Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF : KASHMAKASH pt18,19,epi pg 54 , 64 jul 10 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear...sad update!Poor Geet! update soon n do pm! Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read all part..
nice ff and concept..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the 6 parts
Loving it
Maan forcefully married her...after het kidnapping dev might have refused to marry her...
Geet is not accepting this marriage...both are in kashmakash
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.   Maan asking her to leave.  what has he planned, but her brother not beleiving her.  and what happened to Dev.  Did maan take care of Dev and poisoned his mind.  waiting for another update. continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
~KASHMAKASH~
part 7
how will you feel when your parents whom you adore and believe more than your life suddenly doesnt believe you the small bond of trust and belonging gets halted just by feeling the indifference in their behavior... Tears can only tell you that how much you are hurt..
geet looked at her badi ma she leapt in her arms to cry till her heartfelt
geet : badi ma why dad is not believing me i didnt do anything wrong if mumma would be here today then she would have never distrust me ..
simran looked at geet she knew that geet always craved for her mother who left her on the day she was born , even if she tried to fill that void of mother's love it cannot be done since there were many things that she couldnt do those rano could have done and comforting geet was one amongst them
simran patted her back threaded her hair
simran : geet we trust you beta you believe your badi ma right geet nodded...
simran : geet where were you who kidnapped you did he did anything who was the person
geet shivered maan and his thoughts started coming in her mind
geet : i dnt know badi ma ... He didnt do anything his face was covered all the time
geet suddenly questioned simran that made her to feel guilty and miserable
geet : badi ma dev must be worried he didnt knew that i am fine please inform him or he will be unnecessarily worried wait let me call him..
geet was about to call when simran snatched the cell phone
simran : beta dev refused to marry you ..
those simple words again broke her how can he do this to her there must be any misunderstanding
geet : but badi ma how can he , i am pure and untouched .. Geet said in a feeble voice
simran : geet forget him the person who doesnt hold even a small bit of trust can never be good
geet nodded with tears in her eyes only to curse and hate the person responsible for this situation..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii, recently I have started reading ur ff.. liked it... 😊
But Geet didn't tell anyone abt Maan then how everyone would come to know abt him.. then Maneet's marriage..
Nice update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
poor geet is hurt
as her family is not trusting her
she did not tell maans name
trying 2 hide the fact from all
dev denied marrying geet
poor girl again hurt bcoz of mistrust by all

Edited by valli22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

feeling very sad for geet. Dev ka asli chehra saamne aagaya.Atleast badima trusted geet.Now eagerly waiting what maan is going to do😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan is too much uski wajah se her dad is not trusting her
sari problem ki root hai maan😡
badi maa believes her
geet missing her mom😭
dev ka asli chehra sab ke saamne to aaya wo bhi maan ki wajah se⭐️
now what is maan planning to do
cont soon
why u stopped sending pm dear