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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 24)

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Jumma jumma aath din nahi huwe author bane aur notes daalna shooru???

Already throwing your weight around???

Dekh liya!

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I enjoyed reading the whole Aakash Arnav convo you wrote with your lovely sense of humour. Aakash has an obsession over our show! Loved the dialogues that followed like Khushboo being the sacrificial lamb, Shyam being a pervert and of course those endless missed kisses. Aakash reacted as any one of us would have when our show is at stake. Well Aakash, my tip to you is, watch more scenes and try kindling the passion, but first be like AZR and announce your relation without a care. 
Arnav is a divorce lawyer, which is new and interesting. Payal is frank as hell. While it is good in some cases it can leave some hurt if the words are sharp. There is nothing wrong in telling what you feel honestly, but the manner in which it is communicated makes the difference. The chapter explains why she felt he was a goofy aimless brat.
Arnav and Khushi have known each other since years. Something I noticed, was your portrayal of Arnav in stark contrast with the one on the show. Most heroes are shown as geniuses who know it all which is not necessarily true in reality. Men can feel overshadowed, have insecurities, feel incapable of having their partner though they are doing well in their sector. Arnav's insecurities, need for assurance have been sketched very well and I am looking forward to how you take it from here. I Love Arnav and glad to have a lot of him in ch3.
He was a simple man with simple desires, who just wanted to love and be loved. What he didn't understand was, it was that very quality that made him extraordinary. That explains it all.


 


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Saiyyu - LOL

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

Jumma jumma aath din nahi huwe author bane aur notes daalna shooru???

Already throwing your weight around???

Dekh liya!

Kaisi dost hai tu ? Yahaan main bimaar, aur tu mazaak udati hai! Ouch

I should be the one to say Jumma jumma, no ? Wink

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

Jumma jumma aath din nahi huwe author bane aur notes daalna shooru???

Already throwing your weight around???

Dekh liya!

Kaisi dost hai tu ? Yahaan main bimaar, aur tu mazaak udati hai! Ouch

I should be the one to say Jumma jumma, no ? Wink


Dost hoon teri. Haqq hain mera *in a husky voice, obviously)

I didnt undst this Ouch

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

Originally posted by vgedin

Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

Jumma jumma aath din nahi huwe author bane aur notes daalna shooru???

Already throwing your weight around???

Dekh liya!

Kaisi dost hai tu ? Yahaan main bimaar, aur tu mazaak udati hai! Ouch

I should be the one to say Jumma jumma, no ? Wink


Dost hoon teri. Haqq hain mera *in a husky voice, obviously)

I didnt undst this Ouch
Saiyu thinks ke husky voice gets you done everthing and makes a person agree to everythingLOL...but Twiggy knows it better na?Wink

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Thats absolutely all rite!! Take ypour taaameee and get well soon! Wink

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Eccentrica

Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

Originally posted by vgedin

Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

Jumma jumma aath din nahi huwe author bane aur notes daalna shooru???

Already throwing your weight around???

Dekh liya!

Kaisi dost hai tu ? Yahaan main bimaar, aur tu mazaak udati hai! Ouch

I should be the one to say Jumma jumma, no ? Wink


Dost hoon teri. Haqq hain mera *in a husky voice, obviously)

I didnt undst this Ouch
Saiyu thinks ke husky voice gets you done everthing and makes a person agree to everythingLOL...but Twiggy knows it better na?Wink


Bholi Twiggy ko Bhadka mat!

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