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virman ff LOVE- essence of life CHP 3 UPDATED Pg26 new 7th sep 13 (Page 21)

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by .Yamin.

<font color="#660099" size="2">Finally update kardiyaa amnuu ki bacchi !!!Tongue bohot intezaar karwati hai lazy kahiki !!!LOLLOL
Fabulous update amnuuThumbs Up eeks i m in love with this manvi !!! dramebaaz !!!Wink kya style se virat kaa paseena chorwaayaa !!! Tongue bechaaraa phas hi gayaa tha !!! how can he say tat he have kissed manvi !!!LOLLOL manvi ko toh manna pareagaa !!! Wink gosh !!! angry young man virat was hot EmbarrassedEmbarrassed hayye loved the small virman scene !!! manvi mom ki bhi galad timing hai yaarLOLLOL accha khaas scene chal rahaa thaWink
</font><font color="#660099" size="2"><font color="#660099" size="2">wat is the problem of virat ??? wat is stopping him ???something is fishy Ermm</font>jeevika n manvi convo was fun !!! :D i really enjoyed it !!! loved the whole update to the core Heart eagerly waiting for next part !! plz continue soon !!! continue soon samjiii !!!Tonguethanks for the pm HugHeart</font>



<font color="#330099" size="3">hahahaha shukar kar kiya toLOLLOL</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">aweeiii thankuuu chooo muchEmbarrassed</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">ur comments always make me grin like a idiotBig smile</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">hahahaha galat timing na lake tm logon ko maze karti rahun hunnWinkWink</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">ok samajh gayi karon gi na jaldiTongueTongue</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">thanks apne pass rakhConfusedLOLLOL</font>



Tuu bii toh thanks apne paas rakh !!! Samjii !!!:)

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

res
Unres !! Smile
GET UP ?? What Get up ? m already jaginggg ... seee Big smile
aaa ... ShockedTHE UPDATE WAS TOTALLY AMAZING ... u just ROCKED it LARKII .. ClapClap
I thoroughly Enjoyed  Day Dreaming.. eeekkss .. I would Paste the whOle update , if i say my fav. section/dialogue .. EmbarrassedSmile
i loved breakfast scene LOL LOL.. ""
virat did u slept after what happened on the pool  side "" Big smile' i can imagine virat's horrified face after this line ' Dead i Loved  manvi's thoughts "" u cracked me wid her thoughts "" .. ROFL
that lil manvi virat encounter "" ufff "" Embarrassed
And ye aya BOMB Tongue.. J n M .. Jeevs i just loved this Jeevika .. ye wali JEEVIKA chaiye ti mjhe MAANVI k sth LOL.. LOL totally besharam .. Wink
Gaawd .. their convo .. bwaahaha .. "" Best Friend Wali Convo "" ROFL

-

*hellooo
"heyyy manviii "
"goshhh J can u low the volume of ur god damm speakers "
" well if u being devdas then why should i speak like one"
" j shut up and who told u im being devdas "
" apparently i can understand coz i know viren has brought virat with him from america and ive seen him before when i was there for my vacations so i know seeing him any girl would behave like one"
" ya right those wrnt vacations tu mere bechare bahi pe line marne gayi thi"
"shall i cut the call moron "
" ok listen im having a biggg trouble" 
" shot" 
" what a creative reply" i said sarcastically
" manvi ab bak or im gona kill u "
" fine so " and i told her everything what happened and that was not at all censored because i was taking to the most shameless girl in the world aka J
"omggg manviii " arghhh not againnn

" stop screaminggg" i screamed even louder than her 

" u are telling me not to scream when ur busy romancing ur bro's friend who has not even spent a day here"
"correction its been more than a day now " i replied  offended but rather in a sulking tone 

"wowww that doesn't means u will start this besharmi "

"j im cutting the call"
"ok stop let me come here and then we will talk"
"han han dont miss a chance to rape my bro with your eyes"
"get lost "

just pasted thr whole convo , Shocked sorry but i can't help it .. it was hilarious
for me Big smileWink
Now i want next Update ASAP Ermm.. "" Itte lambe chore comment ka FAIDA hona chaiye "" Big smile






hawww sachiii tuba did u commented this one ya kisi or se likhwaya larki roflLOLLOL
thank you so much ur comment really made my dayEmbarrassed
will update soon i promise Star
agar ya raha *runs off* Silly


