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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 87)

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by raniluvsasr

Hey thnx for d pm,
loved d update.
Very emotional
Beautifully wriiten.
Cudnt have been more better.
Update soon



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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roxxy47

Again a Heart-touching  poem it was Approve...
Nice choice of words , well woh toh har poem mein hota hai...
Beautiful poem Big smile...
Specially the last stanza Thumbs Up...
Loved it Heart...
N thanks for the pm Smile.


a66a??
har poem perfect??Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rainbow_petals

loved it.
you portray each and everything so beautifully
cheers for p.ms


the inspiration is u,readersSmile
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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Beautifuly written this.
Tf pm.

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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged

UNCONQUERABLE EMPEROR

 

The only certain thing is uncertainty.

And the key is hope.

Hope can revive man

Hope can kill man.

 

Everyone is warrior,

War means nothing but destruction.

But hope is there too.

 

Hospital is favourite of none.

But it offers you care when you need it.

So hope is there too.

 

Hope is a wide door...

We all live with an eye on hope.

Hope is life, hope is death,

Hope means peace, hope means friend.

 

Hope means what we dream of

This assures our heart...

Surrounded by many a lot unruly soldiers-

Hope is THE ULTIMATE EMPEROR.



are really beautiful poem dear...that's ur 1st poem??

I can't believe itWink

really meaningfulEmbarrassed

will comment on other poems asap

 

 


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A Rainy Desert


...At the time of bidding adieu I can't help being fascinated by her...actually not by her...her tweets full of pain made me stand speechless...

You're leaving me...

With a suppressed yearning in your eyes
Tell me my dream-man,tell me...
How could I live without you??
Though a floral barrier separates us-
We're the constant couple with the language of silence.
You're in my heart-in my soul...
How could I sever my heart from me??


I's trying to avoid the call of heart so boldly that I replied-

I'm a futile man with a ocean of dream
I've a conservative heart like a dark chamber
My eyes are seemed to be amazing but actually dead!
I's not the right choice for you...
Don't hope against hope my nymph.
Like a mirage... I fascinated you once upon a time
...that's all...
Don't fill your eyes with precious brine
Surely some1 awaits you with colourful butterfly.


So leave a completely finished man with the confusions of life & enjoy your own life free from his shadow.



baap re...most romanticEmbarrassed
thanx a lot fr sharingSmile
u r wonderfulClap

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Stand In Time's Eye


My dead heart doesn't know what to do...

It still wants to get alive with your warmth

But...the light of truth darkens its leafy desire...

...Now, it's the time to bid adieu forever...

Sunbeam or iceberg- what awaits us beyond this world??

 

  Belief is just an apparent word

Truth is so atrocious & loves to jeer...

I can't help depending on you

Though I want to sever."

 

 The night is foggy violet

Dew drops share a warm hug with the pearls

Untold words perform a silent cry...

What if the eyes're deprived??

Uncertain colourful brine of ours

Forms an ocean full of compassion &...conquest!

...Melodious pain is greater king than me...

 

  I & my part...my part & I

Seemingly to be apart...but...

Our relation lies in frozen tears-

Just like the rainbow & the rain...

A bright beam makes difference between us.

 

 Life is a beautiful thorn

Likely to be a soft thunderstorm...

Full of ablaze brine with pink fire!

If you're in the ocean of tears or happiness

Or even of beam or snow...

...The only certain thing is uncertainty...



so beautifully apt words...I'll give a reply poem.

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