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VirMan SS : The Fighter Chap3 Updated Page 5

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Am Back! Big smile


                                                              Prologue

She hid her face with her Dupatta. He slowly removed it and slowly caressed her cheek with his hands. His touch made her wince. He pulled her face closer and lightly kissed her on her lips.


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A clicking sound made her get up suddenly. She opened her eyes. There was no sun.. No flowers blooming happily. No birds chirping in the valley.
But most importantly there was no him.
Without him she was lost. But now she was feeling that her life was no more. Her soul had gone . It was just her body that led a monotonous life.
her thoughts were broken when she heard footsteps coming from a distance.
She got up and went and stood near the door of the cell. She held the cold iron bars with her petite fingers and stared outside.
Manvi had accepted her fate. Her life had been inside that cell.. that prison for like 5 years. She just yearned for him nothing else. Everything else seemed of no significance to her.



Well..guys.. Should I continue? Post in Your COmments! Embarrassed


Edited by IAmAaru - 09 July 2013 at 11:47pm

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Maanvi in Jail :O :O :O :O Starting itself is full of suspense ...Wooww...continue sooonnn Heart

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wow nice start
loved to read it more
update soon

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Roo! You know I've got not much love for VirMan post-Maya track Ouch but this story got me intrigued!Smile Waiting for next update! Tongue


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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 9:27am | IP Logged
interesting
plz cont soon

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interesting  prologue looking forward u r story

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
  Shocked why is manvi inside that cell??
intriguing prologue !! plz continue.. 

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niceee this sounds damn interesting
manvi locked in or sumthin - wud love to read more
continue soon plzWink

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