Big smileBig smile "" Height Of insult "" Broken Heart  Offcourse I commented This , Esa Or kOn LIKHEGA Tongue ..
Dead hawW , u really need to continue soon SMJHI ?? Evil Smile Tongue n DESTINATION kOn cont. karega MAIN ?? hain ?? tell tell ?? Angry Tongue





hhahahahha teri insult ki height bhi hoti hai LOLLOLLOL
nai but seriously i loved reading itEmbarrassed
time to de abhi aj subah liya phirse kehte hue sharam nai atiConfused
now destination's turn wo karun gi Dead mar dalo mujheAngry


Big smile haaan naa Tongue ..DEPEND krta h na Kon kitne Level se Insult krTa h , Tune Kch Ziada hi TOP se KrDI INSULT , tOw height ziadaaa HOGYII OuchConfused "" What m i saying WackoWacko , PAGAL hogyi me "" Stern Smile  PSH -__-
niii , m tOtally Be-Sharam LIKE JEEVIKA n MAANVI Big smile Wink ...
Shocked n hOw can u say that yr Broken Heart, first complete ur Stories thennn I'll think about ur REQUEST  "" mar dalo mujhe ""  .. OK ??ROFLSilly

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krupali

finally done! Tongue
it was short bt, awsm update... loved Manvi's blast on the dining table LOL
..nd Virman part.. it was jst outstanding...
..J is really a besharam!.. bt, this one is better than original one!

now update ASAP and don't forget me! Big smile 





haww abhi bhi shortDeadDead
lol will try to make it longer next timeLOLLOL
thanks for the commentsBig smile
will never forget Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Yamin.

Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by .Yamin.

<font color="#660099" size="2">Finally update kardiyaa amnuu ki bacchi !!!Tongue bohot intezaar karwati hai lazy kahiki !!!LOLLOL
Fabulous update amnuuThumbs Up eeks i m in love with this manvi !!! dramebaaz !!!Wink kya style se virat kaa paseena chorwaayaa !!! Tongue bechaaraa phas hi gayaa tha !!! how can he say tat he have kissed manvi !!!LOLLOL manvi ko toh manna pareagaa !!! Wink gosh !!! angry young man virat was hot EmbarrassedEmbarrassed hayye loved the small virman scene !!! manvi mom ki bhi galad timing hai yaarLOLLOL accha khaas scene chal rahaa thaWink
</font><font color="#660099" size="2"><font color="#660099" size="2">wat is the problem of virat ??? wat is stopping him ???something is fishy Ermm</font>jeevika n manvi convo was fun !!! :D i really enjoyed it !!! loved the whole update to the core Heart eagerly waiting for next part !! plz continue soon !!! continue soon samjiii !!!Tonguethanks for the pm HugHeart</font>



<font color="#330099" size="3">hahahaha shukar kar kiya toLOLLOL</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">aweeiii thankuuu chooo muchEmbarrassed</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">ur comments always make me grin like a idiotBig smile</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">hahahaha galat timing na lake tm logon ko maze karti rahun hunnWinkWink</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">ok samajh gayi karon gi na jaldiTongueTongue</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">thanks apne pass rakhConfusedLOLLOL</font>



Tuu bii toh thanks apne paas rakh !!! Samjii !!!:)


samajh gayi madam yamnu LOLLOL

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

res
Unres !! Smile
GET UP ?? What Get up ? m already jaginggg ... seee Big smile
aaa ... ShockedTHE UPDATE WAS TOTALLY AMAZING ... u just ROCKED it LARKII .. ClapClap
I thoroughly Enjoyed  Day Dreaming.. eeekkss .. I would Paste the whOle update , if i say my fav. section/dialogue .. EmbarrassedSmile
i loved breakfast scene LOL LOL.. ""
virat did u slept after what happened on the pool  side "" Big smile' i can imagine virat's horrified face after this line ' Dead i Loved  manvi's thoughts "" u cracked me wid her thoughts "" .. ROFL
that lil manvi virat encounter "" ufff "" Embarrassed
And ye aya BOMB Tongue.. J n M .. Jeevs i just loved this Jeevika .. ye wali JEEVIKA chaiye ti mjhe MAANVI k sth LOL.. LOL totally besharam .. Wink
Gaawd .. their convo .. bwaahaha .. "" Best Friend Wali Convo "" ROFL

