Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

SS- SANEYEEKA #2 EPILOGUE (by ritzy di) Pg-77 (Page 50)

tabby999 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged

hello ash 
again  a beautiful piece  of writing  so different from ur other works ..
but one thing its incomplete many questions r left in reader's mind ..
plz put next part to story and complete it justification to geet's part 
tell us who was she ..
after reading though  i feel geet was not a human being but a soul who lives in a flute LOLLOL

plz complete the story and do justification ..

Edited by tabby999 - 28 June 2013 at 1:06pm

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anuandavi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Y finished the SS with so many unanswered questions. Where did she go?

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alicia212 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
wow great story and a nice ending too
i really hope if there is going to be a epilogue
thanks for the pm

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maaniqra IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
expected endingCry

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dhakdhak22 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
geet left maanShocked

maan faith that geet will come backCry

plz want a happy ending

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Mayamaan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
I m so sad to know its finish
its one of my heart touching story
1st time i read 1st part & got involve with this
this ending     never expected
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singh24 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged

   Feeling Bad...Cry 

                      You're sadbecause you can't have her...but what you don't realize..that there is somebody elsewho hides much deeper painfor not having you...

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CrazyMaaneetFan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 2:00pm | IP Logged

1stly i ws shocked dat u kept my comment on top.
Thnx fr reading n answring...

2nd shock... Actually its series of shocks.

Geet left maan,alone,wid her Sanayeeka?
Was she a ghost? Did she also died wid his family bt came back to make him strong?
I think my gues is close to ur storyline. Bt only thing dat confuses me is her dad. Had she died,then he shud hv knwn na.

Aahhh so confused.

Bt m sooo sooo sooo sad, u made me read maaneet ff wid sad ending?
I knw in real life most of story end wid sadness,bt m happy to see happy endings alwaz,In real world its not possible bt let me make it possible in dis world of fiction,d world which is essential part of my life,d world which rejuvenates me,d world which is like stress-buster fr me now.
Bt U made me read sad love story... Not fair.
Nw u hav to compensate by writng anothr Maaneet Lov story,a long one which shud hav happy ending.Plzzz start new ff on maaneet.

As per my comment dat i feel its nt writtn by U.m sry i didnt meant to be rude.I really hope u didnt tk it othrwise.I wrote watevr my heart felt-simple n direct words. The reason fr nt being connected wid dis genre of writng by u is Dat U passed on d fear of Maan into me.
Evrytym i read an update,thr ws strange fear dat in next para thr will b some shock,or in next part thr will b something i would nt like to read...
In a way ur story ws moving within me,in my mind n heart alongwid d fear which maan had.I ws actually reading all these parts wid fear. N in d end it proved ryt. Maaneet separated,though u hv shown its nt separation,bt still...

Its diffrnt.
Read whole ff only coz i lov ur writngs.
Bt will still state dat i hate sad endings ...

Hope to get next pm stating New FF on Maaneet.

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