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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:33am | IP Logged
hello TRians.. i am back with my new OS.. okay so "patie" aka annie gave me this challenge so here it is aanie... hope you like it.. n so sorry if it's not up to your expectations.. shayad kuch alag likhne ke chakkar mein maine iss OS ko barbaad kar diya.. oops.. so pehlese sorry.. 

song: tadap tadap ke from hum dil de chuke sanam
situation: rey devdaas n taani paro.. 
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In Vp sir's cabin

Rey with gang: sir may we??

VP sir: yes..

Rey: sir you called us??

VP sir: yeah.. guys as u all know cultural event aa raha hai so humare yaha dance toh humesha hote hai bt iss saal hum kuch naya karne wale hai.. iss baar hum drama karenege.. yeah usmein dance n all allowed hai.. so r u guys ready?

All: yes sir'

VP sir: so u all may leave now..

(all went from there..)

At RH

Nil: guys iss baar kuch naya karte hai'

Bharat: haa re kuch fadu karenge'

Neha: neha thinking pls koi love story dikhayenge na..

Simmi: okay babes.. bt kaunsi cuz sare toh common ho chuke hai.. like laila majnu, Romeo Juliet hum dikhayenge kiski love story?

(All started thinking when suddenly rinni yelled)

Rinni: guys kyun naa iss baar devdaas paro ki kahani dikhaye??

(all stared at her .. after some moments..)

All: rinni made sense '

Swayam:  okay guys now be serious.. hume storyline toh mil gayi bt devdaas n paro kaun honge??

I think devdaas ke liye rey better rahega.. as humare acting ka guru toh wahi hai.. aur bakike role hum devide karlenge..  bt paro??

Vicky: Sharon u try this time..

Rey: no way' paro mini skirt mein achchi nahi lageli.. aur uparse har dialogue mein bolegi  devuuu stop being cheapo..

Amar: haa.. toh neha??

Rey: yeah yeh ho sakta hai.. neha try one dialogue..

Neha: okay okay.. "Devdaas paro can't leave tumhare bina"

All in unison: not neha for sure..

Swayam: I think iss role ke liye taani suit hogi..

Taani: no bhai.. mujhe koi participate nahi karna..

Rey: kyun mere sath acting karne se dar lagta hai?

Taani: ohh please apne so called reyaansh singhaniya dream se bahar aayiye..

Rey: so aur kya wajah hai??

Taani: bhai I am in..

(rey smiled after hearing yes from her.. for almost one month they practiced for drama.. now today was the day of their performance.. all were ready..  bt someone was very nervous.. yeah that someone was rey..  he was in RH, biting his nails when swayam came there..)

Swayam: rey.. yaha kya kar raha hai?? Drama abhi shuru hone wala hai dude.. u must go.. everyone is looking for you..

Rey while gulping his saliva: dude maine stage pe dance kiya hai, tum sab ke saamne acting ki hai bt stage pe'  mujhe dar lag raha hai yaar.. uparse main bhool raha hoon sabkuch..

Swayam: THE REYANSH SINGHANIYA stage pe dialogues bolnese dar raha hai??? (swayam started laughing.. he stopped when he saw rey glaring at him..) okay.. dun wry dude' main hoon na.. ek kaam karte hai.. yeh wireless earphone daal apne kaan mein aur main tujhe jaise bataunga waise karna stage pe.. main apna phone speaker pe daal ke tuje script padhke bataunga.. okay?

Rey: haa.. yeh sahi rahega'  chal ab chalte hai'

 

On stage

Taani was delivering her dialogues very beautifully that rey got lost in her.. 

Taani as paaro: deva tumne mujhe pehle roka nahi aur ab mein rukne wali nahi.. meri shadi hone wali hai.. tumse mein ek aakhri baar milne aayi hoon.. chalti hoon..

(rey was suppose to stop her bt he was lost in her bengoli get up that he didn't even pay attention on her dialogues.. taani freaked out bt she decided not to show to audience..  so she composed herself)

Taani: deva main jaa rahi hoon..

(still rey didn't pay attention..)

Taani: deva.. thik hai.. main chali jati hoon..