-

*hellooo
"heyyy manviii "
"goshhh J can u low the volume of ur god damm speakers "
" well if u being devdas then why should i speak like one"
" j shut up and who told u im being devdas "
" apparently i can understand coz i know viren has brought virat with him from america and ive seen him before when i was there for my vacations so i know seeing him any girl would behave like one"
" ya right those wrnt vacations tu mere bechare bahi pe line marne gayi thi"
"shall i cut the call moron "
" ok listen im having a biggg trouble" 
" shot" 
" what a creative reply" i said sarcastically
" manvi ab bak or im gona kill u "
" fine so " and i told her everything what happened and that was not at all censored because i was taking to the most shameless girl in the world aka J
"omggg manviii " arghhh not againnn

" stop screaminggg" i screamed even louder than her 

" u are telling me not to scream when ur busy romancing ur bro's friend who has not even spent a day here"
"correction its been more than a day now " i replied  offended but rather in a sulking tone 

"wowww that doesn't means u will start this besharmi "

"j im cutting the call"
"ok stop let me come here and then we will talk"
"han han dont miss a chance to rape my bro with your eyes"
"get lost "

just pasted thr whole convo , Shocked sorry but i can't help it .. it was hilarious
for me Big smileWink
Now i want next Update ASAP Ermm.. "" Itte lambe chore comment ka FAIDA hona chaiye "" Big smile






hawww sachiii tuba did u commented this one ya kisi or se likhwaya larki roflLOLLOL
thank you so much ur comment really made my dayEmbarrassed
will update soon i promise Star
agar ya raha *runs off* Silly


Big smileBig smile "" Height Of insult "" Broken Heart  Offcourse I commented This , Esa Or kOn LIKHEGA Tongue ..
Dead hawW , u really need to continue soon SMJHI ?? Evil Smile Tongue n DESTINATION kOn cont. karega MAIN ?? hain ?? tell tell ?? Angry Tongue





hhahahahha teri insult ki height bhi hoti hai LOLLOLLOL
nai but seriously i loved reading itEmbarrassed
time to de abhi aj subah liya phirse kehte hue sharam nai atiConfused
now destination's turn wo karun gi Dead mar dalo mujheAngry


Big smile haaan naa Tongue ..DEPEND krta h na Kon kitne Level se Insult krTa h , Tune Kch Ziada hi TOP se KrDI INSULT , tOw height ziadaaa HOGYII OuchConfused "" What m i saying WackoWacko , PAGAL hogyi me "" Stern Smile  PSH -__-
niii , m tOtally Be-Sharam LIKE JEEVIKA n MAANVI Big smile Wink ...
Shocked n hOw can u say that yr Broken Heart, first complete ur Stories thennn I'll think about ur REQUEST  "" mar dalo mujhe ""  .. OK ??ROFLSilly



hahaha mujhe pata hai ur pagalLOLLOLLOL
ahunnn update bhi mujhse chahiye marne k plan bhi mere wah LOLLOL
lol dont worry ive started working on destination Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by nimi00

ROFLROFLHilarious update. Mannu is too much, she hinted to Viren what happened.  They almost kissed again, Manvi is so besharam in this story, I love it. ROFL.  The moments between her and Virat, they just made me blush, they were so well written and intense Blushing.  Now to Jeevika, I don't even know where to start, she made me fall off my bed laughing with her line "the land which is my homeland from the day ive fallen in love with my sexy" she is too much, she came to help Mannu but is in her dreamland of Viren.  I love this Jeevika! Virat's past has me worried, I hope he accepts Mannu soon as obviously we can see he can't resist her LOL. Thank you for the PM and this update Hug.


hahahhaha thank uLOLLOL
ur comment made me laugh like crazyWink
i love this jeevika toooLOLLOL
awww ur always welcome nimmiHug
Your update made me laugh so hard LOL I really love the Jeevika in your story, is there a way I can take her out and put her in the show too.ROFL.  I think it would be interesting seeing this side of Jeevika on TV LOL

