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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
this was jokes 

loved that part were Khuhsi falls in Anjali's arms now thats jokes 
and where they say they'll copy the scenes for other dram loool 

well done

Great job

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
That was hillarious!!!
Khushi falling into Anjali's arms ROFL
 
Loveeed the whole thing...
And 'Moon minus' channel lol...that was awesome LOL

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
all is fair in humour!!!

so that is "didi ki saut"...LOLLOLLOLLOL

all Arnav could say throughout was "What the"LOLLOL

thank you shree10 ji for recommending this!

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
It is too good.. hilarious take.. 

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitrajay

EDITED!!!
 
Whattay hilarious take on the show, Mints!!!!
Love you!!! Muaahhh!!!Hug
So now that you are doing all genres, what next?????Big smile
Loved this OS and laughed my guts out!LOL
I wish I were a cartoonist- I would have loved to do some humoruos stuff for you
But all I can do is write, unfortunately, so here is my "not-so-little" tribute to DKS
Wink
 
AND the banner--OMG, loved it!! Especially in this context -I cannot stop laughing!
You have made me one very happy woman today!!!ROFL
 
THE ONE AND ONLY SHOT - DIDI KI SAUT
 
The wedding day of her jiji, Payal Gupta it was
Khushi Kumari Gupta still wondered how it came to pass
The groom's family taking dowry- it seemed all bakwasConfused
Trying hard to save her Babuji's dukaan, she was,
Finally deciding to speak to the groom herself.
Payal, she knew, was too dukhi to be of any helpCry
 The Gupta elders, helpless at the fate in store,
Buaji unable to say anything but "Hai re, Nandkishore!" D'oh
 
Another place, another event, was on that night,
An angry young man, ASR,Angry sat under the blazing light.
To the tune of music swayed models, utterly gorgeous,
When there walked amidst them, our Khushi so nervous.Confused
All set to trip she was, at the spot marked X,
And fall into our hero's arms, she would surely, next;
When there was heard, a screech so loud, "Nahiii!"
Her mouth, a perfect "O", shocked, Shockedstood our Khushi,
For 'twas Anjali, our hero's very own sister.
All stunned, turned to look at this new botherShocked
The only sound heard was ASR's angry "What the!!!"
 
Anjali, pareshaan, she was and very distraught,Cry
Doosri aurat, being more important, "Haaye, the very thought!"Unhappy
Having heard the Khabar from reliable Forums,
She'd rushed there, with no thought or decorum.Ouch
Screaming and crying enough to burst everyone's eardrums,
And to drive even the saints to drinking rum.
Fighting for her haq, her so-called rightful one.
Khushi thinking, "Devi Maiyya, ab kya karein hum?"Confused
Arnav meanwhile, could only say, "What the!!!"Angry
As far as he knew, he could not love his sister.Shocked
 
Tears flowed piteously from Anjali's eyes,Cry
Her vrats, her poojas had resulted in lies.Cry
Threatening to sue them, using her husband Shyam,Embarrassed
She screamed for the one and only, Bulbul Madam;
Who was really quite busy with her other shows,
And rather preferred to keep everyone on their toes.
Anjali with her rona-dhonaCry waited at her beloved mandir,
Arnav and his Bluetooth, could be parted never,
Khushi meanwhile, became chatori number one,Pig
Eating all the jalebis, golgappas, channe just for fun.Party
 
And this was the ajeeb scene that greeted BulbulConfused
When she walked in, despite her busy schedule.
Bulbul and Anjali lost in their discussions,
Neither trying too hard to weigh the options.
Finally 'twas decided, Anjali would be THE WOMANStar
The hero and the heroine, all rolled into one
With this, Bulbul left the "kanphusing" scene Confused
None were sure, what all the changes would mean.
Anjali was Tongue, that she had got her due,
Said "Sorry" to Arnav, who was now feeling quite blue.Broken Heart
 
