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VirMan SS : The Fighter Chap3 Updated Page 5 (Page 5)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Shortyyy Waala Update Che!!!! But Dil Garden Garden Ho Gaya Che!!



You made that Flower and Their First meeting Connection Brilliantly !!


Loved How She trust Viraat till infinity and Still believes he will come back



When he knows the Truth!!

My Question ..What is that Truth ???

Update Jaldi

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
awesome update!!
loved it that how much manvi trusts her virat.
suspense is just increasing with every update
waiting for next update.


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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Hey awsm story ...
very nice concept...
Have sent you a buddy reqst...
Pls do pm me when you updt...

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
sooo virat know she is in jail, and that too from last 5 years...okay so maybe virat is missunderstanding but he should talk to maanvi...he should have come to meet her for once...waiting for next...continue soon

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
so virat is alive and he also knoww that she is in jail still he didnt come to take her back.nor help her with instead ge was angry on her for what ???
gonna meet again howw ?? and can she be soo sure that he will meet her again tommoroww...
excited for the virman meeting
update sooon and plz make it a long one Smile

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Hello! This isnt My Best ! I ju7st wrote what came into my mind! hope you all will like it! do post what You really Felt!!!!

PS: This is the longest I have ever written ;)

Nush :P ;) Dekh.. VirMan Met.. ;) Tere Liye hai ye part ;) :D



Chap 3

After the inauguration he stepped down from the stage . He was pulled into the little crowd that gathered around him …. Waving at him.. trying to touch him….He just made his way through the crowd without acknowledging their smiles. He just smirked .

Rakesh Kaka, the organizer of the mela was with him and he was guiding and talking about all the stalls that had been opened. Virat just spent about like half a minute in each stall, glancing at the stall owner and then moving to the next one in a hast. He kept looking at the stall that was at the end and when he finally reached it he said to Rakesh,

'I can do this alone . Thank you. These are stalls .. not killers.. I can walk alone.'

Rakesh Kaka was taken aback by his rudeness but he just smiled weakely and disappeared into the crowd.

Virat was born arrogant . At a very young age of 22 he had become the MD of Vadhera enterprisers . They had their oen textile industries, Bike accessories, Car accessories , and what not. At 25 , he was well settled in his life. He had everything he wanted. After his parents had passed away in an accident all responsibilities had suddenly been on his head.  At that time there was his father's best friend Mohit Chacha , to guide him through his troubles.  Being an only child, he had felt deserted , lonely, and had taken liquor to be his best friend. At that time, Mohit Chacha helped him sort out his problems and had made him realize the value of life.. and how his parents would have been proud of him if he would shoulder the responsibilities rather than running away from it.

From that day onwards he had stopped drinking and concentrated on his work with dedication  and hardwork. In addition to the Textile industries that his father owned, he was successful in opening the Bike and car  Accessories section, Toy store for children, Book shop and Had made a name for himself and had made the Vadhera Enterprisers the No. 1 in business . He now had nothing to fear.. He had made little friends and lots of enemies in his rise. But he seldom cared what others thought about him.

In the race of life he had forgotten to live it. He led a monotonous life , filled with meetings, money talks and nothing else. He had learnt not to care for anyone. Mohit chacha was the only person whom he cared sincerely. But after Chacha's  sudden demise, Virat had started being more arrogant and rude. Even his employers were scared of his anger .

Not many people had caught his attention in his life. But today on seeing her he didn't know why he wanted to know more about her. He had always been greeted with smiles and admiration. It was the first time that he saw a frown in a face rather than a smile. And that had made him interested in her. He made his way through the crowd to The Flower stall. He didn't see anyone inside. He sat on the stall's table and started examining the flowers that were kept on it.

'Oye, apne ghar  samajh rakha ho kya .. kaise beth rahe ho.. Chalo utho..'

The chirpy voice made him turn back.

He saw her. That frown was stil there in her face. Her hair was let loose . The wind played in the strands of hair. She was wearing a white anarkali . He coudnt stop thinking that she looked like an angel.

'Oh hello sir'!

Her voice made him wake up from his thoughts. He got down from the table and said,

'Hello.. I am Virat'

'Haan..Pata hai..'

'Oh.. tumhe pata tha..woh mujhe pata nahi tha'

'Mazak kar rahe ho..hai to pehle bata dena.. hass loongi.. ghee ghee ghee'

He looked at her with amazement and said,'You hate me right?'

She was taken aback by his sudden question. Seeing her surprise in her face he smirked and said.

'Agle baar apne emotions ko dil mein rakhna seekho.. Sab chehre men aise laoga toh My Lady Bahut pachtaogi'.

'Kya bola tumne… LADY?'

'Haa..isme buri baat kya hain.. tum lady nahi ho kya'.

'You…..' She pointed her finger at him. He caught hold of her hand and pulled her close..She got scared and didn't know what to do.

He saw that the chirpiness and glint in her eyes were replaced by fear . He looked at her closely. He felt her body shivering. He let go of her suddenly and turned and started walking away.

Manvi stood in the stall not able to grasp what had happened. She looked at her hand and stared at him walking away.

 

 

He was lying down in his bed . He couldn't sleep. He lay there gazing at the night sky . His mind was confused. He didn't know what had come over him today.. Why he behaved like that with her.. He felt that he had the right to do whatever he wants with her.. But he coudnt think any reason why he was doing this. He had always lived his life thinking.. reasoning with himself… But today he hadn't thought.. he hadn't reasoned.. He kept looking at the night sky trying to solve the turmoil in his mind.. but in vain.

 

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
thought   virat wud be sweet and caring guy but here he is full of attitude and rudeness...his backstory is interesting...
and virman first meeting tht was differemt manvi still angry with him and he unknowingly getting attracted towarxa her...
nice update and thanx for the pm Smile

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 1:16am | IP Logged
You've just started. Ofcourse you should continue!! A little different from our traditional VirMan, but let's see you unfold this one Thumbs Up

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