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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 95)

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Beautiful...
Wonderful Clap

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
To be Honest , i don't have the 'Perfect' words to describe how this poem of your's actually is...
Seriously!! I'm Speechless Clap...

The lady just wanted to help the man she loves , go through his pain , for that she presented herself N what she got in return was his wrath , haterd Ouch...

This really was Fabulous Approve...
Again awesome choice of words Thumbs Up...
Loved it Heart.

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Amazing !!!

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
It is perceptive, and in places, in the Lady's parts,  it sounds Shakespearan. As for the husband's reaction, that is a man all over! He will never admit that he  might be wrong, after all.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

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beautiful!!!!!!

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very thoughtful.
 Human mind is complicated.
you brilliantly depicted it with your deep insight.


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