So now, it began again, with changes anew,
Leaving everyone with a feeling of deja vu.Ouch
To the tune of music swayed models, utterly gorgeous,Big smile
Walking again amidst them, our Khushi now not nervous.
So trip she did, at the spot marked X,
And fell into Anjali's arms, sorely vexed.Angry
Glaring at each other with mutual disgust,
Each thinking the other was an unwanted pest.Disapprove
 
Another place, this time, an helicopter too;
Reporters swarming around, all they see are golden shoes,
Stepping out in a saree from Roopmilan, was Anjali Shyam Jha;Wink
Oh, this woman, decked in Malabar Jewels, she had come so far.
Goggles in one hand, the other held a pooja ki thaali,Cool
With music that better suited a ruthless ASR entirely.
Signing business deals, she was, before ringing the mandir's ghanta
And that, my friends is how ASJ ne ASR ka bajaaya baaja.Clown
 
Thus, ended the shooting of the first episode of the serial Didi Ki Saut,
Generating the maximum TRPs without too much effort.ROFL
Bulbul Madam did her job, that was, oh-so-true,Star
Director's special angles, lights worked- the proof is on Facebook too.Star
Arnav, Khushi and Shyam ko bakra banaaya,Silly
Akash, Payal, aur Aman ko laapta kiya,Question
Running for 4 years, on the Moon Minus Channel.
One change by Bulbul, had made all izz well.
So watch Didi Ki Saut, my friends, Mondays to Fridays
Eight o-clock, to see how very well "creativity" pays! LOL



Wow!! This is brilliant Chitra!!!
I hate calling you that... C...
But what a crazy poem created from a mad OS...
Loved how you have used hindi words in between... 
It has added to the quirkiness...
I am sure you had a fun time writing this... because I can feel it while reading...
I should write a few of these kind of mad stories...
It unleashes the craziness in us... Cool

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PhenoixTears

Me three Smile

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Hahaha, god, I was literally rolling on the floor laughing and in the end I was like "What The", ye kya tha?? All in good sense only, throughly enjoyed reading it, superb piece of writing. After reading it, I was like "Kya kahu ab main", bulbul, fizool hai, dhroydhan, di crying for being a lead and double "Di" in the show title totally cracked me up.. No offence to anyone or anyone's personal choice but I never liked Anjali much in the show and I was super happy to read this, brilliant work! 




Hahaha... I am glad you enjoyed it,..
I know the title may have turned off many people...
and most of them must have not even bothered to read...
I am glad you did and hoping that it was worth it! Smile

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dj_arshifan

stalked ur profileWink


Edited!

OMG!ROFL
This was me by the end of it.
BTW you know, IPK was decided to be name 'Vadehi' or 'Didi ki saut' before it got IPKKND!
So at first I thought you got inspired by that,reading the title. But i was wrong!

So here everything was reversed!
Gul became bulbulLOL
The lead was taken by di
Arnav & khushi became mere laxmijiLOL
And then akash, payal & other family members..i don't think even would've existedLOL

A very good try at humor! You should write more of these.
And yes, an Index sooonish...bas!

Haha!! Yes at a point of time, the whole IPK forum was gossiping about Didi Ki Saut...
I really wanted to write a piece on it for the longest time...
I am glad you enjoyed reading it... becasue it was meant to make everyone laugh!!
And Oh yes... everyone seems to be wanting me to make an index!! Shocked
One more job on the joblist!! Wink

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kondhili

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**Edited**

That was hilarious...ROFLI was laughing out really loud by the end of this and my daughter was wondering what the hell is wrong with her same mom.

You made khushi fall into Anjali's arms LOL and the whole helicopter thing had me up in splits.

I can't believe that you are the same person who gave us the super sexy and hot ss '7 sins'.
This piece had some amazing comedy, which clearly shows that you can drip your hands in all the genre.  You are one talented writer. Bas Clap

Mints - I can clearly see, its time to make an Index girl.  Will make life a little more easier for us as well. 

Haha Liza... LOL
You cracked me up with your comment... I am glad you enjoyed reading it...
And well thank you for such lovely compliments...
Will be thinking about an index soon... but I find it damn weird... Have been writing for not even two months and here I am making an index... Its just beyond my imagination... Smile

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