a lot of things happened in this single update
their 1st meeting, 1st kiss
wonder what is the mystery behind virat
please continue soon
Originally posted by: jannat89[B] wow Amna
rocking update
liked it a lot
thanx 4 d pm dear
waiting 4 next next
update soon β€οΈ [/B
Originally posted by: .Yamin.This is brilliant Amna πππ Bang on yaarππΌ loved the whole update to the core β€οΈβ€οΈ hayye strange stranger mast hai !!~~ π ohho manvi is is drooling over virat starting from the first sigh !!~~ yeh toh honaa hi tha aakir who can resist virat eeks i m juz loving the viren n manvi bond β€οΈβ€οΈ arey manvi sambhal ke !! the way u r drooling virat toh gayyaππ³π omg the last scene !!! β€οΈ manvi filtering with virat gosh wat a sceneπ³ virman kissed !!~~ eeks superb π³π³β€οΈ it was hot n awesomeβΊοΈ pehle hi start kiss :D i m toh loving it ππ par yeh kya wat happen to virat suddenly something is surely behind virat !!~~ kuch toh hai ??? manvi have totally fall for virat
"im happy to fall for virat...indeed he is strange but i love this strange stranger" i really loved this line alot β€οΈ :D looking forward for next update !!~~ will be eagerly waiting :D continue soon :D thanx for the pm Amnaπ€
Originally posted by: devilaonmoonOOOYeee... VampUUU... π² π²...First of all tell me ke tu kis writer ke khun pike aayi hai !!!...Itne aachi writting... itne achhi writing... Yeh hath aur yeh unglia mujhedede thakur... π...Seriously vamps, a trillion rounds of aplause to you re...Aur 1st chapter mein hi kissy... ( Yeh Kiss ko kya naam du... βΊοΈ...)Manvi falling for virat but virat is deppressed because of some unknown reason... so eagerly waiting to read the next part...Pls pls pls cont asap... nahito palti marke ulta kar dungi...Nahi tujhe nahi, iss duniya ko...Better cont soon...π
Originally posted by: manvilover18wow part 1 is lovely and super...
thanks for pm...really can't wait for next update...plzzz plzzz update it quick...
Originally posted by: Ankita1997vampsu ss i am back π this update was awesome ,excellent and mindblowinggg... ππβ€οΈ i just loved it to the core β€οΈ
manvi is trying to know virat πviren and manvi scene was cute πthey kissed me dead π€’π€’something is there in virat actually strange na πmanvi has already fallen for him eekhs!!!!! πi wish he too falls for her soon πi am so impatient πchal update asap πlove u β€οΈ muahhh... :* :* :*π€ a tight wali huggie or my ss β€οΈ
Originally posted by: JenniiferOMG DUDEEE <3
i dont like it, I LOVVEEE ITTT!!this story has an AMAZING start :Deekks virat the stranger se toh aab mujhe bhi pyaar ho gya hai πhaha manvi the detective B|and viren and manvi share a suppperrr cute bond! πpehle hi update mein kisss, wah-wah, aab socho second third aur fourth updates mein kya kya nahi milengye ππsoo super cool begining! πβοΈcant wait to see whats in store for virman :3jaldi se update karlena xDaannd its so beautifully written β€οΈYour awesome ππΌπ
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