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#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 (Page 16)

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Wonderful chapter...getting more insight of the characters to actually understand them and know where they are coming from. Love the easy and relation between Arnav and Akash I found their conversation regarding food was hilarious..you really made me laugh.

Payal is very judgmental and she only sees things from her own point of view...had a feeling she is a snob as in judges people because of their career choices.

Love Shashi and Garima as a very supportive parents who instinctively know what is good for their daughters, I had a very warm feeling reading, I feel like giving them a hug as I am far from them I will go and ring them.

So Arnav and Khushi are childhood sweethearts and have been together a long time. All he ever wanted was Khushi and nothing else now where will a girl get that kind of devotion from her chosen partner and his career and other choices in life comes second to her, I am very impressed with your Arnav and I have fallen in love with him, can I have him.
It made me a little sad that just because he feels a certain way about his life choices he thinks he is less than everyone who are high achieves and know where they are going in life, glad that Khushi understands him and appreciates and love the person he is, to me he just seems perfect which I am sure he is not.

I love this amazing story, very emotional yet funny at the same time. I don't know the relation between the characters you have created Twiggy it just gives a very warm feeling.
Please continue soon. I was just thinking of asking you to add me to your PM list but you read my mind and added me already, thank you for doing that, I feel very privileged.




Please ignore the typos as I am commenting from my phone.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
Thanks so much for the PM! I was planning to stalk the thread, so thank you  :)
I love Akash and Arnav's relationship- it's so realistic. An ASR who is unsure of himself- wow. as difficult as it is to imagine, your portrayal is really very well done. I felt so sorry for him, that he couldn't see what a wonderful man he is. He does his work sincerely, loves his family, takes care of those he loves, and is basically a decent human being- that's more achievement than 95% of the human race. We place too much importance on what a person is, rather than who he is. I'm glad he has someone like Khushi in his corner to boost him : )

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Thanks for the quick updates, it really helps keeping the story fresh in my head...and also thanks for the PMSmile

I honestly loved this chapter. There were so many elements to it, and we are starting to learn a little of the back story which is great...I like how you are adding in bits and pieces and not the whole thing just yet (at least that's what I think you're doing!).

The beginning was great. Loved the conversation between the two brothers (or cousins?). I like seeing this funny side to Arnav. But the question is, why does he want Akash to take Nani to the temple for 4 weeks...is it a daily visit to the temple or a month long stay??

Arnav calls Khushi's parents by their first names, that's different for sure. It seems like he has a great relation with them, will love to find out how that happened. And wow, Arnav eats 8 dosas, that's unheard ofSmile

I really wonder what Payal's issue about Arnav's career is about. He's not harming anyone and he's not doing anything illegal...I think it was quite rude of her to talk to him like that. I feel like there's more to it than her being upset about him being a divorce attorney.

You are definitely portraying Arnav in a different light...he's messy, he's funny, he's insecure...so many shades to him. I was a little surprised at his vulnerability at the end. I hope he doesn't let it fester for too long as that could be potentially harmful...he could lose Khushi in the process if he lets his insecurities get to him too much. But I like this supportive Khushi. I just hope she shares those final thoughts with him, so he knows how much he means to her!

And I absolutely loved the first crossword they did together...perfect word for a pair who would end up in love! And I absolutely love this concept of her doing these crosswords and him helping her.

I feel like there are so many details in this story that I'm missing out somehow, but I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes!

Sorry for all the rambling, just have so many thoughts in my head after reading your story!

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This was a lot easier to follow.. I loved the breakfast banter..

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Those that know me know I love comedy and I really enjoyed reading about this sly and funny Arnav..

How he puts Akash on the spot and gets him to agree for 4 weeks of Mandir chauffeuring is priceless!!

Loved this different spin on Arnav who is a foodie and in a different profession. Loved the part about the crossword puzzle and the picture gave insight as to how close they really are..

Looking forward to future updates! Thanks Disha for recommendation.


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Wow loved it.. Looks like this is completely different versions of Arnav and Khushi.. Loved Arnav and Akash talk... hahahhahaha they are not worried about the doing IT lol..


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