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SS- SANEYEEKA #2 EPILOGUE (by ritzy di) Pg-77 (Page 59)

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
yaar... i really dont know to scold you or praise u for ur mysterious story!!!
but after reading whole story and knowing the end definitely makes us sad n crying!!!

i read ur whole story in one go...
i didnt expect it to end on a sad note... i definitely know that GEET is mysterious... but phir she behaved well like a human being!!!! is she not???

im really so confused abt that... atleast give us GEET part!!!! who she is??? n what she is??? was she really an angel???

im sure not happy seeing MAAN!!! he lost everything...
i literally cried n was holding my heart reaidng last part thinking what would happen... n cried when she left!!!!
aisa nahi hona chahiye ta Cry

awww!!!!! yaar... im still sad...
epilogue me koi miracle hai kya???? im waiting for that!!!
but u wrote story so beautifully... thta im hooked to it... n now reading sad ending made me sad!!!!


Edited by deepthich - 03 July 2013 at 5:18am

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
update ash ...

u cannt leave the story like this ...

geet gayi . koi baat nai ...


sad ends hotey hai ...

par mystary kya thi ...

kon thi vo ...

plz hame baatoo ...

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 1:45am | IP Logged
beautiful story 

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Will we get epilouge fr this pls

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 8:57am | IP Logged

It was a beautiful story Ash...very well written. It had an ethereal feeling and I would say one of your best in terms of writing and story. Yes even I was a little disappointed initially but not because you left it open ended. Maybe because when you ready a tragedy and it was a kind of tragedy it makes you emotional. A silent beautiful love story ended up in separation which was neither explained or understood just tore reader's heart and maybe at the spur of the moment emotions acme out as disappointment. But like old wine, the more you think and saviour you realise that maybe things were not in her hand and she never left him really. She saved his soul from darkness and made him strong to live happily with love which resides on out heart.

 

I have a suggestion. You can actually request your readers to pen down an epilogue as per their imagination. I will send out to you mine and I leave it to you if you want to post or not...

 

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 11:31am | IP Logged
NOTE

hey guys.. so many of you wanted an epilogue for this story. as per me,
 i was not even thinking of an epilogue when ritzy di came up with a brilliant idea.

 if you read her comment in the prev post
you will realize what i am trying to say.


as she had mentioned, this is an open ended story..and it indeed is.
so, if you want, you can give an epilogue as per your choice and i will put it up.
you are free to interpret the story however you want, write an epilogue and send it to me. this will be more than just a help to me...
it will be more like a joint effort.

I will post them so that every one can enjoy a multiple epilogue ss.

so guys, i have already got ritzy di's epilogue...i will put it up shortly.
If you are interested, please Pm me your choice of epilogue and i will be more than happy if you did consider this even a bit and send your brilliant works to me!!!Embarrassed


love
aishu


Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 July 2013 at 11:33am

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it is really very good idea...

this way we will get end of this story in many ways...according to different POVs of different people...

there are many wonderful writers in this forum...so I can't have in me to write anything...

but I would love to read end of this story in many POVs...

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Wow gr8 idea.. 
would be fun to read..
looking forward...

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