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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 32)

DMGFan-2b-not2b IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Lovely FF. Just when I think ok I have read or am reading most of the interesting FFs on this forum, I go find another one! And this one is a gem!

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TwilightStar_JP IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Garima! Typical mother torn between your daughter and husband but worships for both's happiness equally!!

Loved how Garima pulled Payals leg and then asked her or I would say simply voiced out that she needs to apologize to Arnav!

Nd the Bond these two share! Aww cho chweet! She's this caring sister!! Nytyn for her sisters happiness!!

And then the kiss and make, I mean apologies and laughter ofcourse the banter! Perfect finish with a cup of coffee! Sweet!

And glad you updated, but do take care :)


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gifttag IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update...I love this story so much and don't you dare delete me from your PM list even by mistake.

Mothers, now what can I say about them, that's how they behave just like Garima, over anxious and over protective...there is a tiny bit of guilt factor as well because of other issue about Khushi's career decision although that was for Khushi's own benifit.

Payal I love her character it's so real and loving in her own way. She is not very conventional is she? She does really love Arnav, she was so funny apologising that at one point it did't seem like she was saying sorry.

Arnav he is such sweet guy that it's unbelievable, I Absolutly adore this Arnav, can I do Rabba Ve with him, no use even trying as he is really hung on to Khushi in a very faithful way, that's another very endearing quality he has, I think I am repeating myself I said the same thing in my last comment, oh well I feel that way about him after reading this update too.

Story is moving amazingly well, please continue soon.
Really glad that you are feeling better.
Thanks for the PM.

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thebubblespop12 Senior Member

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
It nice to see Arnav and Payal actually have a relationship in this. This is so wonderful and creative and I can't wait for more!

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Frida Senior Member

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
This is such a sweet story & a very realistic too.. I adore the bonds as well as the understanding between every character in Gupta & Raizada parivaar. All of them have a very cool approach to life.
You have a very unique Arnav here unlike IPK & all the other stories.. 
Shashi - Garima are like any other Indian parents, always worried & looking out for their kids :)
Oh, I miss my parents so much now!!
Will Anjali be making an entry with her Shyam in near future?? :)
Eagerly waiting to know about Khushi's 1st day at work!! 
All your detailed updates about Gupta's daily life interactions give me homely & positive vibes..
Can you pls PM me when you update next?

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kondhili IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
Twiggy so happy that you are feeling better now.

Mothers, i think there single most important focus in life is to 'worry' 
Right from all the big schemes in life to insane inane small things like did you eat lunch in time today darling. 
Doesn't really matter what the child's marital status or age is mama loves to 'worry'. BAS. 
Rule no. 1 in God's handbook of being mama. 

So i absolutely loved garima and also how she is prodded her other daughter to own up for her mistakes and apologise. 

Sorry a small word but very very difficult to say easily.  Well confession time so let me state that i can apologise real quickly if i am at fault but my problem is i would not know where to start and if i manage to crack that then i would not know where to STOP. Confused

Loved payal-arnav conversation and can i just state that this Arnav is so so cute, a complete sweetypie an endearment i never thought i would use for Arnavji...Tongue

P.S: As i said after the 1st chapter twiggy i am intrigued to know how you are going to take this story forward. 

Edited by kondhili - 02 July 2013 at 3:04pm

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achu_arshi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Oh I really hate these typical mothers sentients.. As I also have one at home 
Some times they can get bit annoying lol

But I really enjoyed this chapter...

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
loved it a brilliant update...keep it up...

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