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CC~21 Yeh Dosti hum Nahi Chhodenge Strictly I/O (Page 56)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AquaSandhya

There is something about her style of wrting that doesnt work for me...her language is good but her sentence structure or something is unnatural...so many times i juts skim...so i feel bad to comment not readind it well enoughTongue

Initially, I had that problem too... The problem is in the tense she uses...She mostly uses present tense when she should be using past tense & then she slips into past continuous tense when she should using present continuous tense... So any who, I just overlook that & substitute my own tense & go for the meat of the tory... LOL

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pixiegirl

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

There is something about her style of wrting that doesnt work for me...her language is good but her sentence structure or something is unnatural...so many times i juts skim...so i feel bad to comment not readind it well enoughTongue

Initially, I had that problem too... The problem is in the tense she uses...She mostly uses present tense when she should be using past tense & then she slips into past continuous tense when she should using present continuous tense... So any who, I just overlook that & substitute my own tense & go for the meat of the tory... LOL

GREAT job...you broke it down. I did like mkm 1 much better thoughLOL

This one was going platonic for a bit too long but now Arnav is FEEELING it Wink


Edited by AquaSandhya - 25 June 2013 at 10:19pm
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AquaSandhya

Originally posted by pixiegirl

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

There is something about her style of wrting that doesnt work for me...her language is good but her sentence structure or something is unnatural...so many times i juts skim...so i feel bad to comment not readind it well enoughTongue

Initially, I had that problem too... The problem is in the tense she uses...She mostly uses present tense when she should be using past tense & then she slips into past continuous tense when she should using present continuous tense... So any who, I just overlook that & substitute my own tense & go for the meat of the tory... LOL

GREAT job...you broke it down. I did like mkm 1 much better thoughLOL

This one was going platonic for a bit too long but now Arnav is FEEELING it Wink

Oh MKM I was a blast, I have a feeling this one will also be so... Waiting for Arnav to realize his feelings for her, we're almost there, so things should be looking up... But I adore the Khushi she has portrayed in MKM II cute & innocent as a doll... She is someone you want to cuddle for some reason, at least I want to... LOL LOL

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pixiegirl

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

Originally posted by pixiegirl

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

There is something about her style of wrting that doesnt work for me...her language is good but her sentence structure or something is unnatural...so many times i juts skim...so i feel bad to comment not readind it well enoughTongue

Initially, I had that problem too... The problem is in the tense she uses...She mostly uses present tense when she should be using past tense & then she slips into past continuous tense when she should using present continuous tense... So any who, I just overlook that & substitute my own tense & go for the meat of the tory... LOL

GREAT job...you broke it down. I did like mkm 1 much better thoughLOL

This one was going platonic for a bit too long but now Arnav is FEEELING it Wink

Oh MKM I was a blast, I have a feeling this one will also be so... Waiting for Arnav to realize his feelings for her, we're almost there, so things should be looking up... But I adore the Khushi she has portrayed in MKM II cute & innocent as a doll... She is someone you want to cuddle for some reason, at least I want to... LOL LOL

I aBSOLTELY agree with you ...this Khushi is a doll a perfect foil for the troubled Arnav. She will not let him be sad and that is what you want...a partner who makes you happyLOL

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
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