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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 30)

AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Updated on page 28

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soophie Senior Member

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Really nice update
loved it
payal arnav equation in this story is really amazing...n quite different also

today's update was quite overwhelming
plzzz continue soon
n thanq so so mch for pm

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Big smile

Mothers will always be mothers ... 
they are the eternal peace makers ... 
all they want is peace in their homes ... Embarrassed

Payal's apology was quite something ... 
she found it so difficult at first but then realised that it is 
the easiest thing on earth ... 
and does make one feel happy and light ... 

Thanks Twiggy ... your writing is really effective ... 

Edited by Kishmish - 02 July 2013 at 10:59am

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Polkadots78 Goldie

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 10:45am | IP Logged
oh what an apology!! :) your writing is so simple but suoer effective. I especially liked the conversation between Payal and Garima!! it was really inspiring to read sentences like " i don't want you to apologize because I said so" . How many elders actually have the maturity to say that??

Very well written

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A_BA IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Glad you are feeling betterSmile

I personally find apologizing very awkward...not because it can hurt my pride to do so, but to formulate the correct words to make an apology seem genuine is I can understand Payal's frazzled state. I still don't agree with her harsh remarks towards Arnav. Even if she feels very close to him, it was just straight up rude...I really feel like there has to be a reason for her say something like that and in that manner (maybe I'm just over thinking this).

Garima was really cute, being nervous for Khushi like that...I guess mothers are just like thatSmile

Really looking forward to hearing how Khushi felt after he first day...does she completely regret her decision?

Really missed Khushi/Arnav interaction and their crosswords in this chapter, but it was still a great update. I really enjoyed reading it!

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SS88 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 10:58am | IP Logged
I had so much fun reading this. This version of Arnav is literally a shock to me, but very adorable too. So is Payal. Actually, Garima is cute too, the  way she is worrying over Khushi's day. Hopefully Khushi enjoyed her first day at her first job. Thanks for the PM!

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preethi.saseeda IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged
It was all so full of Payal update and you know what I loved it to bits... Like I told in my last comment, we have a wonderful characterization of Payal here and I am glad her presence is very prominent...

Loved the mother n daughter chat... I feel so family here... The bond that these people share with each other is so awesome and all I can say here is "what a family!!! Simple n lovable!!!!"

That was a change to have someone having a difficulty to apologize and have Mr Raizada at the receiving end... Between I am so curious to know what Arnav brought along n placed in the dining table... This girl khushi is so lucky... Aloo parathas... Jelabi... N I am sure Arnav brought along something to eat only...

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frenzyy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Loved garima [:D] payal is Awsum...loved how she apologized to Arnav... All the characters are so adorable

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