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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 18)

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Just read the update... I m in a hurry now so I am going to keep it short... That was a very long update but it was so beautifully written that I kept longing for more...

I dint realize how but believe me when I tell that my eyes teared up when I read the last paragraph... a simple man indeed... But I don't find him simple, I just find him adorable... Someone to cherish... Hats off for creating such a wonderful character... Of all the Arnav's I have come across this Arnav is the most adorable one... I have fallen so deeply in love with him...

The first half Arnav-Akash conversation was damn hilarious... It just established the cool relationship that the brothers share...

Every character is well shaped... Payal... My god what a girl... Creatives show take a bow here... If the shows Payal n Akash were half of what you have shown, then they wouldn't have been left with nothing good to do...

I loved Arnav n khushi's first meeting... It just made me understand that I have signed up to read a fiction that I going to CHERISH for my life...

Ps: where you kidding us when you told that this is your first trail in writing... You can give a run to many professional writers out there

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Unresd on pg 18.

Twiggy mujhe maaf karde Smile

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Enjoyed reading Arnav and Aakash's banter. Wished the same was shown in the show too.

I like the fact that both families are okay with their children's relationships. It's important for the couple that they're parents are okay with their relationships as it gives them confidence and security.

Payal is somewhat like me i think. Outspoken to the point of being rude at times. I can get like that too. No malice is intended though.

Their rooms depict their personalities. Interesting role reversal that you've given them.

Arnav speaking about his insecurities was so endearing. Heartening to know how Khushi feels about it.

The crossword backdrop gives this a unique flavour and the fact that he's a lawyer like me makes me happy.

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:17am | IP Logged
just  read NB's update and she mentioned this FF . I don't know how I missed this one...


It is hard for a child ,when the parents make decisions about their lives , but then , I faced something similar and now I look back and try to imagine what would have happened if i had followed my dream and not my parents,but then...


Arnav , i love. i would like to see where his life leads him.
Pyal and Akash are cute and love the Arnav ,Akash cheese cake conversation.


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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
a simple man with simple desires who wants to love and be loved. extraordinary that is. lovely updates. abnegation made me smile. and that little take off on ipk... thanks. khushboo tried to kill anjana with a scorpion...LOL

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
okay i was already in love with Arnav here and you just made sure that not only i better start admire and  respect him for the genuine and 'not-so-extraordinary' person that he is but also i never fall out of love with him!! you made him the most real one just like that.. how many of us really know what we want from life,what we want to become in our life? he has his share of flaws with a generous, loving heart which beats for the people he loves and cares and wants to keep close all his life... i am so touched with this side of his character!!
i just admire and adore the relationship he and khushi share...and really waiting want to see how their relationship progresses through all the ups n downs of life...
though i understand Payal was being straight forward in her statements,but i didnt quite get the reason of her in-sensitiveness..her two statements seems contradict each other and i really want to know the real share for her earlier thoughts.
Arnav-Akash part was fun and absolute delight to read... haha.. the story Arnav made to make Akash spill the truth!! LOL
a lovely chapter yet again...
waiting for the next one already.. :D

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged

The title of this story drew me to it as a moth would fly to a flame. I have a weakness for good vocabulary :-)

 
I enjoy the parallel you have drawn between the chapters and the word of the crossword. It is a unique yet simple way to express the emotion behind the chapter. As they say -- "The greatest ideas are the simplest" :-)
 
I also enjoy your sense of humor and the clever switch between the personalities of the two characters from the show.
 
I await to read more of their banter, please do update soon
 
-Sangfroid

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