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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 90)

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
di samajh nahi aa raha kaise tareef karun...the way u have expressed the emotions is so beautiful...it felt like i'm there...a witness to the entire scene...and the title is perfect...u are a fabulous writer and i love all your poems...and this one is no exception...awesome work di..

love you and love your  poems...Heart

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by friend-forever

teacherji:

aap naraz na ho...
homework karti hoon

Friendship is a flower that beautifies other
that snatches all pathos
in a garden of this world
that is full of beauty of history.



good try...but performance better hote parto.
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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daydreamer...

di samajh nahi aa raha kaise tareef karun...the way u have expressed the emotions is so beautiful...it felt like i'm there...a witness to the entire scene...and the title is perfect...u are a fabulous writer and i love all your poems...and this one is no exception...awesome work di..

love you and love your  poems...Heart


awww...mere critical commentator bhi shirf appreciator banke rah gayiConfused

btw thank u vry muchSmile

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged

 Related 2 poems-

A Rainy Desert - PAGE 18      84152721 


Ever Lasting Adieu- PAGE 96      85372325 


Recap:

She fell in love with him at first sight...he is 18-20 years older than her...in a helter-skelter condition their marriage took place...he was growing feelings for her...one night he was in great pain with the remembrance of his first wife.She wanted to soothe him...so presented herself just like his first wife...he accepted her for that night...in the morning, when he could realize all these...was in vicious wrath with her...at heart,he too has already fallen for her,but don't want to welcome the feeling now...


Love-making Hatred


Person:

Dreamland is a rubbish thing
That always shows colourful glass as a diamond...
Yes, you should have a strong ambition to fulfill your desire
That will be the aggressive step towards your aim-
But dream??...has no real entity at all.
A man gets complete with his mistakes & experience as well-
Not by the fake imaginary dreamland he creates himself
& loves to get lost in it. 

I DON'T LOVE YOU-that's final.

There's no existence of your love for me.


Lady:

 You are wrathful my lord,

You are losing power of thought,to connect the reason & result..

You need rest...you should take time...

Don't put pressure on your heart darling-

It never tells you the lie''that you want to hear.

You can't face the truth that you love me'.

I can understand but...you?? not yet.

 

 Person:

Memories or a bunch of excuses

To escape from the real life??
Problems are such thorns of lotus
Which you should have to touch before the petals.

 

Lady:

Memory pains you a lot-I know,but this time...

This time you should bear it,for your ultimate good.

I'm Helen--I was me,I'm me,I'll be me.

You have to accept me as your love-I'm demanding.


Person:


Mistakes can achieve pardons

Not THE SIN...& repeating mistake is called so.
One having so many future views about the dreadful result
Should have been smashed for his knowingly sin.
There is nothing left to apologize-
Neither to want nor to give.

You have committed the SIN...I NEVER FORGIVE YOU.

NEVER MEANS NEVER.

 





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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 6:30am | IP Logged
beautiful poem 
loved it

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
The lover's convo continued...updated.

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
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