Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

SS- SANEYEEKA #2 EPILOGUE (by ritzy di) Pg-77 (Page 35)

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Originally posted by PaintedSky


mee too

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many of you r confused abt mohinder's reaction

he wasn't against but which father would like his daughter staying with a man without marriage?Confused


She was too scared to even expect anything. She didn't know what was in Maan's mind. She was scared…though she never ever doubted his love. She knew whatever Maan will do, it will be for her good itself. There was a complete silence and when everyone was sure nothing will happen. He turned to her. His expressions softened but his words remained firm, "shaadi karogi mujhse?"

Time stood still for everyone right there. Not a soul moved..nor did the wind or the clouds or anything. She was surprised…shocked and above all, numb! The world gaped at them and he waited for her answer.

"shaadi karogi mujhse?", he spoke louder for everyone to hear. She jumped a bit hearing his voice, so stern and zapped back to reality.

"but Maan…", she didn't know where all this was going but he didn't even let her complete.

"Geet… shaadi karogi mujhse?", he asked again, holding her hand firmly, strongly.

"Maan..aise kaise…", she tried to reason but he cut her off.

"haan ya na?", his eyes held so much love for her and so much hurt for her…she just couldn't do anything but nod softly, "haan…"

That was the end to it. He dragged her out, pushing away the crowd. People had come for something else..but what they got was something priceless. He pushed her into the car and drove towards a nearby temple. The world stood still, seeing them getting married…probably one of the most beautiful events in the entire world. The nature seemed to rejoice their marriage as well. The clouds came out of nowhere and drizzled water all around. The people ran around to find shelter while they cared for none. He filled her Maang and tied a think gold chain he had carried while coming on such a short notice. She was so thrilled… the biggest event of her life happening so beautifully…though it wasn't as magnificent as her dad had imagined but she was happy. Once they were done, he cupped her face and rested his forehead over hers. He was so emotional… she could just fell it by his abnormal breaths.

"am sorry….", he whispered over her lips, holding her close.

"umm?", she was too overwhelmed by the serenity of the feeling that she just managed to squeak out.

He thought for a while and then pecked her lips softly, "no..nothing…"

He broke apart and carried her out. They knew people watched them..but then could care a damn! They were happy with each other..that was more important than answering anyone about their relationship. They knew they had belonged to each other since day one… just that they had to shut others to make their lives comfortable. He gently made her sit in the car and drove towards the mansion. It was a sweet silent 10 minutes drive to the mansion. Her stomach tickled feeling butterflies zooming around. He watched her from time to time and Smiled to himself. There was this sudden excitement that seemed to worry them. He dropped her in the mansion and turned to her.

"aap kahan jaa rahe hain?"

"got some work… shaam ho jayegi. You go and take rest!", he winked at her and drove away. She blushed a bit realizing the naughty hint behind his words and walked in. the whole house seemed new to her today. She smiled and twirled and laughed. The servants had never seen her this happy before…this glowing! She asked them to  retire for the day and they complied to her orders and left, knowing very well of their marriage. It was all over the news. She had something light and sat down to prepare dinner for him. She chopped the vegetables so delicately…the thought of being his wife was so overwhelming and so endearing when it struck her! It was technically their official Sr! she felt her cheeks heat up with the thought of it. Countless number of times he had touched… made her reach the extremes of pleasure but being touched by him with the rights of a wife was the most desirable thing in the whole of universe. She felt goose bumps on her skin just by that thought and decided to make the night special for them.

She prepared his favorite food for dinner and decorated the dining table. She hummed a sweet note as she worked her way around the house. The stars watched her naughtily and twinkled as if conveying their presence to her. She swirled round and decorated their room with candles. There was nothing more. She just put the candles all around and checked the time. He might be coming back. She blushed and went to take a bath. She dipped herself in the rose fragranced water and washed herself thoroughly. She came out, in a towel and stood in front of the mirror, watching herself. She felt her cheeks turn red just by her own looks. She changed into her normal salwar kameez and walked down to the door.

