#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 - Page 75

you know something dear? the way In which you write and progress with your story and characters, I always felt the realistic touch in it. In the latest update, where you sketched Khushi's insecurities and fear, her helplessness and drowning in her despair by giving up the last shred of hope which kept her alive and going...its very raw kind of pain which is almost like a dementor's kiss, sucking your soul out. Arnav's boost up and logical reasoning out with his assurance to be with her is giving her the confidence. Even though she is bit hesitant and doubtful, his support plays a big role. When we have a little support to stand up for our dream, it means a lot..it gives you the energy to keep the flame of hope burning even if the wait is long or the struggles are back breaking. It gives you the will to keep going...

I totally loved the update. Arnav is the perfect boyfriend. .

Read this story this afternoon ...all chapters in one go...

Edited by IPK007 - 10 years ago

sorry for not commenting on the last chapter. For full 10 mins I searched the net (slow net) as what this polemic actually means (better late than never). Now I think somewhat the meaning of the word is sinking into me.

Now coming to this chapter, both Arnav and Khushi are in crossroads of their life. I think they both have each other, but there is something amiss, though I couldn't put my finger on it. Maybe I think both of them don't have complete faith on each other's choice. They are giving each other assurances that everything would be fine the other must go ahead with it. But, the point is Arnav doesn't like Khushi's stories but still wishes that she becomes a published author a day, keeps on telling his opinion doesn't matter which is untrue because it does as she loves him. For example I never understand my sister's poem because of the hi-fi english but when she explains me the meaning of each word 'I'm like you are too good'

Another thing I felt was that the Gupta parents are different to both of their child they let Khushi go with Arnav to the farmhouse but they are significantly more strict with Payal. If what I feel is true than could you please elaborate why this generosity to Khushi.

Hi, just got up with the story and had an absolute pleasure in reading it. The story was very realistic and relatable to certain extent. Khushi is one strong woman having clear goals in life. Albeit initially she was in a fix between her dreams, interests, academics & career, where she was in a dilemma between what her mind wants and what her heart wants she painfully opted her father's decision like a ideal daughter. For a person it needs lot of courage & strength to abound her/his dreams, comprise with a career unwillingly because time & again she/he must fight the inner demons, the uneasiness,  insecurities within oneself. I am glad that khushi is one such strong character who stood up against all odds, keeping her dreams & aspirations at a bay and trying to do her best  in the given circumstances.

Very supportive of each other's dreams & ambitions + being empathetic about each other's troubles. There is a visible comfort zone they are in when together!

I should be hanged for 'coming back' so late.











Edited by Enchante - 10 years ago

wow what a stroy

Twigs I  still can't choose whether to follow your heart for career or follow something which will support you financially. If not we would not be having so many people from various faculties flocking to IT.

And still I can only say that lucky are those who are able to follow their dreams and still make money.

I enjoyed the discussion at Vignesh's house. Something very general in the convo.  There are some who will be cynical about everything, who always will blame Red tape/Government for not doing enough or right way and get frustrated. And then there are some who will try to do something constructive whatever be the situation.

I am sure almost everybody has come across some Shekhar in college or at workplace!  Thanks to vaidehi for steering the convo to help Khushi.

Payal caring to this extent for Akash.. forget readers even Akash himself would never have dreamt. What a surprise!