(n she went from stage.. n here swayam spoke on his phone.. )

Swayam: reyyy' kya kar raha hai.. taani.. ughh.. I mean paro chali gayi hai.. abhi song hai' tera abhi break down hone ka waqt hai.. neeche baith'

(rey came out of his trance n followed swayam's advice.. n sat on floor..  bt his mind was still busy with her thoughts.

                                               Bejaan Dil Ko 

                                               Bejaan Dil Ko 

 

(rey was jus sitting on floor when he heard swayam's voice again..)

Swayam: beta rey.. khana khane baitha hai??? Abe saale rona hai tujhe' pls ro le mere laal, hare, nile, pile'

Rey started crying.. now swayam thought everything is under control n he sighed..

                               Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya

                      Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

Again taani went to the stage n caressed his cheek n ran from there'  rey saw in her eyes when she was caressing his cheek n again got lost in her eyes.. he was staring at her after she left the stage.. swayam came to know dat it's not gonna be easy for him.. n he again said..

Swayam: rey meri behen stage ke bahar gayi hai.. abhi ghurna band kar aur drama pe dhyan de..  sun tujhe abhi contemporary dance karna hai.. so shuru hoja..

            Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi
           Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
                        To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
             To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein [x2]

 rey came to his senses n started doing some contemporary steps'  finally he was dancing with full passion' 

swayam: finally right track pe jaa rahi hai gadi.. okay rey sun abhi taani aayegi aur tujhe ek hug karegi tujhe bas smile karni hai okay.. 

                               Ajab Hai Ishq Yaara
                           Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyaan

Taani came n hugged him.. as she hugged him his heart skipped a beat n he also hugged her back with a cute smile..

Swayam: okay rey ab taani hug break karegi n then tu try karega hug karne ke liye bt woh uska hand tere chest pe rakhegi..  n chali jayegi..

(swayam to himself: kya time aaya hai' behen ko gale laganeke tarike batane pad rahe hai.. )

                          Gam Ke Khazaane Milte Hain 
                                  Milti Hai Tanhaiyaan

Taani tried to break the hug bt rey wasn't ready to leave her' she tried a lot bt all in vain.. his grip was too tight.. she whispered in his ear..

Taani: rey leave me.. hum mere room mein nahi hai' chodo mujhe'

Here swayam panicked.. till then Vicky,nil , amar, bharat entered..

Vicky on swayam's phone: dude rey yahi pe suhag raat manayega kya???

(swayam glared at him bt he didn't care.. )

Finally taani broke the hug n rey tried to hug her again bt she stopped him by keeping her hand on his chest n then she ran from there again..

Swayam: rey pls drama ki band mat baja yaar..  abhi sun tujhe fir se break down hona hai n then tu taani arghh paro ko yaad karke rone wala hai..  n again dance okay..

                       Kabhi Aansoon Kabhi Aahein
                         Kabhi Shikve Kabhi Naalein
                            Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye

  Now rey did the same as swayam told him to do..  he danced for his love..

                                                 Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye 

                                            Mujhe Din Ke Ujaalon Mein

                                 Teri Yaadein Tadpayein

He really felt like he will die if taani won't come back to him..  n started doing aggressive dance..  everyone in audience was awestruck to see such a passionate dance sequence.. they saw real devdaas in rey..

                                               Teri Yaadein Tadpayein 

                                Raaton Ke Andheron Mein
                                  Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye

He danced remembering his confession, taani n his first date, taani n his first valentine's day.. 

                              Machal Machalke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi
                  Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
                            To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
                     To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

N then he remembered how he hurt her by faking break up.. n how she was shattered after that..  he felt really guilty that tears started rolling down from his hazel brown eyes..

                                                            *Music*

It was taani's turn to come on stage n wipe his tears.. she came n as soon as she came rey hugged her tightly.. taani firstly hesitated bt then she thought it is not right place to say anything  so  she had to go with the flow..  she caressed his back n he closed his eyes..

Swayam: rey chodega taani ko??? Tujhe usse hug karna nahi hai.. tujhe taani ka hath pakadke dusre side leke jaana hai abhi aur upar bhagwaan ki taraf ungli uthake agli line bolni hai n then taani ki taraf dekhna hai..

Vicky: are rehne de na.. dekh na kitne cute lag rahe hai dono yaar.. rey tu aise hi reh..  (Vicky to nil).. u knw nil I think rey ko kiss karna chahiye taani ke cheek pe..

