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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 88)

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged

Evolution of something

 

Two thousand years ago,

I've loved a love

A heart spread arms to another

I've written a letter

To that pseudo-unknown heart.

 

Thousand years ago,

The heart got hurt by me

I've wanted to wipe tears

She showed me a mirage

To find a real Wesis.

 

Five hundred years ago,

My sky-minded nature began to fly

Towards Paradise lost

Towards the heaven of troy

To feel the beautiful heart

 

Hundred yrs ago,

Her heart achieved Titanic-love

Mine was hesitating a little bit

I've handed her over the letter

Too late or too early??

 

 

Now,

The water of love

Becomes frozen by something unseen,unknown

We, along with rather love

Staying so far to recall ourselves!!





wow...it has such beauty!!!!!!!!!
really good

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
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ur user-name fascinated meSmile
are...u r following my adviceTongue
thanks a lot dear...u plzz give some critical commentsEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Roxxy47

Again a Heart-touching  poem it was Approve...
Nice choice of words , well woh toh har poem mein hota hai...
Beautiful poem Big smile...
Specially the last stanza Thumbs Up...
Loved it Heart...
N thanks for the pm Smile.


a66a??
har poem perfect??Embarrassed


"a66a??" Matlab?? Embarrassed

N well ya your toh har poem perfect hoti hai Wink

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roxxy47

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Roxxy47

Again a Heart-touching  poem it was Approve...
Nice choice of words , well woh toh har poem mein hota hai...
Beautiful poem Big smile...
Specially the last stanza Thumbs Up...
Loved it Heart...
N thanks for the pm Smile.


a66a??
har poem perfect??Embarrassed


"a66a??" Matlab?? Embarrassed

N well ya your toh har poem perfect hoti hai Wink


a66a matlab is that really??LOL

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 1:12am | IP Logged
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beautiful poem re .. the pain of a newly-wed bride still in her wedding attire turned into a widow is so well portrayed ! Cry

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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 3:06am | IP Logged
beautiful poemClap

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Originally posted by surprising

friend-forever:

ur user-name fascinated meSmile
are...u r following my adviceTongue
thanks a lot dear...u plzz give some critical commentsEmbarrassed


hmm...ur approaches fascinate meWink
u bengali na??
me tooTongue

critical analysis banglai kori??Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 July 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by friend-forever

Originally posted by surprising

friend-forever:

ur user-name fascinated meSmile
are...u r following my adviceTongue
thanks a lot dear...u plzz give some critical commentsEmbarrassed


hmm...ur approaches fascinate meWink
u bengali na??
me tooTongue

critical analysis banglai kori??Embarrassed


wow...phir se bongBig smile
avashya...jate i66e...start koroSmile

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