Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Virika SS : I'll Get You Back

RiddhiShetye Goldie

Joined: 27 December 2012
Posts: 1058

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:08am | IP Logged

Ohhkkk!! So Hello Guyz!! I'm Just Gonna Write A Story For THe First Time Have No Idea Whether You'll Like It Or No...!! And Sorry As Being In The NewBie Group I Cant Send You Guyzz PMs!! Cry In Case If You Like My Idiotic Story!! LOL Smile

Here I Start!! Smile 

 Chp : 1

It Was A Beautiful Ni8...In The Month Of June Here In Mumbai It's Almost Cloudy Here...Par Aaj Mausaam Bada Hi Mastaana Tha...

The Moon Was Something Different Then Ever! Staring At The Moon Through The Car Window...Jeevika Is Lost In Her Own Thoughts...The Reflection Of Moon In Her Eyes Was So Clear...Looking At Her..Any One Would Get Lost In Her Beauty...She Was In India After Almost 3 Years...

As She Was Adoring The Moon...SomeOne Tapped Her Shoulder...The Person Who Was Sitting Next To Her...

Scene Shift To Viren's Entry!! 

He Was Driving His Red Audi And Glancing Once In A While At The Moon...He Was Actually Missing Something To His Core...Or SomOne In Particular...He Had Some Tear Drops In His Eyes...Par Then As He Reached The Hotel For His Friends Party...He Parked His Car..Got Out Of It...And Was Walking Adoring The Moon Again...Lost In Thoughts...

Just Than A BANG...The Lady And Viren Fall Down...Viren On Her Top Supporting Her With His One Hand So That She Wont Get Hurt...They Both Get Up Making Up Their Dresses...Viren Was The First To See Lady...

In His Mind Tongue

Viren : Ye Toh Bikul Nahi Badli..Abhi Bhi Thik Waisi Hi Hain...Just The Same!! Socha Tha Teen Saal Baad Toh Kuch Badli Hogi Par Nahi...Wahi Khubsurat Aankhein, Ghane Baal...And Before He Thinks Something More..He hears SomeOne Calling The Lady...

Manan : Jeevika...!?!? Tum Thik Toh Hon..? Zyada Lagi Toh Nahi..??

Jeevika : Haa Who Main...She Glances At Viren And Her Eyes Wellup...Tears Roll Down Through Her Beautiful Big Grey Eyes Cry

Viren Is Not Surprised To See Manan With Her...But He's Shattered For Sure As He Thought He's Love Was SomeBody Else's Now...


Lemme Know Should I Continue Or Not!!  Suggestions Welcomed...And Even Tomatoes!!  LOL

Thank You Charu Di For The Title!! Big smile Heart

Chp 1 : Page 1
Chp 2 : Page 2
Chp 3 : Page 6
A short note : Page 7
Chp 4 : Page 9
Last Chp 5 : Page 11

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 26 October 2013 at 1:43am

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naina927 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
A great beginning...
Welcum to the forum...!!!!!

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Anees. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
alonelove IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Cute beginning
Continue soon

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komalkryan Newbie

Joined: 05 January 2013
Posts: 30

Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
superbbb bignning... Smile
just love the way you started with night...and viren's entry in red audi 
story is intresting...waiting for next part.. please continue it soon buddy
love it Heart

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millee18 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:43am | IP Logged
luved ur update...
a grt begining!!!!
awsome work..
cont soon!!!
wlcm to the forum!!!!

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-Charu- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Your di welcomes you to the forum my babyy    Hug

I think you should start calling me Mom instead of di LOL

I wanted to be the first Cry

But its okay! Smile

I told u to post it here so I don't need to read it LOL

Awesum baby, Continue Soon Embarrassed

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girl97 Goldie

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Very nice
Loved it
Update soon please

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