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

Originally posted by vamps1996

Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

res
Unres !! Smile
GET UP ?? What Get up ? m already jaginggg ... seee Big smile
aaa ... ShockedTHE UPDATE WAS TOTALLY AMAZING ... u just ROCKED it LARKII .. ClapClap
I thoroughly Enjoyed  Day Dreaming.. eeekkss .. I would Paste the whOle update , if i say my fav. section/dialogue .. EmbarrassedSmile
i loved breakfast scene LOL LOL.. ""
virat did u slept after what happened on the pool  side "" Big smile' i can imagine virat's horrified face after this line ' Dead i Loved  manvi's thoughts "" u cracked me wid her thoughts "" .. ROFL
that lil manvi virat encounter "" ufff "" Embarrassed
And ye aya BOMB Tongue.. J n M .. Jeevs i just loved this Jeevika .. ye wali JEEVIKA chaiye ti mjhe MAANVI k sth LOL.. LOL totally besharam .. Wink
Gaawd .. their convo .. bwaahaha .. "" Best Friend Wali Convo "" ROFL

-

*hellooo
"heyyy manviii "
"goshhh J can u low the volume of ur god damm speakers "
" well if u being devdas then why should i speak like one"
" j shut up and who told u im being devdas "
" apparently i can understand coz i know viren has brought virat with him from america and ive seen him before when i was there for my vacations so i know seeing him any girl would behave like one"
" ya right those wrnt vacations tu mere bechare bahi pe line marne gayi thi"
"shall i cut the call moron "
" ok listen im having a biggg trouble" 
" shot" 
" what a creative reply" i said sarcastically
" manvi ab bak or im gona kill u "
" fine so " and i told her everything what happened and that was not at all censored because i was taking to the most shameless girl in the world aka J
"omggg manviii " arghhh not againnn

" stop screaminggg" i screamed even louder than her 

" u are telling me not to scream when ur busy romancing ur bro's friend who has not even spent a day here"
"correction its been more than a day now " i replied  offended but rather in a sulking tone 

"wowww that doesn't means u will start this besharmi "

"j im cutting the call"
"ok stop let me come here and then we will talk"
"han han dont miss a chance to rape my bro with your eyes"
"get lost "

just pasted thr whole convo , Shocked sorry but i can't help it .. it was hilarious
for me Big smileWink
Now i want next Update ASAP Ermm.. "" Itte lambe chore comment ka FAIDA hona chaiye "" Big smile






hawww sachiii tuba did u commented this one ya kisi or se likhwaya larki roflLOLLOL
thank you so much ur comment really made my dayEmbarrassed
will update soon i promise Star
agar ya raha *runs off* Silly


Big smileBig smile "" Height Of insult "" Broken Heart  Offcourse I commented This , Esa Or kOn LIKHEGA Tongue ..
Dead hawW , u really need to continue soon SMJHI ?? Evil Smile Tongue n DESTINATION kOn cont. karega MAIN ?? hain ?? tell tell ?? Angry Tongue





hhahahahha teri insult ki height bhi hoti hai LOLLOLLOL
nai but seriously i loved reading itEmbarrassed
time to de abhi aj subah liya phirse kehte hue sharam nai atiConfused
now destination's turn wo karun gi Dead mar dalo mujheAngry


Big smile haaan naa Tongue ..DEPEND krta h na Kon kitne Level se Insult krTa h , Tune Kch Ziada hi TOP se KrDI INSULT , tOw height ziadaaa HOGYII OuchConfused "" What m i saying WackoWacko , PAGAL hogyi me "" Stern Smile  PSH -__-
niii , m tOtally Be-Sharam LIKE JEEVIKA n MAANVI Big smile Wink ...
Shocked n hOw can u say that yr Broken Heart, first complete ur Stories thennn I'll think about ur REQUEST  "" mar dalo mujhe ""  .. OK ??ROFLSilly



hahaha mujhe pata hai ur pagalLOLLOLLOL
ahunnn update bhi mujhse chahiye marne k plan bhi mere wah LOLLOL
lol dont worry ive started working on destination Embarrassed


aahh It Hurts Broken Heart ,  u MADE me PAGAL huh "" Angry glare "" Angry Tongue
LyoO !! Big smile U Urself Said it "" Mar Dalo Mjhe "" n vO kehte hn naa , - ur wish is my command "" metOw yhii follow kr rhi ti "" TongueTongueSilly ..
yaayy yaayy , SHABASHH LARKI .. Smile

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