                                                  Agar Mile Khuda To
                                Poochhoonga Khudaya

Rey came to his senses n then broke the hug bt he only listened vicky's last words so he kissed on her cheek.. taani was confused.. she didn't know how to handle this situation..

Swayam: rey teri yeh harkat line ko suit kar rahi hai ya nahi yeh toh dekhle bhai..  (to vicky) n Vicky I will kill you agar tune abhi mooh khola toh'

Nil: I know right.. Vicky tu chup reh.. actually rey ko taani ko forehead pe kiss karna chahiye..

                                           Jism Mujhe Deke Mitti Ka
                          Sheeshay Sa Dil Kyon Banaya

Again rey only heard nil's words n he kissed on her forehead..

Swayam: rey saale sheesha tut gaya.. kaminey kyun drama ki vaat laga raha hai.. abe ek baar lines toh sun.. lines emotional hai aur tu romantic ho raha hai.. meri baat sunai nahi deti.. inn gadhonki baat sunai deti hai tujhe.. arghh'

Pls rey chod paro ko tu devdaas hai Romeo nahi' tujhe knees pe baithna hai aur paro ko samne bithake use dekhna hai..

                                                 Aur Us Pe Diya Fitrat
                                 Ke Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat
                                   Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat

Finally rey heard swayam's voice n did all the things which swayam instructed.. bt as soon as he saw in her eyes they started their eye to eye conversation..

 rey: taani pls come back.. I really want you to stand by my side..

 taani: rey ab hum dono ke beech mein kuch bhi nahi ho sakta kuch nahi..

 rey came out of his trance when swayam cleared his throat..

swayam: rey now u hav to stand up n then paro khadi hogi aur chali jayegi bhagke.. 

                           Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Us Pe De Diya Kismat

                               Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat 

 

taani stood up n started going when rey heard vicky's voice..

 vicky: rey yaar itna cute scene chal raha tha.. kash tu use rok leta yaar..

 n that was it.. rey ran up to her n grabbed her wrist.. 

swayam: reyyy.. tu meri baat sunega??? pls use chod..

 rey left her hand bt nil interrupted swayam..

nil: rey yahi mauka hai hath pakad le..

                                 Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat

                          Hai Yehi Kya Vo Mohabbat

                             Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat 

rey again held her hand.. 

swayam: rey hath chod..

 rey released her hand..

vicky: rey pakad..

rey held her hand..  

                 Sisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi

            Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

                        To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

                To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

swayam: rey abey line toh sun.. tu aise pagalon jaise kyun react kar raha hai??? chod usee.. tujhe paro ko yaad karke firse dance karna hai.. 

rey left her..

vicky: rey hug her..

rey hugged her..

 swayam: rey vicky ki baat kya sun raha hai.. pagal .. choddd...

 rey broke the hug...

vicky: rey soch tujhe yeh mauka nahi milega.. kiss her.. 

rey cupped her face.. taani became angry n jerked his hands n ran from there.. rey was standing there helplessly...

                            Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi

                Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya

                                 To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye

                         To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

 vicky: sorry yaar rey.. tere toh drama ki bhi lag gayi aur life ki bhi..

 swayam with full angry face: vicky.. I am gonna kill you..

vicky ran from there n swayam ran behind him..

rey: vicky tu gaya..                      

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phew... done... Wink

sorry for mistakes... 




Edited by kady_taarey - 26 June 2013 at 9:18am

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:28am | IP Logged
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LOL it was funny LOL bechari taani she ws being treated lyk puppet ROFL

chod pakad n al ROFL lol drama rey karne wala tha or swayam ko sab lines yaad tha LOL

i enoyed it thouroughly gud job di Hug


Edited by patie - 25 June 2013 at 8:35am
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
hehehehehe amazing OS LOLLOL 
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFLROFL
emotional scene n an emotional song ko comedy seq bana diya...
it ws hillarious
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
oh my my...it was hillarious...loved it...
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ROFLROFLROFL Loved the Os. It was damn hilarious and also romantic.Seriously, well written.Big smileLOLLOL
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Wow ROFL ... That was too hilarious ! Especially When Rey was listen to Vicky,Nil and Swayam and Was doing everything ulta-Fulta !!

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