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Chitra_11 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged

Charmi my special Hugto you for 'friendship day' and for creating a 'WOW' factor in your story telling.  I think the deeper you go into past,  the deeper or more interesting the past get. And I think that's the job of a writer. The past became the hero of this chapter and 'picture abhi baki hai merey dost'...Right Charmi !

People can make the most gains for themselves at the cost of others weakness...and that we saw in form of Raj. Was happy to see Priya not allowing him to take advantage and let her action speak  louder in form of slap. The convo between Aakash- Priya ...heard by Arti and how Aman nd Arti are going to help the situation will be interesting to see how u unfold ...and yes with Yash behind doing his bit by getting to know about his wife's past was a sweet move.

Phalguni Ma's way of explanation to Arti in the temple and how her dad explains of her Ma  turning into a star was a fab one. The Gift in form of  diary  which should be read only after Arti reaches the age 10 was very touching and here you again reminded me of Karan Johar.

The hospital scene were Arti loses her Ma and then her Pa is extremely emotional and am waiting to see how she grows as a person and deals with the outside world.

Charmi...seriously ...throwing light into Arti's past is quite interesting and UNIQUE. Loved it for being diffferent. Detailing is excellent.  Will b waiting for your pm.  Good job!

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teja21 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear

thanx fr d pm

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maaneetkimeet Goldie

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Hey dear awesome superb update fabulas love to emotional the past was really heart touching ur fab writer dear you always make me run out of words for ur update ...it wowwwee update love but i did cry in this update my cute baby arti awww ...but her past is to much heart touching ...losing parents ...was big thing at very young age ...I hope also yash come to now soon about priya and all the secreta ...I hope that prashat friend don't creat any misunderstanding ...wait for more update and looking forward to see if priya and arti talks or yash will talk to priya ...to many thought comeing in mind right now ...please soon dear it was awesome superb duper hit update with all emotional ...and wishing u happy friendship day ...big hug to u ...thanks been lovely friend dear

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ns1970 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Oh wow Charmi wonderful updateThumbs UpAlthough it had me in tears I enjoyed it very much.anyways so anxious to know this secret I hope both yash and myself finds it out soon.love the friendship both aarti and Aman share .
Waiting on the next update anxiouslyDay Dreaming

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princess121993 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Abie10

Charmi this was one heck of an incredible and emotional update Clap Clap So that person is finally revealed and he's Raj. This Raj looks like one jerk of a person the way he thinks of Aarti and he later took advantage of the situation to poison Priya more against Aarti after Aarti gave him warning to stay away from them. Angry Angry Glad Priya did the needful and gave him a tight slap. Clap Clap The way Priya said not again Raj not anymore seems all this tension between friends came from him only. Shocked Hehe, Aman-Yash whisperings was about a girl Aman likes LOL but Aarti has her way to get the truth out of them. LOL

So Aakash-Priya's relation is not like normal because its Priya who's holding back Shocked I was thinking maybe Aakash doesn't love her. Ouch Hope Aarti-Aman help her out of her past so she enjoys the beautiful present with her family.

The part of Guruma-Yash on Aarti's past was soo soo touching that I had tears Cry Charmi you write it so well that one could feel all the emotions. Clap Clap So her mom died wen she was that young due to blood cancer Cry they were are little but happy family.Where her mom took her to the temple to make her understand was so emotional and thinking of her age just made me wanna hug her. Cry

Wait, did Rajiv ji also pass away there crying for his wife? Shocked Shocked Oh nooo...what will be of Aarti. Cry

Continue soon! Tongue

loved ur comment abie...you wont believe how happy i get when i get such beautiful comments from u all. It always encourages me to write more and better..thank u so much for supporting me

U r right in guessing...raj is a jerk...n he is prashants best friend you can always guess what kind of person he is...i also love the scene where priya gives him a tight slap for insulting aarti..

nice guess abie...lets wait and watch...what happens next...

aarti alway find her way...dont u think? after al she is our JKR...hehheehehh

yes...priya is holding back...this is becuase she is scared...to open up after what had happened 8 years ago...dont worry..everything will fall into place soon..just wait and watch

i really wanted to make my last part really strong and emotional...u wont believe how nervous i was with this part...but then after a lot of insist from some of our pvians, i went ahead and posted it...u wont believe it i guess but i myself was crying while writing the last part..imagining all the scenes which i was writing

yeah her mom died at a aarti's tender sge of 5...thats really painful for her...

thanks for reading and commenting...will try updating soon

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princess121993 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maha9

My sweet charmi Clap what an update man !!!!
your touching words brought tears throughout the update Embarrassed

And as i guessed with your clue.. python's friend is as cruel as him and so we have the famous proverb "BIRDS of the same feather join together  " Angry...
there is no wrong in arthi, aman and priya getting mad at him... How can he tell arthi as  a characterless woman when he has so much dirt on him and linking with aman..

Even after knowing she is yash, the great business man's wife he cant dgest it haan !! Dead
and his crooked mind works so well to increase the distance between priya and arthi..
AND HE GOT THE PERFECT GIFT FOR IT ClapClapClap good job by priya !!!

Coming to aman !!! Oh God he is in love with bani and yash knows this even before.. then arthi will not leave yash simply !! LOLLOL
The comedy of all is yash's fear of arthi pushing him out of the room at night EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Poor yash !!!!
But arthi will surely help for aman Tongue

The truth of priya's bitter married life is her self coccon she has woven around her..
I wonder how coem even after 2 kids she is so distant from her hubby.. but poor girl that incident has affected her so much seems CryCry

I am so proud of arthi and aman who are ready to help their friend get out of trouble as much as yash feel StarStarStar

OMG arya's dance !!!! Dancing I am sure it would have been so romantic and arthi hiding her eyes to avoid the sadness in it is so cute...

Its said teh people made for each other will be similar in many things.. and arya is so perfect for it...
yash's convo with guruma to know of arthi's childhood id so sweet..

Now starts my tears charmi CryCry
Poor arthi could not have the blessing of being with her parents at a very small age..
her mother's cute way of indicating she is going to leave arthi forever with God's name is so sad ...
Even as a child arthi followed her mother's words and stopped crying but i was shocked with your climax ShockedShockedShocked
I guess even her papa left her along with mumma CryCryCry

I am waiting to read more dear. continue soon !!!

loved ur comment maha...thank u so much for appreciating my work

raj is a jerk...so u know he is prashants best friend...so u guessed it right...

i know...priya did a right thing by slapping that jerk...he deserved it...heheheh

yes...aman is in love ...n yas knew it...but aarti had to know it..right...she always has her way out..afterall she is JKR

i am glad u loved that light scene...hehehehe

yeah...priya has created a shell around herself so that no can can again hurt her...

even i am proud of aarti and aman and so is yash...heheheh

maha...i always wanted to see an emotional dance of yash and aarti..n i thought this was a perfect timing to use it...i had not planned it...it just popped up in my mind when i was writing this part

i am so glad that  could make the last part as effective as i had thought...i am so sorry i made u cry...n i am happy that u liked it...

yeah u r right...it is really horrible for aarti to see her parents dieing in front of her eyes at a tender age of 5...its very painful for her

thank u so much for reading and commenting...wil try updating soon

princess121993 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sb1410

This is a very emotional update love every scene/word of it Heart

thank u so much for appreciatting

thank u so much for reading and commenting

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princess121993 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by freya123

superb part

thank you so much for reading and commenting

will try updating soon

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