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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 81)

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Beautifully penned and amazing description of thoughts of a lady and a person..I know its related to previous poems..And i like the continuation with this..Its like a beautifull poetic SS..

I like the title Love making hatred..And its really true in few cases..Just loved the way u expressed the feel,emotion and a fear of a person as well as lady..The lady's POV is pretty amazing and she is right..I like the statements of person most becoz its written very well..He is also right..

Now its really interesting to read further..
So great wok dear sister..
I am waiting for next Convo..
Thanx for PM

Prateek


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o...really??

my pleasureBig smile

human emotion colour is really complicated...it's just a try.

ohh...will update it asap.
but nxt 1 will be a tribute poem or some other.

thanks a lot & welcome as well.Hug

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 4:13am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!


thanks reSmile
it's okEmbarrassed...no need to say srry


Kobe Update Korchho ?

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!


thanks reSmile
it's okEmbarrassed...no need to say srry


Kobe Update Korchho ?


korchhi dara...kaal/porshu

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!


thanks reSmile
it's okEmbarrassed...no need to say srry


Kobe Update Korchho ?


korchhi dara...kaal/porshu


Okay...

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
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OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly writtenClap .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
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OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly writtenClap .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !



keno 1st 2 poem e bojha jaini j convo ta asole CGM & Helen??Confused
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Rumpu: so srry fr late reply...1st poetic corner r 2nd poem theke continue korchhi.

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