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MG FF : KASHMAKASH pt18,19,epi pg 54 , 64 jul 10 (Page 57)

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It was the glowing night maan and geet were at the theatre it was a old depiction of a very known love story geet's wish ... Maan had wished to spent some good time with the gorgeous lady in his arms enjoying and obviously many other plans he had but his wify was a bit relaistic and dreamy she wants to enjoy the famous play... So maan had no other choices...the couple were shown having a hate relation and which eventually changed into love similar fate to their... They left the play in middle only to find the solace in each other arms...

maan took her blind folded to the fully decorated cottage it was their last day in paris ans he wanted it to be memorable for her... He had done all the arrangements though for a further step he was not ready still there was something he wanted to confess...
maan took her hands and he kneeled down bowing his head he knew that he was wrong and now this was the time to confess his deeds

maan : geet i want to tell you something i dont know how to say how to apologise but still i knew that what i have done was completely incorrigable nahi jaanta tha why i always wanted you and thought that it was the same old lust that i always see while seeing women and i thought i needed you for the same...
geet wnated to stop him saying but he didnt ...geet : maan please i want to forget all these things...
maan : please listen to me once... I know it was difficult for you to accept me after what i did and when i literally forced you that day uss din i know that i have lost you forever... But still you accepted me ...
geet : maan i dont know how to say but i hated you... Nafrat this tumse har uss ehsaas se jo tumse jude hue the par phir i realised that it was best ... Tumhara meri zindagi me aana wo kashmakash...she looked determined and finally said..
geet : can we love each other maan... I dont know how it feels but i wanna feel you and your love.. Do ou love me maan...

maan enveloped her in his warmth...
maan : i will try to love you with same intensity with all my life.. Jaan..

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

maan took her in his arms she was feather light and her blushy self was so adorable...kissing her forehead he took her to the decorated room where the candles were lit waiting for them to melt them in their desire and passion

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge

Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

gently placing her on the bed he very softly kissed her fingers making her to blush and hide in him.. That was the beginning of end of their kashmakash

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

he looked in her eyes for permission this was the first time he had actually waited for acceptance she blinked her eyes lying down making him to feel lucky of her presence in his life..

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa

Ik pal door gawara nahi

Tere liye har roz hai jeete

Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina

Har saans pe naam tera

this was the true worship of love maan kissed her forehead he was loving er just like she was a delicate flower he kissed her palm where she had hurt herself with those thorns... Everything of her belongs to him.. She had submitted herself to his longing and lust that was actually the love

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

soon his lips replaced his fingrs and those eyes were closed feeling the ripples of pain and pleasure that will erupt though them...

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...

Tere liye hi jiya main

Khud ko jo yun de diya hai

Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala

Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala

Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda

Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

she was his better half who completed him in every way.. Eyes closed she was waiting for him to be loved.. He slowly pulled her clothig and made her to cover her in the quilt of him... His eyes looked at her milky white skin.. This was what had tempted him first.. He kissed and licked her every part of body.. Marking her his..

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho..

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


soon they were drowned in the passion and love... Maan lovd her in the most gentle way rubbing off all those bitter memories that are related to them...

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they were so drowned in each other for the rest of the month since maan took her to her fav destination switzerland and to his benefit she was all th time cuddled to him...

it was the end of a phase of kashmakash... May be some more will come if time and their love will face hurdles..
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Edited by suhaaana - 10 July 2013 at 9:13am

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such a lovely romantic update...ur writing are amazing yaar..we will support u all ur stories..pls cont soon..
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awes um part dearSmile

both parts r lovelyBig smile
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  wow lovely emotional update.. te way love blossomed between them and te way geet ki hug missing my maan making my maan to pull his hair was so lovely.. te way they date was so lovely cute..i love  te update
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Aww.. Cute proposal from Maan..Day Dreaming loved it.. So Maneet will start afresh their life..Nice update..Smile
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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
part 19...just loved it
sweet moments of maaneetWink

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 9:41am | IP Logged
awesome update suhaana
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awesome update. eagerly waiting for epilogue and the sequel

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