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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 89)

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Moner_Radio

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beautiful poem re .. the pain of a newly-wed bride still in her wedding attire turned into a widow is so well portrayed ! Cry


are...still in her wedding attire e 6ilo na,hubby r dead-body dekhe ota abar pore.

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged

UNCONQUERABLE EMPEROR

 

The only certain thing is uncertainty.

And the key is hope.

Hope can revive man

Hope can kill man.



"hope can kill man "-bolle keno??

 

Everyone is warrior,

War means nothing but destruction.

But hope is there too.

 

Hospital is favourite of none.

But it offers you care when you need it.

So hope is there too.



Hospital chhara kono comparison pele na??LOL

 

Hope is a wide door...

We all live with an eye on hope.

Hope is life, hope is death,

Hope means peace, hope means friend.

friends means just hope?? Confused

 

Hope means what we dream of

This assures our heart...

Surrounded by many a lot unruly soldiers-

Hope is THE ULTIMATE EMPEROR.

 

 

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 7:08am | IP Logged
"hope can kill man "-bolle keno??

i66e holo taiROFL
serious---1ta xample di--Macbeth...cheno to??
avashya er che vlo xmple lady Macbeth...just to make some prediction reality they both committed the most cruel murder of a real good man...& as the tragedy goes ahead,1 gets mentally imbalanced,other gets just vanquishing...committed so many murders..

er che beshi jante chaile pm e eso.Wink


Hospital chhara kono comparison pele na??LOL

dekho-comparion must be done with those things they can relate you properly with the main theme.tulona korar pradhan uddeshya i holo jotota clearly bojhano jai...so hospital.
amr o mone hoye6ilo anno ki6u di...but whimsical mind to,beshi khon rational thakte pare na.LOL

friends means just hope?? Confused


no no...never...friendship is all the time undefinied...at least for my part...plzz notice--
hope means friend.....nt frnd means hope.
clear??

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

"hope can kill man "-bolle keno??

i66e holo taiROFL
serious---1ta xample di--Macbeth...cheno to??
avashya er che vlo xmple lady Macbeth...just to make some prediction reality they both committed the most cruel murder of a real good man...& as the tragedy goes ahead,1 gets mentally imbalanced,other gets just vanquishing...committed so many murders..

Shakespeare's Macbeth...right??
ohh...good example...but so many murders??
Banquo & who??

er che beshi jante chaile pm e eso.Wink


Hospital chhara kono comparison pele na??LOL

dekho-comparion must be done with those things they can relate you properly with the main theme.tulona korar pradhan uddeshya i holo jotota clearly bojhano jai...so hospital.
amr o mone hoye6ilo anno ki6u di...but whimsical mind to,beshi khon rational thakte pare na.LOL

bahh...agreeSmile
whimsical mind ei jadi ei creation korte paro...settled mind hole to...Geek

friends means just hope?? Confused


no no...never...friendship is all the time undefinied...at least for my part...plzz notice--
hope means friend.....nt frnd means hope.
clear??

ok ok...hv noticed it.
don't get irritated plzzzOuch

it seems that u r such a rough & tough teacherEmbarrassed

btw tui bolte pari??

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
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are baba...whimsical mind ei vlo creation hoi...settled mind good creator noi.
Macbeth murder kore6e shudhu Banquo k?? tui kon Macbeth pore6is re??
whole family of Macduff including a little child...vulli ki kore????
teacher ami ektu ektu boti...prim school,hi-school, 1st yr tution sab jaiga teiEmbarrassed 

irritated ami sohoje hoi na...ekhetre hoi ni.

sure...sure...
ta tui frnd bolte ki bujhis?? user-name to ek khana rekhe6isLOL

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

FF:

are baba...whimsical mind ei vlo creation hoi...settled mind good creator noi.
Macbeth murder kore6e shudhu Banquo k?? tui kon Macbeth pore6is re??
whole family of Macduff including a little child...vulli ki kore????
teacher ami ektu ektu boti...prim school,hi-school, 1st yr tution sab jaiga teiEmbarrassed 

irritated ami sohoje hoi na...ekhetre hoi ni.

sure...sure...
ta tui frnd bolte ki bujhis?? user-name to ek khana rekhe6isLOL


vulbo keno????
tor gyan ta ektu nite chailumWink
Macbeth 1st murder kore Duncan k,tarpor Banquo k & then tar kingship r pothe jara ase ba aste pare tader sobai k...r8??

ta teacherji,ami kintu khub dis-obedient studentTongue
 na holei valoEmbarrassed
ami tor moto oto valo kore poem likhe bolte parbo na...but try kor6i...

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by friend-forever

Originally posted by surprising

FF:

are baba...whimsical mind ei vlo creation hoi...settled mind good creator noi.
Macbeth murder kore6e shudhu Banquo k?? tui kon Macbeth pore6is re??
whole family of Macduff including a little child...vulli ki kore????
teacher ami ektu ektu boti...prim school,hi-school, 1st yr tution sab jaiga teiEmbarrassed 

irritated ami sohoje hoi na...ekhetre hoi ni.

sure...sure...
ta tui frnd bolte ki bujhis?? user-name to ek khana rekhe6isLOL


vulbo keno????
tor gyan ta ektu nite chailumWink

sahos to tor kam noi


Macbeth 1st murder kore Duncan k,tarpor Banquo k & then tar kingship r pothe jara ase ba aste pare tader sobai k...r8??

yea...


ta teacherji,ami kintu khub dis-obedient studentTongue
 na holei valoEmbarrassed
ami tor moto oto valo kore poem likhe bolte parbo na...but try kor6i...


wait kor6i

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Posted: 14 July 2013 at 12:09am | IP Logged
teacherji:

aap naraz na ho...
homework karti hoon

Friendship is a flower that beautifies other
that snatches all pathos
in a garden of this world
that is full of beauty of history.



Edited by friend-forever - 14 July 2013 at 12:50am

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