Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

SS- SANEYEEKA #2 EPILOGUE (by ritzy di) Pg-77 (Page 72)

kavyanjali08 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 October 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Damn beautiful yaar...just simply luvd it!!!!

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drashtirocks1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 5:43am | IP Logged
awesome epilogue... so finally it was a happy ending... i had loved this story immensely but had always somewhere felt that seperating maan and geet was not a good idea... especially as we are all used to all's well that end's well ending from you... hats off to ritzy di was again providing such a great piece of writing... and yeah wanna salute you too for having the guts to write this story... a story vastly different from your writing style... hope to read many such great pieces of writing from you in future too...

                     For the completion of
                                            this wonderful story...

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Susegad IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 March 2014 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Iss Saneyeeka ki dhoon adhuri reh gayi,
She left a lingering ache behind.
Yet the melody of the story was just as beautiful.
I felt every emotion the characters went through while reading this story.
His pain just got to me and I couldn't help but wonder however was heever going to come out of it.
And then she came.
The part when he hears the flute and goes looking for her and finds her on the lawn, that moment for me was the whole gist of the story.
It was beautiful, and ethereal  and I felt that not Geet but hope had finally come into his life.
The way she gave and gave of herself, and drew him out of his shell made me awed at your ability to weave magic with your words.
The Geet of this story was surreal. It was as if she was not even there. She was like a "Mmidsummer night's dream" The fact that you did not share her side of the events made it more so.

Ritzy's epilogue rounded up the ends very nicely. We did not really get answers, however we did get the hope of a happy ending.
Aand Saneeyeka for me was all about hope.
Sanayeeka reminds me of a quote that I think is perfect for this story.

Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for a while, leave footprints on our hearts, and we are never, ever the same"

Extremely sorry for the late, late late comment but I had never forgotten this story and was waiting to come back and finish it.

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-Halima Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2014 at 5:03am | IP Logged
I don't have words for this storyClapClapClap
Everything was like a dream in fairy landDay Dreaming
So mysterious and dreamily and the sweet flute, uffLOL

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Kawan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Lovely ss

loved it...

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xolfiya Goldie

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Posted: 14 June 2014 at 4:19am | IP Logged
I dint knew about ur this SS ufff I read just all the part n its Beautiful again u made me Cry Again [:'(] Beautifully written I hve no words to say trust me Clap Clap

Edited by xolfiya - 14 June 2014 at 4:15am

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AAINAPATEL Senior Member

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Posted: 03 July 2014 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
O! Ths story s so dif... Ekdum dif, concept... Their love s out of wrld...

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simrancuty Goldie

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Posted: 08 August 2014 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
ohh its beautifully written.
such a masterpiece. .indeed geet was a mystery n still m confused who was she? ??
clear my doubts plZZ
is she really a human or an angel???

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