He was about to ring the bell when she opened it, greeting her with a warm smile. He could just fall for her all over again. He wondered how she knew by his footsteps that it was him. He leaned closer and kissed her lips lovingly. she smiled and hugged him, "I made your favorites today… freshen up fast…"

He cupped her face and caressed her cheeks softly with his thumb, scanning her face, watching that glow. She held his hand dragged him to their room. She handed him his clothes and pushed him into the washroom. He didn't understand what she was thinking. He just followed whatever she asked him to do. The moment he went to the washroom, she dimmed the lights and put on the candles and went out.

He came out wiping his hair, when he saw him dimly lit room. The scented candles filled the room with a sweet aroma. He smiled…so this was why she was hurrying. He felt everything so cute, just like her. His eyes fell on her flute that rested on the table. It sparkled golden because of the candles. It looked so beautiful…just like her. But he wondered how every time he was alone, her flute would come in front of his eyes, again and again, as if it was trying to tell him something. he shook his head…god, he had been imagining weird things. She changed and went out. She was already waiting for him in the dinner table. He sat with his food, watching her restless. She was indeed restless about something he knew…but there wasn't a hurtful reason, he could know it very well, seeing that glowing face of hers. He thought for a while and smiled softly… she was probably restless about the night. He noticed every move of hers…she was eating very quickly and once done, she just cleaned the table in jet speed and rushed to their room. He was certain now that she was indeed up to something.

He sighed and decided to check on her. He stood in front of their room and slowly slid the door. She sat by the mirror, wearing a deep red sari. The candles flickered, making her look even more beautiful. Her hairs were let down…her forehead glowed with the sindoor and she sat, admiring herself. She looked at the gold chain round her neck and caressed it softly. And the next moment, she felt something slide across her neck. She got startled and looked at the mirror.

He stood right behind her while his fingers deftly slid a beautiful mangalsutra across her neck. She sat there numb, over come with emotions. He tied it so meticulously, removing her hair from her back and kissed her cheek, "I didn't get a chance to get it in the morning…."

Her fingers automatically went to neck, caressing the chain, lovingly. he could see her tears sparkle under the candles. He helped her stand and looked at her carefully for some time. She was too overwhelmed to even say anything. Silence lingered, expect their breaths. He lifted her up in a swift moment and made her lie down on the bed. He came on top of her and pecked her lips, "I love you…"

She looked into his deep earnest desirous eyes. She just muttered a umm and he pressed his lips harder on hers. She laced her fingers with his and gave herself to the flow.  His kisses were soft and full of love that was only for her. She gasped, feeling him bite her skin and roll his tongue over it to soothe it. She closed her eyes, letting him have all the pleasures of her body. she felt her pallu slide away from her..his hands cupped her curves, playing with them. She moaned and squirmed under him while he took his own sweet time to enjoy her. The naughty stars felt so shy…they hid behind the clouds and dimmed their lights, even the moon. The wind picked up speed, dancing with the leaved of the trees, rustling them, trying to make its way between them..but she couldn't succeed.

She arched herself, chanting his name as he took in her curves in his mouth, relishing them. He had never felt this satisfied ever in his life. There was an urge to belong to her…so beautifully she came back into his life and filled it with so many colors. The candles flickered and their lights died away but their passion was far from dying out. He entered her ever so gently… making her want for more. This woman held the power to make him helpless in true sense. He didn't even realize when they hit their climax or when they slept off because every time he touched her, he will be compelled to make love to her.




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the way maan authoritavely asked geet to maary him was awesome... proposal MSK style...kuch different to banta hai na boss...

geet was excited after her wedding... anticipating the suhagrat... but nervous thinking about it... happy that finally her dream had come true but anxious about its consequences... u potrayed all that brilliantly in writing...

their togetherness was wonderful...

eagerly waiting for the next update...

Edited by drashtirocks1 - 28 June 2013 at 12:11am
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beautiful n lovely update... finally they r married...

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Excuse me! You need to add a disclaimer! Heart patients ought not read thisROFLROFL
Anyways! Aishu di, this update was so HAWT!! Amazing!! Awweey their SRBlushing
Dil Garden Garden Hui GayaTongue

Edited by .BadtameezDil. - 27 June 2013 at 5:17am

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