls do send me pms


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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Say sorry its not an easy task...
but its not pride or ego for everyone 
you just don't how to say it...whenever i have to say sorry i just remembered how ASR practice to say sorry to khushi. 
 

Garima is mother like every mother, she also wonderful know how to teach their children and handle their emotional strength 
she's even care about arnav and his emotional stability with the words payal that day.

So its khushi first day...i m waiting for next update 

one thing i like about your writing...its simplicity 
like i m reading about my life 

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Firstly thank you for the buddy request and then dropping the PM, Twiggy..much appreciated :-))
 
Garima -Payal relationship is heartwarming...( it felt close to my heart, cuz, I share a similar equation with my Mom) I loved the manner in which Garima castigated Payal, ...and, what appealed to me was the fact that she asked her not to apologise, just to satiate her mother.. that is what I would do too...
 
I am glad that Payal decided to dwell upon her mother's pearls of wisdom, and, asked for forgiveness...and, it felt so gratifying, to read  about Arnav's laughter...though, I was grinning when I read about a screeching apology.. now, that is something novel ;-) what also stood out was Payal's candid confession about her being herself around Arnav, it cements the fact that the girl does not believe in affectations   ...
Looking forward to the next ...

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
This is an interesting story.
You have the knack to describe things so that we visualize it then and there without even being aware of doing so!
Loved this ordinary Arnav who is sensitive and who loves Khushi a lot!
Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Great interaction between Payal and Arnav, they certainly have a good relationship despite her sharp tongue.
I loved Arnav's good natured laughter at her inept apology,  which then melted her resentment enough to allow her to apologize to him gracefully.

It is not very common to see Arnav and Payal have any kind of a relationship independent of Khushi, This chapter almost made me forget about Khushi, despite the initial conversation between Garima and Payal!

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