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VirMan SS : The Fighter Chap3 Updated Page 5 (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
hey nice prologue it seems very intresting nd manvi is in jail why. Hmm suspence from starting. Plz update the first part soon nd do try to pm me

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:05am | IP Logged
INTERESTING PROLOGUE.

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Wow..Nice Start..!

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
I can feel that this is going to be a good one for sure. 

Manvi in jail. what a start, I wonder what she did. 

Did she kill someone. Shocked

Please continue, in love with the prologue already.

Love Nush


Edited by NushIsh - 25 June 2013 at 10:06pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
its really Nice concept
plz continue it soon n pm me

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Chap 1!!

It was a busy day In The Ganga Ghat. Each and every person in the Ghat were busy arranging their stalls. The Yearly Mela had finally started and it was giving goosbumps to children , headaches for elders controllong their children. Young were running here and there trying to finalise how to decorate their stalls and the old spend their time critisicing each and everything that came in front of their eyes.

But all eyes  were fixed on one stall.. 'The Flower stall' It was so beautifully arranged and the flowers slowly floated in the wind , smiling at the children and the old both who had lined up in front of the stall ogling at the beautiful flowers.

'Are.. ladke ladkiyo.. Stall abhi tak Khula nahi… Mere Bacho pein nazar na lagao abhi!'

A chirpy sound emerged from inside the stall and saying this she came and stood in front of the stall and closed the shutter and smiled her naughty and  mischivious smile at the onlookers.

'Kya Maanvi di.. Hum bas dekh hi toh rahe the na..'

'Bachu.. abhi se dekhoge toh jab Stall khulega toh Suspense chala jayega na..'

She added teasing the children standing near by and waited eagerly for the Mela to start.

'Yeh aaj start hoga kya……' Naresh asked angrily to Manvi.

'Waise inauguration ka kya lena dena.. mela ka maza hi nikal diya..' Piya lamented.

'Inaguration ? Mela start karne ke liye? Kya battameez kah rahe ho?' Manvi asked laughing.

'Tujhe nahi pata tha? Seriously? Ye hi to yaha ki charcha thi.. Tu kaha thi? Aww! Tu phool lane gayi thi ahahaha….'

Manvi looked at them disbelivingly and frowned.

'haa Manvi Koi Badda shadda Bussinessman aa raha hai.. Naam kya tha…'

Their talk was cut suddenly by cheers and loud shouting from the Town People and there was an announcement from the organiser of the mela. Ramesh kaka

'Finally After Much waiting He is here People Of the Hrishikesh town Welcome you Warmly Mr. VIRAT SINGH VADHERA!!!'

Manvi tried hard to see the face of the much talked about 'Virat' . She made her way through the crowd and got near the small stage that had been set up for the inaugural function. She peeped to see the face clearly frowning. She could see a six feet tall man. With broad shoulders  standingbehind Rakesh kaka. His face was not clear. As his name was called out again he stepped to the front . HE looked at the crowd smiling But his eyes caught not not the smiling faces that beamed at him but a frown in a face that made him look at her more closely . He cocked his eyebrows and smirked as he saw the frown growing deeper and deeper in her face. She just walked away from the stage . His eyes followed her and saw that she went inside what looked like a Flower stall.

He decided  that he will definitely meet that flower girl for sure before he left this place.

 

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Amazing start to the SS!!! I hope VirMan meet in the next chapter!!! Can't wait to read the next part!Smile

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 1:54am | IP Logged
wowww this sounds really interesting firstly the prologue manvi is in jail from  5 years ShockedShockedand where is virat ??ConfusedConfused
and the update making the whole concept more interesting manvi the happy go luck everyones fav again with jolly nature how can she be in jail...
manvi already disliking the vadhera and virat noticing her in the crowd Big smile
wanna know how will their first meeting be ...
update next part soon and do pm me Smile

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