Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 19)

harsha.. Senior Member

Joined: 22 July 2012
Posts: 738

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Read the three chapters in a go. I just couldn't stop , once I had started.
You have described the characters beautifully especially Arnav's. I loved the last lines of the third chapter. Also it is not heavy duty stuff and I really enjoyed the playful banter and humour laced conversations.The issues you are portraying through Arnav and Khushi are very common and general. Often many of us come across such dilemmas and indecisiveness in our real life. 

PS : The crossword ongoing through the story is a very innovative idea. Also you have have used it brilliantly as a drop back for the emotions felt by the characters.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


moomin4455 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 March 2012
Posts: 4146

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
How many people are like Arnav, ie don't have a particular passion, but just 'fall' into a line of work? Many of us are like that I think; I would say it's Anjali, Akash, Khushi and Payal who are the rarer type of people who have a desire to do something - not necessarily rare in terms of talent, because I think most people have a talent but do not realise it, but in that they know what they want to do.

I love your Arnav and I felt that Payal was harsh, but if that's the way she feels so be it. He underestimates himself though: his passion is to love and care for his family and to love Khushi and be with her . He's extremely lucky in that the object of his affection also recognises how wonderful, loving and special he truly is..and reciprocates his love...sigh!!

Akash is too funny! The IPK spoof was spot on! The vociferous indignation when Arnav spoke about Khushboo as being a villain!!! Knuckle pain? Midnight...cakes in Payal's room??? ROFL

This is so wonderful! I cannot wait to see what happens to each of these characters..

Edited by moomin4455 - 29 June 2013 at 11:27am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Onlooker Goldie

Joined: 19 February 2012
Posts: 1459

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 11:39am | IP Logged
If this is your first attempt in writing then Clap. You seems to know your characters well and i get a feeling that this story is well thought of before penning..

Arnav comes out as a happy go lucky guy and does not harbor any high-end goals apart from making money for him and Kushi to live comfortably. Law was not his passion, but his practical mind made him chose it as a safe option. Truthfully, i don't see anything wrong in it..May be he will discover his passion later in life..or may be his life with Kushi is his passion ..what say..

Payal was too forthright and indelicate, even when she valued him!!

This Kushi is ever ready to make sacrifices..and lives a well disciplined life and likes to be independent. 

Arnav pulling Akash's leg and not perfecting the move from the protagonist from the serial had be rofling..

Am looking forward to the next update..Can you Pm me if you are sending out PMs. Thank you. Do accept my Buddy request.


ha..i forgot to add..what attracted me in this story was the crosswords..i love it..will be on the look out for more..:

Edited by Onlooker - 29 June 2013 at 11:40am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Anony_mous Goldie

Joined: 22 May 2012
Posts: 1285

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged

Wow. Another beautiful update.

The spoof on IPKKND was like mindblowing-ly hilarious :D.. God!!  Been there done that actually. Defended the characters when the show was... ummm.. well on its decline.

And so we have a bright and laid back Arnav here, whereas Khushi has a room which could pass as a hotel room. I am liking this role reversal. Only thing is that while Khushi was happy with herself, Arnav apparently is not :(

He wasn't jealous, but his self-confidence has taken a beating without anyone realizing.

I can so relate to the feeling. Actually some time or the other, we all have been through this feeling of inadequacy in front of over-accomplished siblings, friends or relatives. Payal should keep her tongue in check, for I don't know about  fictional characters, but I refuse to understand/justify (like Khushi did) and befriend people like her in real life. 

The WHOLE LAST PARA is my absolute favorite. It was worded flawlessly and it tugged a heart string somewhere, his love and insecurities, which I guess what it was set to do.

Can't wait for the next part :) 

Edited by Anony_mous - 29 June 2013 at 12:58pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


crazy-ash Goldie

Joined: 01 November 2012
Posts: 1697

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Hola dear!!! Big smile
this is crazy me! And i m super glad that i came across this story of yours! LOL
and i loved it! Will thois do? Or is it too lame...??

Ok, so things i loved abt this story-
khushi wanting to become a writer and her views clashing with that of her father..her being extremely independent, and focused!
Arnav, for the 1st time ever, not the focused and ambitious one...
Both of the girls are open abt their relationships to their parents...
Both families are aware and approve their relation!
And the tinge of humour!! LOL
i love every bit of it!
So thereby lookin forward to the next update and do pm me if u pm, that is!
Thanx for the happy reading moment!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 November 2008
Posts: 12285

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
OMG seriously i don't want to do it 
just to feel better i read first chapter then 2nd and now 3rd
Ugh, I didn't want to start follow any new story honestly i already don't have a time to comment on stories which i already followed
but here i m commenting and want to follow it
i m already with my asli dunya works and here i promise i try to comment on time and regularly but 

Seriously, this story has some magic...i m in fresh mood now and want to read more about it 

But it never came. So I did what came next. I chose what was sensible, safe. That would ensure a secure future, for me, for Nani, for… you and me. The only thing I have ever really wanted is you, and I have that. What do you think Khushi, does not having an ultimate goal make me less of a man?"

amazing words ...I LOVE THESE lines 
I have an opinion according to me  goals are not important in your life dreams are important 
dreams make your life 
that arnav have " love and be loved" that's his dream and like khushi i also thought that make him extraordinary 

theme of the story is magical 
they are couple and young one :)
settling in their lives
achieving their goals and moreover dreams also but for her father she chose her goal over her dream 
but something we young people don't know what our elders or parents knows 
they far more predictable than us 

i really arnav here and khushi arnav relationship 
want to read more

I always comment but sometimes I will get late 
and i m loving your story BAS

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 November 2008
Posts: 12285

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
i don't understand the meaning of title of story 

i should google it
but u can also help me :)

Google never helps me now a days, my term paper also in poor condition because google arrogant behavior toward meCry

scrab me the meaning plz...Big smile

Edited by -LiveCrazily- - 29 June 2013 at 2:09pm Senior Member

Joined: 06 November 2012
Posts: 888

Posted: 29 June 2013 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Hey found out about this FF via Nach_basanti and I must tell you even though its only 3 chapter...I still really liked it.You are yet another great writer like your friends (Expell,Rasgulla-Sp,Nach_basanti...Ilove all their stories alot).
The FF is very simply and beautifully written.I loved Arnav's character here a lot.I found it kind of role reversal here..Arnav is simple.loving,caring and goofy..where khushi not ruthless but stubborn,independent and focused. I liked this thing a lot. 
Would love to read more so could you please kindly notify me for future update..would really appreciate it. And if not I can always stalk..WinkWinkWink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
FF:Chains of Silver BLOG REOPENED (Link pg 51)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 125 126

Author: HeadOverHeels   Replies: 1003   Views: 168910

HeadOverHeels 1003 168910 15 hours ago by sarun007
(BLOG SS) ~ His Perfect Wife:1 -complete-

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 107 108

Author: MrBiebersWifey.   Replies: 860   Views: 188543

MrBiebersWifey. 860 188543 09 April 2018 at 8:51pm by IShweta
Polemic Jackanapes#3: Complete [NOTE + BLOG LINK Pg69]3rd Jan

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 65 66

Author: vgedin   Replies: 522   Views: 72137

vgedin 522 72137 13 July 2016 at 11:05pm by pran28671
A note on pg.179 / New note on 182

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 175 176

Author: AquaSandhya   Replies: 1407   Views: 146168

AquaSandhya 1407 146168 29 April 2015 at 12:42pm by jasbin

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index